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Big Finish: Monthly Range #24

Doctor Who: The Eye of the Scorpion

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Egypt is in mourning. Pharaoh, the great God-King, is dead. The future of the Two Kingdoms of Egypt is shrouded in uncertainty as the Council of Priests debates the claim to the throne of Pharaoh's only heir.

Out in the deserts around Thebes, Egypt's capital, a warlord chief is assembling an army of mercenaries, waiting for just the right moment to strike at Egypt's heart.

But not all of Egypt's enemies are outside the city. What is the secret of the strange box discovered in the desert?

When the TARDIS arrives nearby, it has apparently been hijacked... by the Doctor?

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First published September 1, 2001

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2,565 reviews1,379 followers
May 12, 2021
A strong historical set in Ancient Egypt that successfully introduces new companion Erimem to the TARDIS.

The initial mystery of The Fifth Doctor and Peri arriving just before Princess Erimem's is about to be crowded Pharaoh despite the Time Lord not
having heard of a female ruler by that name isn't diminished with hindsight.

In fact the scenes with Erimem and Peri are enhanced as the Egyptians curious questions shows a great budding friendship between the pair.

The play also acknowledges that Peri is also a recent addition to the TARDIS too.
It's obviously a lot harder to slot a new companion in during the Fifth Doctor era and whist I understand some may think that it lessen the impact of The Doctor's sacrifice in The Caves of Androzani, it's always nice to have extra stories.
In any case there had already been a PDA and a previous Big Finish with Five and Peri, so was inevitable that there would be more.

Ironically the Sci-Fi elements are the weakest parts of this adventure, a pure historical focusing on the political aspect of this story would have been a strong enough to carry the whole drama.
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824 reviews97 followers
September 20, 2023
‘No one leaves the house of death alive…’

The fifth Doctor and Peri arrive in Ancient Egypt, just before Princess Erimen is about to be crowned Pharaoh, despite the Doctor not knowing a ruler by her name. However, the unexpected is something he is familiar with. It was a good historical story with a sci-fi element that wasn't too much to distract from a period drama. Where we were also introduced to a new companion- Erimen. I quite enjoyed this fifth Doctor adventure.
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208 reviews20 followers
July 4, 2023
"Egypt is in mourning. Pharaoh, the great God-King, is dead. The future of the Two Kingdoms of Egypt is shrouded in uncertainty as the Council of Priests debates the claim to the throne of Pharaoh's only heir.
"Out in the deserts around Thebes, Egypt's capital, a warlord chief is assembling an army of mercenaries, waiting for just the right moment to strike at Egypt's heart.
"But not all of Egypt's enemies are outside the city. What is the secret of the strange box discovered in the desert?
"When the TARDIS arrives nearby, it has apparently been hi-jacked... by the Doctor?"
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1,100 reviews50 followers
January 13, 2024
Now what's going on here? This time I did read the blurb before pressing play and I was definitely enticed by the last line, claiming that the TARDIS has been hijacked by the Doctor himself! Very exciting. 

Oops. All that excitement was a little premature. I didn't enjoy this one very much at all. Doc Five comes across as a bit too mean for my taste. The story has some interesting plot points but it was, in my opinion, overshadowed by the way the Doctor interacted with Peri. 

Doc One often gets spoken of as the grumpy Doctor, but I guess I never agreed with that. I always found Five and Six to be a bit meaner to their companions. Unfortunately this Doc Five tale had that same vibe for me. It's disappointing because I've found both Five and Six to be much more pleasant and likeable in the audiodramas so far. 

Oh well, onto the next one!
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181 reviews
December 17, 2023
Everything comes together in this rock solid historical story set in ancient Egypt.
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1,053 reviews13 followers
September 11, 2017
Quinto Dottore e Peri, mai amata particolarmente, si ritrovano nell'antico Egitto.
Con il Tardis che agisce in modo strano (non una novità). Un futuro Faraone, il cui nome non compare negli annali dei regnanti dell'antico Egitto e che, leggendo i vari commenti, sarà una futura companion. Un antagonista alieno, che non può mancare ma che non aggiunge nulla di particolare al tutto.
Avventura dal ritmo veloce, Peri non troppo antipatica e una ottima introduzione per Erimem, che sono curiosa di ascoltare in future avventure.
Divertente il finale e bella la trovata su chi sua il Re usato come modello per la Sfinge.
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645 reviews3 followers
January 22, 2021
Part1

ドクターがペリにターディスの中を案内していると、ターディスが突如おかしな挙動をする。ドクターが確認すると行き先の座標が変わっていた。
しかも記録によるとドクターの手によるものらしいがドクターに覚えはない。わからないままにターディスの外に出ると紀元前のエジプトだった。廃墟になった家を調べていると女性の悲鳴が聞こえた。馬車が暴走しているうえ、何ものかに追われていたのだ。追っては倒すことができたが、女性の乗った馬車の暴走が止まらずドクターが馬にのって追いかけ、助ける。女性はエリメムといい、時期ファラオと目されている存在だった。エリメムはドクターとペリにテーベまで送って欲しいという。テーベにつくと、エリメムは助けてもらったお礼にドクターとペリのために盛大な食事会を開催する。しかしエリメムの命を狙う暗殺者が乱入し、ドクターはエリメムをかばって毒が塗られた短剣で刺される。

Part2
毒によって意識を失ってしまったドクター。暗殺者が服毒自殺をはかったため、目的も誰の差し金かも不明なままだ。暗殺者が王の側室たちの住まいから侵入したのではないかと調べにいくが、側室の1人であるヴァレラが服毒自殺で他界。その喪に服しているという理由で中にはいれてもらえない。しかし、一刻も早く解毒剤の手がかりを得たいペリはエリメムの部下から宮殿と側室達の住まいを結ぶ秘密の地下通路があるときき、エリメムと共に行くことに。その道中、ペリはエリメムから長男と弟も毒で亡くなったときかされる。途中で大量のサソリと遭遇したペリとエリメムは慌てて逃げ出す。手当のために、ドクターは神殿に運ばれたときき、様子を見に行くが、ドクターの姿はそこになかった。

Part3
毒から回復したドクターは昏睡中に強いテレパシー波を感じとっていた。看病のために付き添っていてくれた神官のフェイムと発信源を目指す。ドクターとフェイムは奇襲攻撃を仕掛けようと潜んでいた部隊と黄金を見つけりが、部隊の隊長ヤニスに見つかってしまう。その頃、王位継承第1位の座にあるのはエリメムではなくヴァレラの息子であり、エリメムを王位につかせたいアントラネックがヴァレラを殺害したと、ホームシップが声を上げていた。アントラネックが逮捕されそうになった時、ドクターとフェイムが戻ってくる。ドクターはアントラネックの無実を主張するが、ホームシップは攻撃の手を緩めず、さらにフェイムこそが王になるべき存在だ指摘。しかし、ドクターはエリメムこそが王位継承者と奇跡を起こすことで証明してみせる。

Part4
牢獄から逃げ出した精神に寄生する生命体にペリが寄生されていることを見抜いたドクター。そのせいでホームシップ側に情報が筒抜けになっていた。ドクターはエリメムにそのことを正直に説明し、ペリを拷問にかけたり処刑しないよう説得する。ドクターからダーレクやサイバーマンの話や時空を駆け巡る冒険の話をきいたエリメムはドクターを信じ、さらに自分の運命も悟る。



感想
エリメムがドクターとペリと一緒についてくるとは思わなかったのでビックリ。このままコンパニオンの1人になるのかな?ドクターの記憶ではエリメムはエジプトの王にならない。でも、あのまま留まっていれば王になってたと思うので、ドクターと一緒に行ってしまったから王にならなかったということで、でも行く理由が”歴史上彼女は王にならないので“って、なんだか混乱する。あまり感情移入できなかったのはやっぱりペリのせいかなぁ。色々と面白くなる要素はたっぷりと詰まっていたのに、英語力不足でストーリーを把握するだけでいっぱいいっぱいだったのが残念。

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209 reviews2 followers
August 16, 2022
I enjoyed this more then I thought I would. The soundscape of the Egyptian desert is fairly effectively portrayed and makes for a newer and fresh location that I don’t think is seen often enough in Doctor Who. I’d have to say that the Fifth Doctor audios are usually the ones that I’m least excited for, especially here since I prefer his relationship and chemistry with Nyssa rather than with Peri, but I think the addition of Erimem really helps, in fact I’m very much looking forwards to No Place Like Home, a radio drama free on the Big Finish website about what Five and Erimem get up to when exploring the TARDIS for the first time. The villains here really aren’t very noteworthy at all, usual universe-conquering plans and desire to kill the Doctor bring very little fresh material to the table, however most of the side-characters I think stand out as rather interesting. Erimem’s guard (apologies, don’t expect me to remember any names) is great, and his voice really, really reminds me of Don Warrington’s Rassilon and Stephen Perring’s secondary villain is also a charm to listen to, I don’t even mind how similar the role is to his later portrayal as the Kro’ka in the Neverland storyline.
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Author 4 books10 followers
March 16, 2024
I really enjoyed this. It's a proper Ancient Egyptian run-around, with some political intrigue, some secret tunnels and a resolution that couldn't be more Doctor Who-y.

Erimem is a great new addition - it's a shame that she's been sort of lost to time in the grand scheme of Big Finish companions. Although the performance given is great, the fact that a white woman is playing an Egyptian has always been unwise, and obviously hasn't got any better in the twenty-three years (!) since this story was released. However, it's been good to see that Erimem has had a long, long life in books and adventures after the character's time on Big Finish, where this has been addressed.

Nicola Bryant's performance really stands out in this, and though I've always been a bit unsure about having some pre-Caves of Androzani stories (which is a very niche, fan-brain complaint!), this story more than makes it worthwhile. It's a bit grizzly at times for my liking, when I generally prefer my Doctor Who with a softer edge, but this is a really intriguing story. The strength of its characters kept me coming back to it, and I'm pretty sure I'll keep following (most of) this trio's stories.
869 reviews6 followers
March 21, 2023
A great listen this one for me, it is a nice historical period it draws on, and even if a couple of the characters are somewhat one dimensional, most characters featured here are quite well portrayed, lending a good feel to the overall setting.
It nicely avoids one of the tropes often seen with Doctor Who, of befriending historical figures who then distrust the Doctor, the Doctor gets to play a straight good guy pretty much throughout, and is a nice change of pace for the Fifth to be relatively successful at it too without the universe punishing him for being a nice guy.
The Doctor and Peri are in good form here, and the new recurring character introduced here, Erimem, is a great new character, get to have a good feel for her from the get go, a well rounded character that meshes well with the Doctor and Peri.
Doesn't avoid the use of sci fi elements in this historical one, and doesn't have famous historical figures in it, but is a good story all round, making for a really nice listen.
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219 reviews2 followers
March 29, 2024
Thought it was best to finally start the story of Erimem at the well at the start.

Kinda love how early in the story the Doctor says that he doesn’t remember Erimem as a Pharaoh and then later in the story it becomes perfectly clear why because she opted to travel with him.

Felt a lot like Game of Thrones / Dune like with the politics going on. It did feel a bit too Vna for my liking. Yes I know this was ancient Egypt we’re talking about but hearing about hookers / beheadings and topless woman isn’t really want I want to listen about, just felt odd for odd sake.
A really boring villain, would’ve been way better as a pure historical in my opinion.

It’s a bit of a weird one for me. I wouldn’t call this story essential per se even though it introduces a new companion but I listened to her stories out of order was never really confused or anything.

I mean I guess it’s fine to listen to while working out? I don’t know if that’s something.

Yeah it’s a fine story, nothing too special.
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59 reviews1 follower
July 20, 2024
The Sixth Doctor has received an audio original companion in Evelyn Smythe; the Eighth Doctor has travelled with Charley Pollard; now it is the Fifth Doctor’s pleasure to meet a new companion, performed powerfully by Caroline Morris. Erimemushinteperem, or Erimem, for short, is the soon to be crowned pharaoh of Egypt.

Young, inexperienced and sceptical of being a god living amongst men, Erimem is surrounded by those who would have her dead. Only the arrival of the Doctor and Peri saved her from certain death, but can they survive a day in the bloodthirsty council of Thebes, capital of Egypt? The Doctor is uncertain. Despite his incredible knowledge of Earth’s history, he has never before heard of a pharaoh with the name Erimem. Considering there were few female pharaohs, he really should remember. An alien discovery in the desert by a power-hungry priest might be just the match to light the powder keg that is Thebes.

The many-headed hydra that is the council of Thebes is thrown into chaos by the assassination attempt on Erimem’s life and by the rumours that there was another, male, heir that is the rightful ruler. Add a strange, psychic warlord amassing an army outside the city limits, and soon enough, the Doctor and Peri will be the ones needing protection. Particularly the Doctor, who unfortunately has a nasty encounter with poison early on in the story. Thus, Peri and Erimem are given free rein to investigate the assassination attempt on their own, while the Doctor undergoes his Time Lord-induced coma healing, as he’s done many times in the past.

Erimem is a brilliant character, distinct from any companion that came before. She is intelligent, shrewd, sceptical, earnestly loyal and brave, as any good companion should be. But her history, her ruthlessness, and the immense weight on Erimem’s shoulders sets her apart from everyone else. Often, Doctor Who will conveniently set aside all the nasty violence and attitudes present in historical tales, in an effort to avoid tackling those issues, or to simply make a historical figure more likeable. But Erimem, an original character with distinct ideals - however different or uncomfortable they may be - does not falter or shy away from being herself.

Erimem is comparable to Leela, except the Doctor was not a god among her people, no, Erimem is the god this time around! Erimem introduces the Doctor and Peri to the world of Thebes, and the many players and schemers among her council with the elegance and authority of rule. She is deeply appreciative of the pair’s help, and occasionally, they test her beliefs, but Erimem remains the one in charge - they are newer, more discerning members of her council, for now.


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226 reviews
May 19, 2019
My first introduction to Peri and I really liked her! I've wanted to see an American in the tardis so it was fun to hear an American accent among the British ones in this drama. I'm almost always a fan of anything set in ancient Egypt and since I've always been fascinated with Hatsepshut and Nefertiti so it should not be that surprising that I liked Erimim, too.

If anything, this reminded me how I've been wanting to watch the old Who episodes and say I will every summer. Maybe this will be the summer I do it.

I listened to it while grocery shopping so my mind wasn't wholly on it but it was relatively easy to follow along, even if I didn't hear everything that happened. It's always nice to hear two women go on adventure together. I'll definitely have to follow the adventures of the 5th doc and his companions in the dramas.
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333 reviews
August 15, 2025
By early BF standards, this one was pretty good. A very compelling introduction to Erimem, and even the sound design was pretty decent. I listened to this whilst also reading the script (The Audio Scripts Volume 2) and it was great to fun to see all the little changes and flourishes from text to audio, but that's besides the point for now.

I thought the story was brilliant, the casting was on point, and the Part Three cliff-hanger was a refreshing stroke of genius.

My only quarrel is that some of the actions aren't described clearly and the sounds don't make it clear what happened, such as when Fayum is tending to the Doctor and then is seemingly grabbed from behind, but it's not clear at first what actually happened.

All in all though, this is a strong recommendation.
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Author 5 books20 followers
May 6, 2023
If you thought Peri's time with the Fifth Doctor was short, think again! While not necessarily a classic Doctor-Companion pair, this story makes good use of their dynamic. Peri even gets to talk about how much better things are for women and common people in the future. Bringing in Erimem as a companion not from present day feels like a breath of fresh air. And the sound effects were pretty good all around.
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302 reviews27 followers
May 30, 2020
We stan a well-written Peri. She deserved so much better on the show.
Erimem is a fascinating character, wise and young at the same time, with an interesting background and personality. This was a wonderful introduction to her and I like how she and Peri clicked right away, they make a great duo.
The story itself is good too, and I'm always here for the 5th Doctor being a history nerd.
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44 reviews1 follower
March 26, 2022
3.5 stars with potential to go to 4. In the vein of all Who the Egyptians all have English accents. The story seems to draw upon a great number of references, Stargate, the Pathfinder audio series and oddly enough Pyramids From Mars type omnipotent being, will have to re listen to better understand the plot points.
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311 reviews10 followers
November 28, 2022
This is a well-written story set in ancient Egypt. The pacing is good, with a mix of history, mystery, and action. I liked that Peri had some time to be on her own, showing her courage and smarts (an no whining). This story also has the introduction of a new companion, the Egyptian Princess Erimem.
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1,910 reviews
June 26, 2021
I thought this was a great historical Doctor Who short story. I loved that Peri was more front and center where the action was concerned and this was also the story that had Erimem join team Tardis.
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454 reviews5 followers
March 28, 2025
This one is early Big Finish and a new companion introduction story. Erimem is a companion who has few stories and of the majority that I've listened to... I haven't liked many. Mainly cause I find many of them to be boring. This one? Yeah... Ancient Egypt isn't something I care for.
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Author 5 books7 followers
October 18, 2017
I loved this one. Erimem is a great addition to the Tardis gang.
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705 reviews6 followers
May 13, 2020
I had no idea that the Doctor had another companion. I guess there's all kinds of new things to discover in the audio and written Doctor Who adventures.
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597 reviews1 follower
September 16, 2020
The 5th Doctor and Peri. The first appearance of Erimem. All the intrigues of the ancient Egyptian court. A fun adventure.
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1,134 reviews4 followers
October 23, 2020
I really like aramem (can’t spell) I read them out of order so I already knew her but I still like getting to know her better. And the cat.
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60 reviews
October 31, 2020
Good story which starts as a purely historical story set in Egypt, introduces a new traveling companion for the Fifth Doctor
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369 reviews
April 21, 2023
The introduction of Erimem. Ancient Egypt. Political intrigue. An alien. What's not to love?
755 reviews2 followers
March 7, 2024
Properly convoluted and something I'd expect from a "Who" story
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93 reviews4 followers
January 2, 2025
3.5
doctor who should do more stories in ancient egypt
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366 reviews
December 9, 2025
3.5 Stars - the new companion is a great addition for this team and this story is fine. Not bad but not the most memorable either.
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271 reviews1 follower
July 19, 2024
⭐64%
⭐Fine! → Light recommendation!


Thworping through time and space, one adventure at a time!

The Eye of the Scorpion takes place in the fascinating era of Ancient Egypt, where Five and Peri become embroiled in pharaohs, political intrigues, and warring generals. The adventure bears a resemblance to The Aztecs. This is a pseudo-historical, though, with clear The Mummy vibes, as the villains use alien interference in their evil schemes.

This story is, of course, notable for introducing the third original Big Finish companion, the Egyptian princess Erimem, who joins Five and Peri on several adventures.

The opening minutes introduce Erimem in an exciting action scene, and the rest of the story follows her enemies' various attempts to prevent her from ascending the throne following the Pharaoh's death. The story gives Caroline Morris ample space to develop the character, nearly assuming the lead role from the Doctor as she guides Nicola Bryant through the middle parts of the story.

Erimem proves to be a strong-willed woman with a powerful influence, which makes her somewhat special among Doctor Who companions. She works very well alongside Peri, who is much more bearable here. Peter Davison falls to the wayside again.

Part 1 ends with a very classic cliffhanger.

The bulk of this story is fairly typical political scheming, with Erimem and Peri trying to figure things out while their enemies wait in the shadows. While it does a fine job of capturing the era and the characters, it takes a decent while to get going properly. There are a couple of intriguing action scenes and a handful of effective moments, though.

Part 3 effectively halts the momentum, primarily because of a protracted trial sequence that culminates in a conflict between Erimem's allies and enemies.
The problem is that it hints at alien interference a couple of times but doesn't do anything about it until Part 4 (and after the very random cliffhanger in Part 3).

Part 4 gets on track again and finds a way to incorporate the Sphinx into the plot. The story effectively captures the intensity of battle and the sense of exploration as the Doctor confronts the alien adversaries.

I appreciate the detailed explanation of the era's culture and customs, particularly during the banquet in Part 1, which serves as a bit of a cultural shock for Peri.

Yanis makes for a power-hungry villain with a terrific performance from Harry Myers, better known as Adrian Wall in the Bernice Summerfield audios. He’s a scheming snake in a similar vein to Tlotoxl from The Aztecs. Horemshep (played by Kro’ka voice actor Stephen Perring), in contrast, is more soft-spoken and doesn’t stand out quite as much.
The mind-controlling aliens don't hold much interest or receive the attention they merit.

Although Erimem joining the TARDIS isn't a particularly exciting moment, it has received good attention.
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