Sunlight and Shadow

Once Upon A Time - Cameron Dokey

by Cameron Dokey

A new spin on "The Magic Flute" by an acclaimed author!

In a time when the world was young and many things were quite commonplace that are now entirely forgotten, Sarastro, Mage of the Day, wed Pamina, the Queen of the Night. And in this way was the world complete, for light was joined to dark. For all time would they be joined together. Only the ending of the world could tear them apart. In other words, in the days in which my parents married, there was no such thing as divorce....

Thus begins the tale of Mina, a girl-child born on the longest night of the darkest month of the year. When her father looked at her, all he saw was what he feared: By birth, by name, by nature, she belonged to the Dark. So when Mina turned sixteen, her father took her away from shadow and brought her into sunlight.

In retaliation, her mother lured a handsome prince into a deadly agreement: If he frees Mina, he can claim her as his bride.

Now Mina and her prince must endure deadly trials -- of love and fate and family -- before they can truly live happily ever after....

Genres: Fantasy, Young Adult, Fairy Tales, Retellings, Romance, Fairy Tale Retellings, Fiction

186 pages, Mass Market Paperback

First published July 6, 2004

About the author

Cameron Dokey is an American author living in Seattle, Washington. She has a collection of over 50 old sci-fi and horror films. Cameron was born in the Central Valley of California. Cameron grew up reading classical literature and mythology, perhaps due to her father, Richard, being a teacher of Philosophy, Creative Writing, and Western Literature.

Cameron has one husband and three cats, and is the author of over a dozen young adult novels. Her favorite read is J.R.R. Tolkien's trilogy, "The Lord of the Rings." Her favorite TV show is "Buffy the Vampire Slayer."

When she's not writing, Cameron likes to work in the garden and is learning to quilt.

Reviews

[Ash · Rating 4 out of 5]

I figured out about half way through the book that the story is based on an opera by Mozart called "The Magical Flute". I vaguely remembered hearing the storyline, but for the most part this was new to me. Like the rest of the books in this series it's short and nothing is taken into to great depth, but I still seem to like them.
About half of the book is a just a series of histories of the characters to put up a picture of how things came about. The book kept me fairly interested from the beginning though. The bells that can bring you your one true love, the Queen of the Night and the Mage of the Day, the making of the flute, all these elements of the story interested me and I like how they all came together at the end. The viewpoint changes from one character to another throughout the book(although I think most of it is told by Mina). I thought that it would bother me, but it doesn't take too long to know who's telling the story. The characters were smart and funny, which I think is hard to do with a book like this. Sometimes humor can feel out of place or forced in writing like this, but it was done perfectly. Lapin(who by the way is a guy. When he first introduced himself I wasn't completely sure) and Tern(the prince) have a believable humor that I actually laughed at.
Some things that did bother me though was just how incredibly beautiful everyone was. Is it too much to ask for just one plain person? Also, I thought that Mina and Tern fall in love too fast. At least it's not because the other has "the most beautiful..."(fill in the blank with a feature such as face, eyes, hair, etc. You get the picture), which is usually the reason for people falling in love in fairy tales.
But like I said it's suppose to be a fairy tale and those are filled with people who have "the most beautiful..." and fall in love at first sight(which is not what technically happens in this story). Mostly I have the same complaint I have about the rest in the series; that it's too short. I still manage to enjoy it though and it reads like an original tale.

[Cara · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was totally unfamiliar to the tale of The Magical Flute, so I went into the story without any background. Later when I finished the book I found out that the author based if off an opera of the tale, which I found interesting. I'm guessing it works better in that form than in a novel. You'll see what I mean later.

This is the story of a girl named Pamina (shortened to Mina) who is the daughter of the night and day. Didn't that catch your attention? Well it worked for me; I was hooked. The beginning is mostly made up of background. Telling us what the significance of Mina's marriage means to the world, how the bells came about, and of course how the flute came to be. Later is when the real "action" starts. One thing that did stand out was how Statos (the one that Mina's father planned to marry her off to) isn't depicted as a total villain. He is a complex person, and I think personally he was a bit robbed of a good ending. It was still neat to see how everything worked out in the end, even if I was expecting more.

I loved the whole concept, but there is the problem of the length of the book. I'm not usually picky about that, but I would have like to have seen the story more fleshed out. The love between Mina and Tern is suppose to be a kind of love at first sight thing, but more so doing with sound than sight. The relationship between the two love birds didn't build itself enough. They could fall in love quickly (that almost always happens in fairly tales) but it would have been more realistic to see them struggle more. I do like Dokey's style though. It's unique and the changing of narrators didn't bother me one bit. At first I had to think about it, but it never took me very long.

Like I said earlier a wonderful concept, but the book should have been longer.

[Suzanna · Rating 2 out of 5]

I might get some hate mail for this but I really had a hard time with this book. It really bothered me that the narrator kept changing between chapters and you had to read a few sentences or paragraphs to figure out which person was narrating. Secondly, this book was supposed to be a remake of The Magic Flute but I thought it was more about the bells than the flute. Maybe this is truly the story of The Magic Flute- it's one I'm not entirely familiar with- but I just didn't think the story really flowed very well. Thirdly, I'm not sure why Lapin was able to summon Mina's true love by playing the bells just because he was thinking about her... that was weird to me because that's not how the bells ever worked in the past. Oh, and I'm surprised that the two trials at the end of the book only took one chapter to write when that was sort of the climax of the whole thing, and then how Lord Sarastro just concedes so easily. Call me crazy but this was hard for me to finish because I was so bored/confused half the time about who was speaking.

[Catherine · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a new “fairy tale” for me, as I am unfamiliar with the story of the Magic Flute.

[Valerie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Here is the thing; I liked it. Its a happy, hopeful, and fun. I like that the main girl was brave, smart and all that. What I didn't like about her was that she was beautiful, now I know how that sounds but hear me out. I can take beautiful people being the main characters, and I can take other characters being beautiful too, but its mentioned how beautiful everyone is all the time. If Dokey would've eased off a bit it wouldn't have annoyed me so much.
The love in the story I thought left something to be desired. It seemed like "Oh yes I love you(Period)." Could I ask WHY? But that wasn't what bothered me so much as -again- how often the author mentioned it. I've never seen the words "love" and "heart" put so many times down in one little book.
Now that I'm done rambling I should say what the good parts were. Like I said earlier the protagonist ,Mina, is smart and brave. Tern is honorable and chivalric. What I like the most was the love of the mother and daughter. I like the story in general and how it all turns out in the end. Its predictable but that didn't bother me.

[Laurie · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really, really enjoyed this book! I'm not familiar with the story of the Magical Flute but this was fantastic! The story is told from several of the main characters POV which was a really fun twist on storytelling in general. I've read several reviews where people didn't like that and/or had a hard time knowing who was speaking next. For me it made the story a little exciting. I liked not knowing who was going to continue the story in the next chapter. FUN! It's well developed with charming, witty characters and an unbelievably quick read. It took me on a magical, lyrical journey. I loved it. So far my favorite in the series.

[Samantha · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really loved this reread this time through. Yes, so many different perspectives and narrators make it hard for me at times, but the ending is so good!!

[Mel Leigh · Rating 4 out of 5]

As I’m slowly making my way through this series, it’s very easy to say the books are either a hit or a miss. This one was definitely a hit!

I had to read the plot summary for “The Magic Flute” before reading the book so I could do a proper compare and contrast. Although quick, it doesn’t leave out any important plot points or fee rushed in a lot of places. It’s a good steady pacing that doesn’t get boring during any parts either.

The way the story was changed to adapt to Dokey’s version worked wonderfully. And I think made a great fairy tale adaption since it’s actually an opera, not a story it’s based on.

There was only one thing that I didn’t like but then again, wasn’t too bad and easy to figure out. As much as I liked the narration being switched from different characters to see different points of view, it was a little frustrating that you’d have to get a paragraph or two in before you knew who was talking, as there no other indication otherwise. However, it was quickly picked up and not too much of a bother.

Very well done and definitely one of the best ones in the series so far.

[Hayalshamsi · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5

[Dlora · Rating 5 out of 5]

This fairy tale retelling of "The Magic Flute" is better than the plot of the actual operetta on which it is based. Of course, the opera has the magic of Mozart's music to cover up a less than stellar plot. But I loved Dokey's story about truth and love told in both a classical high-minded noble romance of Mina and Tern and the humorous, realistic romance of the sidekick character, Lapin with Gayla. But what made it a five-star book were the wonderful ideas and apt comments that swelled my heart and delighted my mind. This is a story about mind versus heart, light versus dark, male versus female, duty-bound versus choice, order versus chaos. I found ideas scattered throughout that were written beautifully and struck a chord of agreement. Here's a few: "I had misjudged hell. It was stronger and more terrible than even I had imagined, for I had thought it was a place that was simply external. I knew now that it was not, for the seeds of hell are sown in each and every heart. Hell is pain. An agony which goes on forever. And you choose it yourself." When someone is disappointed in love, he has two options: "He can pull in his breath and expel it in a laugh, thereby ensuring that his heart will mend and his life will go on. Or he can pull in a breath and expel it in a sigh, a signal that his heart will remain broken for as long as it continues to function." "If you don't know where you've already been, how can you know which way to go?"

[Sabrina · Rating 1 out of 5]

Way way to many changes to POV all without telling you who is speaking, sometime it changes from paragraph to paragraph. All the characters are uninspired and with all the changes I didn't care about any of them. Also for being a retelling of the Magic FLUTE there was surprisingly little flute action, it was all about some bells. The logic in this book went out the window within the first chapter or two as well. Apparently anything goes in this land. Also the dialogue, very poorly done. Are we in ancient times or modern, pick a speak pattern and stay with it. One of the characters was written in the style of a bratty teen from this decade who if I met in real life I would have given a solid wack or two for talking to me like that. Also I get that this is a fairy tale series but all this instalove has got to stop or at least slow down. A song of the heart calls you to someone (you are 16 and know yourself so well that you are set for life, mus be nice). You see an image of this person, not the person just the image and know that you will love this person forever and do anything for them. Meet person and risk death, get happy ever after. I am kinda sorry I wasted my time on this story.

[Esther · Rating 3 out of 5]

I think I am beginning to tire of this author's style a little or the set up of this series. I still thought some of the writing was beautiful and liked the new details and development of the story but her endings never have as much development as the beginnings of her stories. This seems to be due more to the series wanting to keep the stories short than the author.

In this book towards the end the main character finally meets her prince and after a couple hour acquantaince they declare their undying love for each other. This is immediately put to the test to see if each are willing to die for it. It turns out their couple hours of true love is strong enough and has been of long enough duration to make a magical song that overcomes death and hell. I'm not usually a cynic but I felt like one while reading this book. Sometimes I have a hard time buying into storylines like this but that is just the way fairy tales are, I know.

I also wanted to know more about Statos and what happens to him. I feel for him more than almost anyone else in the book.

[Michelle · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed this book as I have with all of Cameron Dokey's books. This one is a bit different in that it is based off of an opera by Mozart rather than a fairy tale. It is a bit far fetched that within a few hours love could be formed that could withstand the challenges of hell, but I don't think we read fairy tales or listen to operas for their realism. :) It is certainly more about escapism and entertainment, I believe. I enjoyed the book and recommend it. My only criticism is that I would have liked another hundred pages or so. There were characters that I was interested in and story lines that were not pursued. I imagine this is more due to staying close to the opera's plot line than anything else. I do like this line from the end, "But I think the truth is that neither Tern nor I needs a fixed place, as other people do, for the true place of each is in the heart of the other." I think that is a good description for marriage, its love and commitment, which should overpower pretty much everything else in your life.

[Spencer · Rating 3 out of 5]

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It was definitely a cute story, but it doesn't go very much into depth in the story at all (which, is understandable since it's less than 200 pages long). I've enjoyed other stories in this series more, but I've had more of a background on those stories. For instance. Her Belle: A Retelling of Beauty and the Beast story was obviously about Beauty and the Beast and I have read/watched hundreds of hours worth of that particular tale, so I didn't need much depth to the story itself. Unfortunately for me, I have absolutely no reference in mind about the opera this was based off of. However, even without that, I did enjoy the story. I just think I would have liked it more if I had understood a little bit more about it, the characters, the motivations.

[ⓘsⓐbεℓℓⓐ · Rating 5 out of 5]

This Tale is like no other! You will need to be smart to understand the story, but I don't think I need to worry about you! The story will make you believe in other magics of the world.
What happened when light joined with darkness? As you might discover, when the world was still young and all the whys and whats of this planet was still being decided, darkness was joined by light. This was a time when dicorce was not even considered. Makeing these two unseperatable. Pamina and Mage of the Day made a child together, who would have more on her tiny shoulders than any sixteen year old. For a prophecy for told that the daughter of the darkness and light will decide the outcome of the world. Who ever she decides to merry will make the earth surounded wih wither darkness or light. Now, which one do you think the Earth will be surrounded my?

[Janell · Rating 2 out of 5]

As with other Once Upon a Time books, this was an interesting take on this story. Since this is YF and the series is very simplistic, I didn't expect great character or plot development, but this one seemed even weaker in these areas than expected.

Plus, the writing style drove me crazy. The book is written in first-person narrative but the narrator changed almost every chapter and sometimes even in the middle of the chapter. I counted at least five different narrators. Often I felt like I was listening to a group of teenagers arguing! Since I got enough of that as a mother, it was certainly not enjoyable to experience it again in a book. And it was constantly necessary to pause and figure out who was talking which interfered with the continuity of the story. Very annoying, to say the least.

[Tiffany · Rating 4 out of 5]

Like her other books, this was another first person narrative; however, the point of view kept changing between the different characters. One character would pick up telling the story where the other character left off. It was a fun change, but a bit confusing at times, especially at one particular point in the story when a new character began narrating. Well, from the beginning of the chapter I had envisioned this person as being female until I came to the sentence, "Selfish, foolish boy." I was a bit confused ("Boy? What boy?) until I realized the person I had for 15 pages mentally pictured being a girl was actually a boy, which as you can imagine was quite startling. But luckily I figured it all out before the story took any type of romantic turn. That would have been startling indeed.

[Megan Johnston · Rating 4 out of 5]

Cameron Dokey can be funny?!?!?!

This book might be the biggest surprise of the year (although I guess it's too early to tell). It made me laugh, it made me roll my eyes, it made my jaw drop. It was going to be a five star read but the last 40 pages or so were a bit of a drag and it should have been the most exciting part. I'm still going to need to buy a physical copy for my collection though.

[Janis · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really like Cameron Dokey's writing style. I also really like this book because it is based on the opera, 'The Magic Flute,' by Mozart, which is probably the only opera I've ever really liked. It's got all the magic, love and drama you could want in a fairytale-like story. My only complaint was the jumping around of narrator from character to character and trying to figure out who it was each time. It probably would have been easier not to have it from a narrator's point of view at all, but then it wouldn't have been as clever, I think. Still, a great story and a nice quick read.

[Susan Phelan · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is a reworking of "The Magic Flute" told from a number of viewpoints as a narrator directly to the reader.
I found the POV switches very annoying. Most of the time I didn't know who was speaking until the bottom of the first page of a chapter, keeping me disoriented. And the constant switching left little time to know or care about any of the characters.
It did bring up some very interesting things to think about on marriage and life and was an easy read.

[Erin · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a fun book. I liked the storyline and the characters were interesting. Three stars because it was a little hard for me to get into and I didn't like the way the perspective changed so often. It made it too confusing for me, especially because I have to stop reading every few paragraphs to go help my kids. It would have been easier to read if it was written in third person. Or if the voice change only happened at the start of a new chapter.

[Patrice · Rating 4 out of 5]

I think it's a little campy when the author's characters directly address the reader in fiction. I did,however, like that the story was told in first person from several different characters. It was a unique way to experience each character in depth and provided a variety of interpretations on the events. I think this story is a fresh, reinterpretation of The Magic Flute and I'm glad that I had the opportunity to read it.

[NLillebro N. L. · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was SOOO good!! 😍
I love the story and how it is told, it feels like an old tale about gods and how the world was created or came to be as it is 🌕☀️🌍

The only thing I don’t like is that it wasn’t clear when the perspective of the story changed between the characters, that was a bit confusing, but not enough to ruin the story for me. 💜

[Lucy · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Darkness may cover light, but that is not the same as putting it out. Wheras, to overcome darkness, all light need do is to exist."

"They say opposites attract.... the trouble is between attraction and understanding there can be a very great distance."

[Rachel · Rating 4 out of 5]

I've never heard the story of the magic flute before. It was interesting and engaging. Perhaps because I didn't know the story I didn't feel like it was too short/abrupt as I've felt about the other books in this series.

[Ali Toland · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed this book but it was slightly hard to follow, it jumped between characters every chapter and at some points I had to go back to the beginning of the chapter to remember who was narrating. The story was very good but if it was written in a more cohesive manner I would have enjoyed it more.

[Ella · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love this book, it never gets old! I've probably read it three or four times since I've bought it about a year ago

[Courtney Gruenholz · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 rounded up to 3 stars for GR.

I have this on my arts shelf because this book is actually not a retelling of a fairy tale.

The Magic Flute was an opera composed by Mozart. The story was originally set in Ancient Egypt and was a whole lot different...even Dokey acknowledges that it was very misogynistic and racist.

I concur.

It has had some film and TV adaptations and of course was part of the film story about Mozart's life, Amadeus. I watched that film in high school film studies but I saw The Magic Flute on TV where it was presented in an ABC Saturday morning special more like a standard fairytale fantasy cartoon.

It had Mark Hamill in it as the hero FYI...

Trying to turn The Magic Flute into a fairytale worked there...but not really here in Sunlight and Shadow despite Dokey's best efforts.

For one thing, it is told in first person and the narrator keeps switching from one character to the next. Sometimes, it is easy to tell which one and other times...confusing as heck.

There are also some character changes in names, relations and even added characters. Some of those actually work better than in the plot of the original opera but others felt...unnecessary. If you are into opera or ballet, this may ruffle some of your feathers.

I won't go into the plot of the opera but streamline the book's plot...

In an ancient time, a man and a woman are wed. The man is named Sarastro who is known as the Mage of The Day and the woman is named Pamina, Queen of The Night. Guess how that relationship works and how it changes when they have a child, a daughter who is also named Pamina.

The child goes by Mina and she is to be raised by her mother until the day she turns sixteen and then she will go and live on her father's side of the castle on the mountain. Mina will then be wed to a man that her father has chosen for her.

Sarastro is not supposed to come for Mina at night but at the dawn yet...he doesn't do that. Soon as it turns midnight and is still dark, Sarastro and his men come and drag Mina away to the displeasure and sorrow of the Queen of The Night.

Mina knows a little about her father but is not happy that he has been raising another child in her absence. The other girl is named Gayna and she was the child of a forrester who worked for Sarastro and was killed when the child was five...neither one is fond of the other.

Mina also is not fond of the fact that her father will choose a husband for her and Gayna that Mina is treating her blood father so awfully like a spoiled brat. The matter is also complicated because Sarastro's choice for Mina's husband is to be his apprentice, a young man named Statos, of whom Gayna is in love with.

Having felt betrayed by Sarastro, The Queen of The Night has her servant Lapin prepare to find her someone who will rescue her daughter. Lapin comes from a family who possess enchanted bells that call forth different animals where the song will lead to their true love eventually and twenty-four year old Lapin's talent is for calling all birds.

The playing, which Lapin does out of his love for Mina whom he has known since she was a baby, reaches the ears of a young prince whose name is Tern...like the bird. Tern comes from a far off land and he is out on a quest to find his own path after his younger brother passes a test to be the future king.

The night Sarastro took Mina, The Queen of The Night's rage and sadness brought forth a storm and a bolt of lighting split the great oak in the courtyard of Tern's castle. The heart of the tree was still strong that the king had both of his sons choose a side to fashion an object from their inner hearts.

Arthur forged a spear and Tern fashioned a flute. The flute played a song so sweet that it gave his people tears thought even to move Death and Tern saw the face of the girl meant to be his true love and in his ears, a melody of bells.

Pretty much everything else comes from that point in love at first sight, listening to your heart, following your own path and not leaving your destiny to fate...all of that jazz. Jealousy, loyalty, strength of character and fighting for your happy ending which is all well and good and much more streamlined than the opera plot.

I tried to love Sunlight and Shadow but I just ended up liking it...not hating it...just indifference maybe? I think it had to do with all of that first person narration flipping us all over the place and the fact that I was imagining the cartoon plot going around in my head.

It at least had singing in it if not actual words from the libretto but kept the music Mozart composed...

I don't know of any other book adaptations so perhaps it is just as well to leave it to the stage and screen and not the written word.

[Clara P · Rating 5 out of 5]

The book I read was Sunlight and Shadow, it was written by Cameron Dokey. With the Queen of the Night and The Sage of the Day fight for their daughter, or will she choose her own path. The main character in this book is Mina her parents are Queen of the Night and The Sage of the Day. The Queen of the Night watched over all in the night and the Sage of the day watches over all that the sun touches. Minas parents made a deal when she was born that her mother would keep her until her sixteenth birthday then her father would have choice of who she marries. Before it was time for Minas father to take Mina away her father came in the night and took her. Mina finds a way to run away and find her true love.

This book is a romance book. This book is so thrilling I love it. This book is a fairytale book. This is valuable to me because I admire these people they find the true meanings of life. They find what their purpose is what they are here for. tHey find their true love. They go on daring journeys they explore. They find a way to love everything around them. They are happy loving people who like to show their love on the outside. They are independant, brave, strong, amazing people. These books help me to think more happy and love my neighbors more. I loved everything about this book. In this book Mina is traded with her parents I would not like that. To not know her father for all her life until it is time for her to get married. Mina’s father doesn't care if Mina doesn't love the boy he chooses for her marriage, he wants to control the world through the man that Mina will marry. Mina doesn't really have a chose in this at all. I love this books It makes me happy. When I start reading I can’t put it down. In this book to be able for Mina to marry her true love they both had to walk through Hell and not be harmed. “Hell was close. The turn of the very next corner brought an end to the passage. Here, in spite of all my joy, all my desire to be brave, I stopped short. Before us, a great lake of rippling flame spread out. So vast, it completely filled my vision, even when I turned my head from side to side. It had no end, this lake of flame. This is the worst thing about hell, I thought. Not the heat, and not the pain, though these were horrible enough. But most horrible of all was that it had no end. Once hell takes you, you are there forever. There is no way out.” This was the part that was so thrilling I thought because they explored new, dangerous things.


This book really makes me think about my life and they blessings that i have been granted in all my life time. Mina doesn't have a father for all her lifetime than when t is at the age for her to get married he wants her to come live with him. I thought that that was crazy. That would be heartbreaking if I was in Mina’s place. I wouldn’t be able to stand next to me father in that situation and not slap him in the face. I love this book. I love thes kind of books it makes me think about people that don’t have everything that I have.

[Eurydice · Rating 1 out of 5]

I enjoyed Dokey's retelling of the 1001 Arabian Nights and I've always liked The Magic Flute, so when my friend recommended this book, I bought it right away. It's been sitting on my bookshelf for a while, but I finally pulled it out to read.

Unfortunately, it fell through. The plot itself was interesting and I was excited to see how it would play out. I also have a soft spot for multiple pov's, although they're hard to pull off. However, the characters were all one dimensional and two much insta-love. Now, insta-love is usually "oh we saw each other and were immediately attracted and we kissed within a couple chapters." That is already rather irritating, but in this story, Dokey took it even further. At her first sight of Tern, Mina says, "I think that you love me." (It might be a couple words off, because I put the book away before I wrote this review whoops)

And Tern proceeds to agree and ask if she does. Thankfully, she didn't say yes, but she does say that she "might" and that she "loves the color of (his) eyes." Oh God, want to know what happens next? They have an entire discussion about their eyes. Tern's are apparently "all the colors of the world" or something and Mina's are "of the heavens." While I do understand "the magic bells" are supposed to draw your true love, it was just too much for a first meeting. Lappin (my bunny of a spirit animal) sees this and leaves to "give them some space." And he plays his loneliness on those bells and brings Gayna to him. Well. Alright.

Everything just happened so quickly. The trial? One chapter. One. Bloody. Chapter. Apparently hellfire can be beaten down by birds and Death just smiles at you and moves to the side if you play a song that expresses your knowledge that it's inevitable.

Honestly, I was going to give this two stars, but after writing this review, I realized there really wasn't anything I liked about this book. The writing was "pretty," but it felt kind of cheap against the plot and character development.

One last complaint I had: Why give Satto a single chapter in his point of view to present him as just a boy who wanted to "love and be loved"? If anything, I would rather have had the chapter in which he rejects the trial and feels betrayed in his view than Lappin's. I mean, Dokey gave him the chance to introduce himself as something other than a plain villain, but then when his most controversial action takes place, I have no idea what his thoughts are. Just a bit disappointing.