Overall, this not a bad story, though I had some issues with it. I tried to find info on whether a meteor hitting the atmosphere could cause an EMP; it appears the chances of this are miniscule and any ionization would be very small, certainly not able to disable electronics on a widespread basis. Ryan is a decent good guy with a lot of survival skills, but the overall tone is very YA, esp the attraction between him and Kelsey. That attraction would definitely occur in such a situation, but seems to consume a large part of the story. I was a bit surprised that a princess cheerleader type would not be more concerned about lack of hygiene than possibly drooling in her sleep. Some parts of the story seemed predictable but reasonable and it ends on an interesting cliffhanger. The editing, however, really brought the story down. There were missing words, malformed sentences and many instances of misspelling, including that of characters' names. I spent some time trying to figure out what a guy with goutte was. Since goutte is a heraldic word, I thought maybe the fella had a case of gout, but finally think it was meant to be goatee. I am one that is kind of bothered by poor editing, so am not sure if I will continue, though I am slightly interested in the outcome of the cliffhanger.