So Kate debuted again and still managed to get it wrong. How does an author do that? It’s quite interesting and I guess concerning. I read Beyond The Blood a couple of years ago I think it was, and it was a mess to put it simply. This was a mess but a tad better, nevertheless still unbearable. When I came across Kate a few months ago whilst on TikTok, her new book was promising. She had made a couple of videos and it sounded okay. I wanted to read it thinking she was so much better and that I would be satisfied.
Kate had clickbaited her own book. She told us it would give us said trope but in fact it wasn’t near to that. She claimed it was a dark romance but this wasn’t fair at all. It was like any other book and served nothing. It’s meant to be mafia but nothing was given. No backstory, no context, literally nothing. I never thought the mafia was this boring, because this book never gave the thrill or excitement of the fictional mafia world we love to read about. There are small authors on Wattpad who are doing better than this absolute shit show. Mafias have so many aspects and this is just terrible that I can’t even tell you that side of the plot.
Kaya was meant to be a badass character who was this mafia princess who called and made the shots, a sting woman who never let anyone walk over her, but in reality, everyone walked over her. She had a stalker for crying out loud, and at the first moment decided having sex with him would solve it all. The female lead was just annoying, she was lazy and made me want to rip my eyes out. Her monologues were just boring and she had no other interests at all. I can’t even tell you how old she was, or what her favourite colour was, or anything. I have read the dark verse and I was sensing some Morana vibes, and maybe a little Penn from Sinners duet. Can this author be original?? Kaya was also an awful friend, she was an awful breathing thing. I could sit and complain about this character all day, but I have more to say about other things in the book.
And what’s his name again…I have forgotten the male lead's name, that’s how irrelevant he was. He acted like he was some old stalker but he was such a pussy. The author thought he was some sort of genius throwing around gold dice, please…who does that? It sounds like another Sinner’s anonymous duet or some made series man. And the dice played no part in the storyline, what are you trying to do? Make him look cooler because yet again you can’t build a personality for a fictional character. It’s so easy to make them attractive and hot, but there’s nothing nice about him.
Together, the interactions and conversations and all of it were so boring. I was falling asleep. I hate them together, I sometimes felt like it was siblings having a sexual relationship because that’s how it was. And Kaya let this man carry on…WOMAN YOU ARENT FITTING INTO YOUR CHARACTER?!!!!! The little lion nickname was just not it because she was honestly a damn puppy. A blind one too, because that guy was a red flag he low-key made Joe from you a nobody. The smut was just jarring, she really wrote “you squeeze my cock so well” HAHAHAHAHA WTF ARE YOU FIVE??? I’m laughing right now.
Erm…what else happened? I honestly can’t remember anything because nothing was significant for me to remember. The daddy issues and trauma were just like any other story I have read. It’s nothing special and I hope Kaya recovers from this trauma in the future I guess…? And her brothers, B O R I N G. And I quite frankly don’t give a damn about their books or that other girl in the book, Sloane, Sasha, Sienna. I have no idea.
The plot twist. Kate wanted to pull a Rina Kent put but massively failed. What stupid twist was that? I never saw it coming, but it was just so dumb that even when it happened, it wasn’t great.
Finally, I just want to say it wasn’t so bad. The writing style has improved but isn’t ideal but it’s okay. I wish Kate the best and I hope the next book is better, I hope her next series is better and I just hope she gives another genre a chance as she could give it more justice. I hope my review wasn’t too harsh but it’s honest and just the truth.