To begin with, I think it is only appropriate that I admit to being a fairly avid reader of John Sandford over the years, a fan of both of his Lucas Davenport “Prey” and Virgil Flowers series, which easily captured my imagination. Davenport and Flowers are perfect opposites, providing a great compare and contrast personalities, as well as approaches to investigative work.
Now, for the second time, Davenport’s adopted daughter, Letty, continues to take her own turn in the lead role of her own adventures. When we are reintroduced to Letty “Dark Angel” a year following her reputation building shootout in Pershing, Texas, she is working for Homeland Security on a stakeout of a FEMA warehouse where a group of employees are stealing heavy equipment and selling it to a Chinese company for some serious fringe benefits. During the mission, Letty gets partnered with Cartwright, a strong sharpshooter and fellow agent from another unnamed government agency. Afterwards, they become shooting partners and friends.
Then Letty’s is called in to visit with her unofficial boss, Senator Colles, and other government officials who are drawn to her special skills and want for a dangerous assignment. Before she knows it, Letty is working with both Homeland Security and the NSA to infiltrate a hacker group going by the name of Ordinary People. They aren’t just any hacker team. They successfully got into the Russian train system and caused enough havoc that they were able to get a fifty million ransomware Bitcoin payoff.
It now appears that Ordinary People are currently in Southern California looking at striking again, this time shutting down the natural gas systems in different parts of the United States, and risking economic havoc for more ransomware rewards. Letty’s job, along with her reluctant NSA programmer partner and slob named Baxter, is to head off to So-Cal posing as free-spirited programming rebels for hire.
Needless to say, Letty and Baxter have severe personality differences, but that is only the first challenge they face. As they try to make connections with members of ordinary People, things immediately go haywire. People get killed. People are following them. And it doesn’t take long for Letty to realize the officials sending them on this mission were hiding things from them. Important things, like finding out that the hacker team is not their only enemy. There is a much more fearful one that will quickly move to permanently eliminate them. Even with the help of Cartwright being added to their twosome may not be enough to keep them alive…
My upfront view is that I enjoyed this book; however, to a lesser degree than Letty’s first adventure. Let me shar what I liked first, and then I will address the reasons why I just didn’t care for it as much as the first one.
There are some interesting aspects of Letty serving in a lead role. I appreciate that Sanford treats her as a complex, intelligent, and physically capable character, with depth and unique background that molds her into a strong female protagonist. Although she is still young and learning, Sanford gives her two different partners in this outing that contrast well with her personality and lifestyle. Cartwright serves as Letty’s own version of Spenser’s classic partner “Hawk”, providing self-contained violence and a sharp wit to match. Baxter, on the other hand, is brusque, whiny, and obnoxious, yet challenges Letty in her understanding of men and relationships. Cartwright and Baxter balance Letty’s aggressive style by letting her go and supporting her actions, and yet gently pull her back and teach her things that she still needs to learn. I really enjoyed the development of Letty and Cartwright’s relationship.
There were also several fun moments in this one in which Letty and her partners outthink and out-maneuver the bad guys. I appreciated how Sandford put them into tight situations and they creatively and/or skillfully got themselves out. As a writer, this is one of his strengths.
In addition, like her first outing, Sanford again provides Letty with the opportunity for adventure and development. He creates enough conflict and a dangerous adversary to challenge her face, and yet still allow her to learn the necessary lessons she needs along the way. The bad guys were bad, but not bad enough for her to outthink and strategically outflank them (along with governmental resource support). This is a tough thing for a writer to balance. She is still in her twenties and just gaining experience in her early career, even is she is in many ways (her stepfather) Lucas Davenport version 2.0. His influences on her are so much stronger than I previously thought. They both have a strong hunger for justice, for hunting down criminals, and a willingness to bend the law if needed for a righteous cause. I must admit that I like watching another Davenport take center stage as a young pup and blaze her trail in law enforcement.
On the other hand, there were several things that were less enjoyable than the previous book. As I mentioned, there was more time spent on Letty’s relationships and interaction with her partners, which was cool. However, I wish there had been more time spent on developing and strengthening the primary hacker storyline. Unlike the last book in which it felt like Letty’s life was in real danger several times and she was physically drained, I never felt like she was at risk of being hurt in this one. She was always one step ahead of the bad guys throughout, from beginning to end. I am not even sure she sweated at any time.
I have mentioned this previously and it has become a bit of a repeat. Over the last several Davenport and Letty books, the bad guys have been anti-government, political revolutionary-minded groups, ranging from racist supremacists to downright hicks with hatred and guns. One of the problems with using them as bad guys is that they don’t come across as organized, financially backed, or powerful. The other problem is that Letty spends more time running around and connecting the clues and investigation dots with lesser characters at the cost of building up the bad guys and making them more impressive and intimidating.
There was a lot of running around in the first half of the book before the plotline really got moving along. Although I like how Letty was thinking and analyzing what was going on during the investigation, too much time was spent running from one location to another having heavily detailed discussions about firearms, and violent shootouts. What was missing was building sustainable tension and a strong plotline that demanded my attention. I never doubted the outcome of the concluding shootout and it felt a bit anti-climactic.
Then there was the last five pages that came out of left field and came across as quite awkward – interesting, unexpected, but very awkward. It was so disjointed to the rest of the book and happened so fast that it lacked the proper development it deserved. It felt way out of character and I found myself shaking my head and mouthing what the heck? No spoilers here other than to say, it was a rather extreme behavior for Letty and it felt like there was a lot of situational context and explanation missing. It's almost like Sandford lost a bet and had to write those last five pages to force in a character action to make other people happy.
Having said all that, I am giving this 3-stars because the enjoyable things outweighed the constructive feedback and weird ending, for now. But if these issues continue in future books, my ratings on Sanford novels will start dipping again. Let’s hope that’s not the case.