One or two inconsistencies, but an enjoyable story!
There's maybe a couple of inconsistencies in this story. (Example: Someone had notified the main land that Kaida's dragon emerged, but no one knew what kind. A little bit later, it says that they heard she was a Plasma dragon.) I noticed another one, but maybe no one else will notice it, it's a somewhat small thing anyway, so I won't bother mentioning it.
Considering that's the biggest issue I noticed, this book is good! It's a bit quicker paced than the previous book since everything was laid out, so it was able to get to the main plot. A war on the horizon, a dark dimension threatening to take over, hesitant or outright stubborn mates not wanting to mate... you know, all that good stuff.
I'm excited to hop into the third book!
There's going to be series after this one involving each of the friends Kaida made (seemingly starting with Remy, according to the blurb on Amazon), but I hope most things are resolved in this series so I don't have to wait to read all of the others!