I don't even know where to start with this, so I'll just start with the protagonist.
Kalliope. Allie. This nickname threw me off the entire time, because Calliope in greek is pronounced Kuh Lai Uh Pee. Not Callie Oh pee. So right off the bat this book began to drive me bonkers, because the nickname comes from a mispronunciation of a name.
[insert benoit blanc it's just dumb gif]
Kalliope is a whole nothing of a character. I don't know what she likes. What she wants. Who she is. Throughout the entire book there's no development aside from her... awakening powers. And she gets mad. There's no arc. She's extremely flat, so there's no room to do any growth. And that goes for every character in this book, really.
The only other character in this book worth mentioning by name is Asmodeus/Kalav/Kal. The way he talks makes him feel like a knock-off of Astarion from Baldur's Gate 3, but without any of the depth or development. He doesn't act like Astarion, doesn't have the same level of depth at all. There's a hamfisted narrative about being accepted and name changes, which... doesn't work for me. How regularly do cis people ask to go by a different name and have 0 probem? It's such a normal thing. A cis man changing his name just isn't a big deal. But it's written as if its supposed to be a trans narrative and it just doesn't work.
All the other characters are just a variety of angels and demons who, again, are flat. There's no reason to care about them, since their only purpose is so stand there and tell the protagonist how amazing she is. She's amazing. She's smart. She's special. I genuinely wish I'd counted how many times she's praised for no reason--this gives Alex Aster a run for her money.
So much of this book reminds me of Hot and Cold by Katy Perry. They fight they break up, they kiss they make up. It's just back and forth forced romantic drama that drove me insane. When they've known each other for a day they're calling each other things like "my love" and "my sweet boy" and even in *established relationships* that just feels weird for this writing style. Every time I saw Kalliope call Asmodeus her "Sweet boy" I felt like I was reading about a mom.
...Which, uh. Kalliope is the reincarnation of Asmodeus' mother. Adoptive mother, but the mother referred to Asmodeus has her son/sweet boy in flashbacks. And Asmodeus killed her. Suffice it to say this made me uncomfortable. I'm really not here for pseudo-incest.
The book is technically about Kalliope learning she's the reincarnated Queen of Purgatory, and coming into her power. In actuality, it's about her sitting around talking to hunky boys who are all super protective of her and thinks she's so special. The setting of Heaven/Hell/Purgatory and use of Angels and Demons felt very shallow, like it was written by a teenager who doesn't actually understand how any of it actually works. It doesn't really build off of established religious canon in anyway, and also... Persephone? From the Greek Pantheon? She shows up for some reason. Doesn't do a whole lot, but she shows up. No explanation. There's no indication that the other greek gods exist, or that there's multiple worlds for gods and such. Just heaven, hell, purgatory. The worldbuilding was a big fat mess.
A whole lot of nothing happens for most of the book, and then suddenly it feels like there's 3 climaxes in a row. The Big Bad shows up, they fight him. He's gone! But wait, Kalliope's boyfriend was working with him all along! Betrayal! She'll never love him again! ...and then the Big Bad shows up again, mutilates a child (who was in like 2 scenes), kills her best friend, and sets Kalliope off so she fights him again.
This is very much a character driven story, since it's whole schtick rides on this romantic relationship, but I do not care about either of these characters. I do not care about the side characters, so when they're killed off, there's 0 impact (although I was left reeling from the dead mutilated child bc while child death was mentioned in the triggers, the mutilation absolutely was not).
It pains me to say that this was worth that Fourth Wing or Lightlark, because I don't want to believe that anything is worse than those books. But there was no thought to the worldbuilding. It was shallow. The characters were flat. And shallow. The relationship was so uncomfortable. The emotional devastation from the two deaths at the end doesn't land because there's no reason to care about those two characters.
The line level writing was not great. It wasn't the worst I've read (bad fanfic and wattpad exist) but it was by no means what I'd expect from a published novel. It needed a lot of work. Everything about this novel needed a lot of work. I feel like I was reading a story of a 15 year old who loves Inuyasha and angels/demons.
1 star. Shouldn't have been published without a lot more editing.