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Vampire Bachelor Games #2
Hupotasso
Book two in the Vampire Bachelor Games trilogy.
348 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 24, 2024
About the author
Helen Allan
287 books92 followersHelen Allan is a USA Today and Amazon bestselling author of paranormal romance, science fiction, and fantasy romance novels.
Her books feature strong, humorous female protagonists, hunky slow-burn love interests, swear-bears, interesting twists, and happy ever afters.
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Her books feature strong, humorous female protagonists, hunky slow-burn love interests, swear-bears, interesting twists, and happy ever afters.
You can learn more about her and her latest work by signing up to her newsletter at www.helenallan.com.
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Displaying 1 - 25 of 25 reviews
October 14, 2025
OMFG. this is a shitshow if I ever read one.
May 4, 2026
Well, this was a great 2nd book of series.
August 2, 2026
Oh My God!!
This second book is a total cliff hanger from start to finish! I have to read the third one and hope our heroes win!
This second book is a total cliff hanger from start to finish! I have to read the third one and hope our heroes win!
September 25, 2026
The drama is 🔥🔥🔥!!!! I can only hope that the villain dies a slow painful death in the next book.
October 24, 2025
I meant to start with book one but messed up and started with this one. It really didn’t matter. I’m not into books that I don’t either like or respect any of the characters. The h, the H, and the H’s mother – all TSTL. And the H – absolutely loathsome.
This quote occurs near the end of the book; the h describing her feelings for the H (after many months of imprisonment and mental and physical abuse):
Seeing his beautiful face every cell in my body yearns to be in his arms, to explain everything in a babble of truth and emotion. To tell him that I understand everything, all the lies, the heartache, the violence, the terrible words — I understand it all, and I forgive him.
And I love him.
See what I mean? TSTL. Ending on a cliffhanger didn’t score any points either. I won’t be continuing the series.
This quote occurs near the end of the book; the h describing her feelings for the H (after many months of imprisonment and mental and physical abuse):
Seeing his beautiful face every cell in my body yearns to be in his arms, to explain everything in a babble of truth and emotion. To tell him that I understand everything, all the lies, the heartache, the violence, the terrible words — I understand it all, and I forgive him.
And I love him.
See what I mean? TSTL. Ending on a cliffhanger didn’t score any points either. I won’t be continuing the series.
August 17, 2026
The MMc is a prick!! But the story is addictive,
February 3, 2026
It is a well written sick and twisted story. If you are looking for romantic vamps don't crack this cover. If you are easily triggered run away fast. On to the next in the series to see if Viper gets what should be coming to him.
February 21, 2026
this book had me so upset & frustrated almost the entire time. falcon's an idiot. viper's absolutely vile. their mother is incredibly unhelpful. even jag is making stupid decisions... everything is a mess. I dont know how anyone's going to come out of this unscathed.
November 7, 2025
The addiction has carried over, slightly predictably and extremely frustrating but still hooked
November 30, 2025
So painfully good!
October 12, 2026
Oh, Ms Allan, what have you done?!
I feel so manipulated right now, almost like*I've* been bitten into subservience by the repellent Viper! The twists & turns came thick & fast throughout the whole of the book. It seemed as if there was no let-up, with each new turn of the screw seemingly sealing Angie's fate, her doom, ever more completely. Falcon has a little more of my sympathy this time. He is being played without cease by someone who truly hates him & is using his own family against him; very effectively, too. The latest move on this multi-dimensional game of spite & ruin is the most coldly calculated of all. It has the potential to destroy Falcon, his family & his oldest relationships in one fell swoop.
I'm now racing towards the third book ASAP; this is turning into one of my favourite story arcs of all time. Never have the villains been more black-hearted or the innocent more wronged. What fun!
I feel so manipulated right now, almost like*I've* been bitten into subservience by the repellent Viper! The twists & turns came thick & fast throughout the whole of the book. It seemed as if there was no let-up, with each new turn of the screw seemingly sealing Angie's fate, her doom, ever more completely. Falcon has a little more of my sympathy this time. He is being played without cease by someone who truly hates him & is using his own family against him; very effectively, too. The latest move on this multi-dimensional game of spite & ruin is the most coldly calculated of all. It has the potential to destroy Falcon, his family & his oldest relationships in one fell swoop.
I'm now racing towards the third book ASAP; this is turning into one of my favourite story arcs of all time. Never have the villains been more black-hearted or the innocent more wronged. What fun!
June 21, 2025
This book would have to be a 3.4 for me - without any spoilers I think the first one was better than this one. Some things were harder for me to get through, and I did end up briefly DNF’d this book. Upon reading and had time to reflect, I decided that I don’t like Falcon but I don’t care for Angie as much as I liked her in the first book. She really went through some things, yet still think Falcon is a complete loser in this one. Assuming things make him more blind than seeing it for what it is. I think there’s some truth in humanity and what it means to face things that are out of our control, even if we delusion ourselves into thinking we do.
November 12, 2025
*Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
First of all, this book needs trigger warnings.
Secondly, the fact that FMC didn't feel ANY negative emotions about the situation her "husband" put her in is absurd. Unless you're incapable of having emotions, anyone would feel resentment, anger, and violated. WTF?
Thirdly, Jag is a shitty friend. He had an affair with his best friend's wife willingly. Don't gaslight me into believing he's a good person just because he trusts FMC. Again, WTF?
Finally, the writing is still horrendous.
‘Truly horrendous.’
First of all, this book needs trigger warnings.
Secondly, the fact that FMC didn't feel ANY negative emotions about the situation her "husband" put her in is absurd. Unless you're incapable of having emotions, anyone would feel resentment, anger, and violated. WTF?
Thirdly, Jag is a shitty friend. He had an affair with his best friend's wife willingly. Don't gaslight me into believing he's a good person just because he trusts FMC. Again, WTF?
Finally, the writing is still horrendous.
‘Truly horrendous.’
November 25, 2024
I was So excited for this book. I even reread the first one in the series, which I rarely do. The first book was witty and sexy with a great plot and characters. This book doesn't even seem to be written by the same author. It's an absolute dumpster fire with a nonsensical storyline and bizarre scenes of abuse. The characters are completely unrecognizable from book 1.
I'm just so disappointed that after waiting for an entire year, THIS mess is what the author came up with.
I'm just so disappointed that after waiting for an entire year, THIS mess is what the author came up with.
December 18, 2024
I can’t with this series, I’m so hooked! I waited for the second book for like a year and ended up reading it in one day, now I have to wait another year for the next one? I’m crying here lol
It’s got angst and it pissed me off a few times, but I think that’s why I liked it, it kept me on my toes and made me feel something, there’s no spice, those scenes are mentioned but not described
It’s got angst and it pissed me off a few times, but I think that’s why I liked it, it kept me on my toes and made me feel something, there’s no spice, those scenes are mentioned but not described
July 17, 2026
I’m loving the story! The characters and plot kept me invested from beginning to end. That said, I do think it would benefit from another round of editing. There were quite a few grammatical errors that occasionally pulled me out of the story, and I sometimes had to piece together sentences to understand what the author intended. ♥️
November 26, 2024
so extremely mad
The book series is absolutely awesome. I love it but I absolutely hate that it was supposed to be two books and now it’s three and I have to wait a whole Nother year. You did a great job writing them, but I wish I didn’t have to wait another year.
The book series is absolutely awesome. I love it but I absolutely hate that it was supposed to be two books and now it’s three and I have to wait a whole Nother year. You did a great job writing them, but I wish I didn’t have to wait another year.
November 26, 2024
Tbh..I don't remember the first part. I do remember loving it and I was so excited for the second part to come out. But this was just a huge disappointment for me. The story didn't make sense. I felt no connection to either protagonist, every chapter was rushed.
Overall Not Recommended.
Overall Not Recommended.
December 3, 2024
I was so excited to read this! It didn’t not disappoint. There are a few trigger warnings!
Rape
Beastiality
I could have done without those parts honestly.
Of course it does leave you on another cliffhanger 🤦🏻♀️
Rape
Beastiality
I could have done without those parts honestly.
Of course it does leave you on another cliffhanger 🤦🏻♀️
December 10, 2024
I really enjoyed the book! At first it was a little hard to follow but I quickly got in the groove and really enjoyed it. It was a little gory but after all, these are VAMPIRES we are talking about!
October 15, 2025
I don’t know that I’ve ever been so frustrated yet so entertained at the same time…
October 15, 2025
Terrible
If you are into hatred, rape, and all the more vulgar forms of entertainment, enjoy. The real world is bad enough.
If you are into hatred, rape, and all the more vulgar forms of entertainment, enjoy. The real world is bad enough.
October 15, 2025
Still great reading
Book two I jam am still trying to read straight from beginning to end. Complex story with twist and turns.
Book two I jam am still trying to read straight from beginning to end. Complex story with twist and turns.
October 26, 2025
There is really no romance in this book in the series. There is betrayal, treachery, ugly behavior. No one believes anyone else. And of course it is a cliffhanger. But I have hope.
May 13, 2026
everyone in this book is so fucking stupid
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