Today I had my first kiss. It wasn’t planned. It was also with a complete stranger. As I walked through the halls of my school, Higala Shifter Academy, I paused when a familiar sense washed over me. My boyfriend, Scott, was nearby, and he wasn’t alone. “You are so naughty, Scott,” the she-wolf Sarah chuckled. “Only for you, babe,” he replied, muffled as her lips closed around his. At that moment, I felt sick to my stomach. “Oh, Scott. Stop it. You know we can’t be seen together. What if your girlfriend finds us?” “She’s in class. She’s never late. You don’t need to worry.” My heart was heavy in my chest, but also a wave of fury and resentment crossed me. “Lila?” Scott breathed, staring at me in shock “What are you—” Before he could get the entire question out, I turned to the gentleman beside me, placing my hands on his shoulders and pulling him toward me. He went easily, though his eyes showed nothing but confusion. I closed my eyes tightly so I wouldn’t have to see his expression any longer. Then, our lips touched. Later, I walked into my class but found, It was him… The man I kissed only moments ago in the hallway. The man I had given my first kiss to, was my professor.
I found this story on a Facebook sponsored app video. It's a continuing story by chapter that you must pay by chapter to read, or wait and read little by little watching video ads.
The story itself is good. The writing, grammar, spelling, etc., is pretty bad. Could use a good editor just for that.
There are currently 320 chapter/episodes. Listed here are only some of them. This is an unfinished story, and I've read so many reviews where people say they gave up simply because it's too much of a pain to a) read in this format, and b) wait for more episodes.
I'm going to try and be patient, but I'm not betting on my ability to stay engaged. Again, good story. Decent character development. Could have been more successful with a real publisher/editor/and different format.
The story ends in a cliffhanger. Feels like a tv series that ends up being canceled. Some grammar mistakes. You can tell it has been uploaded onto other platforms because of the way some of the chapters end. Great story just wish for a different or proper ending.
Not finished...not a book but just chapters... Needs proof reading lots of him instead of her....good story just needs more defined begining middle and end.
I really enjoyed the plot and characters but there are some big inconsistencies, like time passed, things that happened then forgot about. Attitudes in characters seemed to change as well, like she hates Connie but plans a date for her mate? Also misplaced words, like she instead of he, wrong names, so on.
So far so good. Definitely enjoying the story. I feel.like its paced slow but its probably just cause im really into it. Glad that secrets are starting to reveal themselves. Not happy with new secrets revealing. It makes me anxious. Good storytelling!!
Started out great, left you on the edge waiting to see what the next chapter brought. Felt like the ending was rushed, lots of fillers throughout, as it comes to the end, editing was lacking. Many spelling and grammar mistakes got by.