Teaching Bailey

by Crystal G. Smith

Bailey wants the life that her friend has. Unfortunately for her, it comes with a price. After her friend suggests she enroll in this "school", she looks it up online. Never had she been exposed to a site like this. She chickens out, but thankfully her friend has enrolled her already.

In order to attend this school, she must spend a week alone with an instructor to remedy a certain situation.

Will she follow the directions that lead her to meet Sir Cole Stevens, or will she back out?

93 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 27, 2013

About the author

Crystal Donaldson-Smith was born and raised in Doniphan, Missouri. Crystal graduated from Sikeston Practical Nurse Program in 2009 and since then continues to work as a LPN in long term care. Her story telling abilities were first noticed by her kindergarden teacher who told her mother one day this little girl is going to be a writer. She completed her first novel, Seducing Peaches February 2012. Since then she has written with her sister other titles as well as several on her own. She is currently working on several titles, some are completed while others are in the works. She writes like people in her area speak. As a southern girl, she uses words like gonna, gotta, getcha, etc. She understands that this is not exactly proper grammar but at the same time, it makes for an easy read as most people are not proper. She hopes that you enjoy reading as much as she does writing it. When she isn't at her day job, or hanging out with her family, you can find her in front of her lap top dreaming up a knew story or working on one. She enjoys finding a way to exit the world around her and enter a world she can call her own.

Reviews

[Tia · Rating 2 out of 5]

It had the potential to be a good novel but it fell a bit flat. It reminded me a lot of Red Phoenix novels, at least with the scenes and the whole 'I googled it, Sir" thing going on. However the spelling mistakes took away from the novel and the mismatched words as well. It definitely needs a good edit. The storyline was failing as well, as it didn't explain all of her fathers background, etc correctly/properly. With a good edit, some more written in the story and some good character development, it could potentially be a best seller in the erotica genre.

[Crystal · Rating 4 out of 5]

Bailey see's the love that her friend found and when she finds out how they met she can't believe it. Seems her friend took matters into her own hands and enrolled her to this school. Now she has a man getting a hold of her. He is her instructor for the week to see if she will be a great person to come to this school.

Bailey is taken on a sexual adventure and it turns out to work in her favor at the end. This is one adventure that every woman would want to be taken on. If only this was something that really happened in real life.

[Stefanie Fischer · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book could have been really good, if all the holes would have been filled. The story is nice but not smooth. The storyline was quite steep but ended in a rapid fall. From a unattractive Virgin, fucked by a DOM (in every way possible) in two days, is quite a fast journey. The Epilog has been the topping!

[Cathy McHadden]

Needed a better editor

The story was ok. Not the best ever, no real character development. The most distracting thing was the misspellings and repeated grammar errors. If you're going to write a book and are unsure of basic grammar rules, you need a stronger editor.

[Kathleen Downey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Interesting story

Interesting story

I have to admit that I found this book interesting and thought to myself that I probably would of enjoyed my first time more if it had been more like this.

[Shirley Anderson · Rating 4 out of 5]

Nice short read x

[Sheila Lord · Rating 4 out of 5]

I give it a 4 1/2 i found it a cute short story and loved the ending.....

[Elaine · Rating 3 out of 5]

It had potential but the story then abruptly moves from early into the week to one year later. Leaves the reader thinking they missed a lot so it feels disjointed.