2.5 ⭐️
Like the first book, the story is interesting, but it falls short. I’d desperately needs an editor to help with pacing and all of the spelling/grammatical errors (not to mention THERE ARE TWO ENTIRE CHAPTERS OUT OF SEQUENCE!!!). Again, the plot points are just too thin; i.e. how did the two MMCs amass their fortune/empire? It has nice bones, but just needs to be beefed up and polished some more.