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Treasures of Egypt: The Spear & the Scythe
What would one do for love? What would one do for Egypt? Desperation drives Nefiri Minu, apprentice to the Grand Vizier, to save her little brother by seeking Khafset, a young thief from the persecuted people of Hyksos.
But his price to help heal her sick brother is to steal a divine spear from Ra's temple. However, by touching the spear, Nefiri unwittingly unleashes Set, the shackled God of Destruction, and starts a chain of events that threatens to plunge Egypt into chaos.
To avert disaster, they are forced to navigate the realm of the gods and the dead, and face off against mythological creatures in a dangerous adventure Khafset insists on calling “The Grand Heist.”
Can this unlikely pair learn to trust each other? Will that trust turn their forced partnership into something more? On an adventure packed with secrets, hidden agendas, not to mention Gods and monsters, will Nefiri and Khafset succeed in their mission to save Egypt or will the very prejudices that have shaped their world threaten to tear them apart?
But his price to help heal her sick brother is to steal a divine spear from Ra's temple. However, by touching the spear, Nefiri unwittingly unleashes Set, the shackled God of Destruction, and starts a chain of events that threatens to plunge Egypt into chaos.
To avert disaster, they are forced to navigate the realm of the gods and the dead, and face off against mythological creatures in a dangerous adventure Khafset insists on calling “The Grand Heist.”
Can this unlikely pair learn to trust each other? Will that trust turn their forced partnership into something more? On an adventure packed with secrets, hidden agendas, not to mention Gods and monsters, will Nefiri and Khafset succeed in their mission to save Egypt or will the very prejudices that have shaped their world threaten to tear them apart?
400 pages, Paperback
Published October 1, 2024
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Amr Saleh
1 book35 followersHello, there! I'm Amr Saleh, an Egyptian-German author based in the vibrant city of Munich, Germany (Yes, the one with the Oktoberfest). I was born and raised in Cairo, Egypt (The country with the pyramids and mummies, yes), a city teeming with tales of ancient wonders. I've always had a passion for storytelling, and this passion is fuelled by my hobbies, which include writing (of course!), diving into captivating stories in all their forms (including video games - yes, they're art!), traveling, and learning about geography and history.
I truly believe in the power of stories as a unifying force. From the dawn of humanity, we've gathered around the hearth, sharing tales of heroes, villains, and fantastical beings. It's this yearning for a good story that transcends faith, ethnicity, and gender. And it's my dream to take part in this ancient tradition, to keep the flame of the hearth lit with my own tales.
I truly believe in the power of stories as a unifying force. From the dawn of humanity, we've gathered around the hearth, sharing tales of heroes, villains, and fantastical beings. It's this yearning for a good story that transcends faith, ethnicity, and gender. And it's my dream to take part in this ancient tradition, to keep the flame of the hearth lit with my own tales.
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May 17, 2024
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Hi there,
My name is Amr, and I’m the author of this book. It still feels weird to say that! I wrote Treasures of Egypt because, growing up, I always noticed the lack of Egyptian representation in fantasy. My goal with this story was to give readers the Egyptian fantasy story I always wanted to read. Now, I can only cross my fingers and hope that I’ve achieved that goal.
I believe authors should generally stay away from reviewing spaces, but since the book is slowly finding its way to ARC readers, I wanted to visit this section of Goodreads one last time to give my debut 5 stars for good luck and, more importantly, to say thank you. Whether you love my novel or hate it, you decided to give my debut a chance, and I want you to know that I deeply appreciate it.
I would also like to thank Collective Ink and everyone there for believing in Treasures of Egypt and giving it a chance to see the light. Also, a special thank you to the talented Chris Era for the incredible cover art. There are so many Easter eggs and foreshadowing hidden in the cover that you’ll only get after finishing the book.
Thank you all, and I hope you enjoy your time in ancient Egypt.
—Amr
Content warning: Feel free to visit the dedicated page on my website. There, you can also let me know if something should be added to the list.
Hi there,
My name is Amr, and I’m the author of this book. It still feels weird to say that! I wrote Treasures of Egypt because, growing up, I always noticed the lack of Egyptian representation in fantasy. My goal with this story was to give readers the Egyptian fantasy story I always wanted to read. Now, I can only cross my fingers and hope that I’ve achieved that goal.
I believe authors should generally stay away from reviewing spaces, but since the book is slowly finding its way to ARC readers, I wanted to visit this section of Goodreads one last time to give my debut 5 stars for good luck and, more importantly, to say thank you. Whether you love my novel or hate it, you decided to give my debut a chance, and I want you to know that I deeply appreciate it.
I would also like to thank Collective Ink and everyone there for believing in Treasures of Egypt and giving it a chance to see the light. Also, a special thank you to the talented Chris Era for the incredible cover art. There are so many Easter eggs and foreshadowing hidden in the cover that you’ll only get after finishing the book.
Thank you all, and I hope you enjoy your time in ancient Egypt.
—Amr
Content warning: Feel free to visit the dedicated page on my website. There, you can also let me know if something should be added to the list.
April 20, 2024
4.5 ✯
“People’s actions and the stories behind them are always complex. Only a hypocrite would pick and choose part of the story in the name of justice.”
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“Never forget you both were made from Egypt's black mud, and it’s Nile flows in your veins, and you will return to them in the end regardless of what you choose to call yourselves.”
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This book is a beautiful combination of Magic and Mythology. Every chapter was enticing, each with new challenges and new characters.
As someone who loves learning about ancient Egypt and its mythology, I immediately had to read this. Saleh perfectly introduces the gods and high officials so that it’s not overwhelming for the reader to take in. Everything is very well explained, we are told who each god is, how they relate to each other and some of their actions that have gotten them to where they are. All the gods and goddesses were portrayed perfectly, I loved meeting each one throughout the journey of the book.
Neferi’s and Khafset’s friendship dynamic was very complicated. Khafset is Hyksos and Neferi is Egyptian, automatically making them enemies, however their love for each other grows throughout their journey challenging their feelings towards each other and their thoughts on both Egyptians and Hyksos. I loved that despite Neferi being the Grand Vizier’s apprentice, Khafset (who the Egyptians looked down on for being a Hyksos) had so much more knowledge of the gods, fighting and the Duat. Khafset was an amazing character, he was smart, brave, and resourceful.
I loved Neferi’s loyalty for those she loved and her fights using her newly attained magic, but I had hoped her character would have been mentally stronger by the end of her journey.
My favourite character was Hatshepsut, although I wish we had seen more of her. I hope we will get to see her again if there is a second book.
“People’s actions and the stories behind them are always complex. Only a hypocrite would pick and choose part of the story in the name of justice.”
⚜
“Never forget you both were made from Egypt's black mud, and it’s Nile flows in your veins, and you will return to them in the end regardless of what you choose to call yourselves.”
⚜
This book is a beautiful combination of Magic and Mythology. Every chapter was enticing, each with new challenges and new characters.
As someone who loves learning about ancient Egypt and its mythology, I immediately had to read this. Saleh perfectly introduces the gods and high officials so that it’s not overwhelming for the reader to take in. Everything is very well explained, we are told who each god is, how they relate to each other and some of their actions that have gotten them to where they are. All the gods and goddesses were portrayed perfectly, I loved meeting each one throughout the journey of the book.
Neferi’s and Khafset’s friendship dynamic was very complicated. Khafset is Hyksos and Neferi is Egyptian, automatically making them enemies, however their love for each other grows throughout their journey challenging their feelings towards each other and their thoughts on both Egyptians and Hyksos. I loved that despite Neferi being the Grand Vizier’s apprentice, Khafset (who the Egyptians looked down on for being a Hyksos) had so much more knowledge of the gods, fighting and the Duat. Khafset was an amazing character, he was smart, brave, and resourceful.
I loved Neferi’s loyalty for those she loved and her fights using her newly attained magic, but I had hoped her character would have been mentally stronger by the end of her journey.
My favourite character was Hatshepsut, although I wish we had seen more of her. I hope we will get to see her again if there is a second book.
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May 16, 2024DNR - Use of AI covers.
AI "art" is made from platforms using a database of stolen artwork (They do a massive sweep off the internet and will take even copyrighted images and art - Midjourney's CEO has admitted that 1) they cannot and have not asked for consent from artists, despite the fact that the platform steals images that are copyrighted and 2) that its platform does not create out of nothing. Contrary to popular belief, AI does not invent new art by taking inspiration, it copy pastes and mashes together, even Midjourney admits to the fact that AI art is well not really artificial intelligence because it cannot reproduce the patterns of an artistic mind).
Using AI "art" is a slap in the face of many artists who suffer from it:
1) Their hardwork is used to feed off platforms where people can get a picture within minutes
2) This in turn reduces the value of their labor since authors such as this one can just buy cheaper
3) However these platforms still run on the labor of real artists, they depend on them to continue running.
While understandable that indie authors have many costs that does not allow them to commission real artists, it is not an excuse to throw artists under the bus.
I will add that it is also OKAY FOR AUTHORS TO MAKE MISTAKES but once it is called out that it is AI, and once people are informed as to how these platforms work, they should at the very least take down the AI art. Errors happen, staking a claim in favour of AI because it's convenient even after learning about AI is not an error, it's a gross show of injustice.
Ai has already started spitting out books, let's not allow it to be on our covers or we will soon be reading machine made books and lose all beauty of art.
AI "art" is made from platforms using a database of stolen artwork (They do a massive sweep off the internet and will take even copyrighted images and art - Midjourney's CEO has admitted that 1) they cannot and have not asked for consent from artists, despite the fact that the platform steals images that are copyrighted and 2) that its platform does not create out of nothing. Contrary to popular belief, AI does not invent new art by taking inspiration, it copy pastes and mashes together, even Midjourney admits to the fact that AI art is well not really artificial intelligence because it cannot reproduce the patterns of an artistic mind).
Using AI "art" is a slap in the face of many artists who suffer from it:
1) Their hardwork is used to feed off platforms where people can get a picture within minutes
2) This in turn reduces the value of their labor since authors such as this one can just buy cheaper
3) However these platforms still run on the labor of real artists, they depend on them to continue running.
While understandable that indie authors have many costs that does not allow them to commission real artists, it is not an excuse to throw artists under the bus.
I will add that it is also OKAY FOR AUTHORS TO MAKE MISTAKES but once it is called out that it is AI, and once people are informed as to how these platforms work, they should at the very least take down the AI art. Errors happen, staking a claim in favour of AI because it's convenient even after learning about AI is not an error, it's a gross show of injustice.
Ai has already started spitting out books, let's not allow it to be on our covers or we will soon be reading machine made books and lose all beauty of art.
March 15, 2024
Mortality meets everlasting vital stories surrounding ancient Egypt in Amr Saleh’s debut novel Treasures of Egypt.
Saleh introduces us not just to a vast epic world of realms and wonder but to two entertaining characters, Nefiri and Khafset, whose banter and dynamic ground the reader and emphasize the importance of sacrifice.
Nefiri, a caring sister who will do anything for her brother, embarks on a journey that develops her in a way that touches the organic change that could and should happen in our world. One can’t help but be engrossed in Nefiri’s love, determination, and courage as she faces nonstop obligations from multiple directions that force her to look into herself and grow.
Caught between the desperate need to do what is best for her brother and the morals that bind her, Nefiri awakens an Egyptian god and has no choice but to navigate through realms in the Egyptian Pantheon with the young thief she despises, Khafset. They face obstacles that no one could dream of and must figure out how to navigate through unforgettable ultimatums.
But these obstacles and ultimatums aren’t just physical. Saleh does amazing work ensuring that each conflict dives deep into what the characters need to work on inside themselves. The reader encounters stories reflected in stories to form satisfying connections and build a wholesome feel in the heart.
Saleh’s characters feel entirely real and leave a lasting impression. His prose is also delegated perfectly to bring tension, information, and dynamics to life. Conflicting morals breathe between each page, so much so that readers will not know which side to champion. It is outstanding how Saleh can open readers’ eyes to the conflict facing both sides and how he paints a realistic grey ground that reflects our world.
Through this story, Saleh’s main character Nefiri is inspiring. Through her growth, her core traits stay the same, which bows to the talent of Saleh’s writing, but she shapes into a person who is willing to step back, admit when she is wrong, and work to correct her mistakes.
The stakes in Treasures of Egypt rise with each page. The end of each chapter is a new beginning, pushing the reader forward into another emotional impact or reveal. The pacing doesn’t slow until the perfect moments, but only to give the plot more mystery or satisfaction.
Even with nonstop tension on each page and the creation of a mystical and mythical life for Nefiri and Khafset that a reader may not want to see end, Saleh has everything come together in a way that brings a satisfying revelation. Saleh knows exactly what the two main characters are missing in their lives and grants that to them.
Amr Saleh’s debut novel, Treasures of Egypt, is a much-needed journey that fills a hole in the market when it comes to understanding the social aspects of ancient Egypt and what was at stake for two groups, the Egyptians and the Hyksos. Through a personal, action-filled adventure, Saleh captivates readers by introducing them to the Egyptian Pantheon in a unique, enticing way that broadens understanding.
Treasures of Egypt pushes the question of how much something means to someone and what one is willing to sacrifice. What would one do for someone they love? What would one do for Egypt?
Saleh introduces us not just to a vast epic world of realms and wonder but to two entertaining characters, Nefiri and Khafset, whose banter and dynamic ground the reader and emphasize the importance of sacrifice.
Nefiri, a caring sister who will do anything for her brother, embarks on a journey that develops her in a way that touches the organic change that could and should happen in our world. One can’t help but be engrossed in Nefiri’s love, determination, and courage as she faces nonstop obligations from multiple directions that force her to look into herself and grow.
Caught between the desperate need to do what is best for her brother and the morals that bind her, Nefiri awakens an Egyptian god and has no choice but to navigate through realms in the Egyptian Pantheon with the young thief she despises, Khafset. They face obstacles that no one could dream of and must figure out how to navigate through unforgettable ultimatums.
But these obstacles and ultimatums aren’t just physical. Saleh does amazing work ensuring that each conflict dives deep into what the characters need to work on inside themselves. The reader encounters stories reflected in stories to form satisfying connections and build a wholesome feel in the heart.
Saleh’s characters feel entirely real and leave a lasting impression. His prose is also delegated perfectly to bring tension, information, and dynamics to life. Conflicting morals breathe between each page, so much so that readers will not know which side to champion. It is outstanding how Saleh can open readers’ eyes to the conflict facing both sides and how he paints a realistic grey ground that reflects our world.
Through this story, Saleh’s main character Nefiri is inspiring. Through her growth, her core traits stay the same, which bows to the talent of Saleh’s writing, but she shapes into a person who is willing to step back, admit when she is wrong, and work to correct her mistakes.
The stakes in Treasures of Egypt rise with each page. The end of each chapter is a new beginning, pushing the reader forward into another emotional impact or reveal. The pacing doesn’t slow until the perfect moments, but only to give the plot more mystery or satisfaction.
Even with nonstop tension on each page and the creation of a mystical and mythical life for Nefiri and Khafset that a reader may not want to see end, Saleh has everything come together in a way that brings a satisfying revelation. Saleh knows exactly what the two main characters are missing in their lives and grants that to them.
Amr Saleh’s debut novel, Treasures of Egypt, is a much-needed journey that fills a hole in the market when it comes to understanding the social aspects of ancient Egypt and what was at stake for two groups, the Egyptians and the Hyksos. Through a personal, action-filled adventure, Saleh captivates readers by introducing them to the Egyptian Pantheon in a unique, enticing way that broadens understanding.
Treasures of Egypt pushes the question of how much something means to someone and what one is willing to sacrifice. What would one do for someone they love? What would one do for Egypt?
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 9, 2025
Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher, and the author for this advanced copy in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
I love mythology and I was super excited to dive into the world of Egyptian gods and magic. Treasures of Egypt follows Nefiri Minu, the only apprentice to the Grand Vizier and a Hyksos thief by the name of Khafset. Nefiri appears to be a perfect Egyptian; she is powerful, smart, and has a healthy disdain for the lesser Hyksos people. However, she also has a secret, she has been stealing money to pay for medicine from a Hyksos thief, all for her sick younger brother. When a deal with the thief, Khafset, goes awry, Nefiri discovers that she is the “Chosen One of Set” and has to travel with Khafset to the mystical lands of Egyptian mythology in order to save Egypt.
The absolute best part of this book was the mythological aspects. The author brought the rich mythology of Egypt to life in this book. I will be the first to admit that my knowledge of Egyptian mythology is passable at best, so I loved getting to learn and explore the mythology throughout the book. Ra, Isis, Set, and so many other gods appear in the book and Amr Saleh truly captured the magical feeling found in Egyptian mythology. The journey throughout the land of the gods was exciting and I was really invested in the adventure.
Nef and Khaf were intriguing characters. They both had a really rich backstory and their motivations were clear and made sense with what we learn about them. I loved their banter, the two of them were absolutely adorable when they argued, and I loved how their insults slowly turned into affection. Their relationship was complicated and inspiring and I felt like the author did a great job with the two of them. However, while I loved this book, there was one issue I had with it, Nefiri.
I know I just said how awesome and cute her and Khaf were and that is true, but as the MC, Nef is somewhat lacking. Truth be told she was annoying af sometimes, like seriously the girl needs to get ahold of herself. There would be moments where she was all…” I’m the worst, stupid, and ugly, and a monster…blah blah blah. And on the literal same page, she would be all “No, I am smart and perfect and I can save the world” Like the split personality was super ridiculous. While she could be annoying and sometimes take the attention away from the awesome plot and magic, it didn’t seriously affect how much I liked the book as a whole, though she is one of the reasons I gave this 4 stars instead of 5.
Overall, this book had similar vibes to the movie Gods of Egypt (which I love) and I really really enjoyed it--I binged the whole thing in two days. I hope the author writes another as I am really excited to see the story progress and the characters grow (or grow up in Nef’s case). Definitely worth a read if you love mythology, magic, or cute thieves.
I love mythology and I was super excited to dive into the world of Egyptian gods and magic. Treasures of Egypt follows Nefiri Minu, the only apprentice to the Grand Vizier and a Hyksos thief by the name of Khafset. Nefiri appears to be a perfect Egyptian; she is powerful, smart, and has a healthy disdain for the lesser Hyksos people. However, she also has a secret, she has been stealing money to pay for medicine from a Hyksos thief, all for her sick younger brother. When a deal with the thief, Khafset, goes awry, Nefiri discovers that she is the “Chosen One of Set” and has to travel with Khafset to the mystical lands of Egyptian mythology in order to save Egypt.
The absolute best part of this book was the mythological aspects. The author brought the rich mythology of Egypt to life in this book. I will be the first to admit that my knowledge of Egyptian mythology is passable at best, so I loved getting to learn and explore the mythology throughout the book. Ra, Isis, Set, and so many other gods appear in the book and Amr Saleh truly captured the magical feeling found in Egyptian mythology. The journey throughout the land of the gods was exciting and I was really invested in the adventure.
Nef and Khaf were intriguing characters. They both had a really rich backstory and their motivations were clear and made sense with what we learn about them. I loved their banter, the two of them were absolutely adorable when they argued, and I loved how their insults slowly turned into affection. Their relationship was complicated and inspiring and I felt like the author did a great job with the two of them. However, while I loved this book, there was one issue I had with it, Nefiri.
I know I just said how awesome and cute her and Khaf were and that is true, but as the MC, Nef is somewhat lacking. Truth be told she was annoying af sometimes, like seriously the girl needs to get ahold of herself. There would be moments where she was all…” I’m the worst, stupid, and ugly, and a monster…blah blah blah. And on the literal same page, she would be all “No, I am smart and perfect and I can save the world” Like the split personality was super ridiculous. While she could be annoying and sometimes take the attention away from the awesome plot and magic, it didn’t seriously affect how much I liked the book as a whole, though she is one of the reasons I gave this 4 stars instead of 5.
Overall, this book had similar vibes to the movie Gods of Egypt (which I love) and I really really enjoyed it--I binged the whole thing in two days. I hope the author writes another as I am really excited to see the story progress and the characters grow (or grow up in Nef’s case). Definitely worth a read if you love mythology, magic, or cute thieves.
April 20, 2024
When Nefiri agrees to help a thief break into a temple to steal the sacred spear belonging to the God Set in exchange for medicin that should save her brother’s life, she sets off a prophecy that will release the God of Destruction and lead to the downfall of Egypt. Now Nefiri and Khafset must travel through the realms of the underworld, battling demons and gods, in a race to stop Set before everyone and everything they know is destroyed.
Nefiri was an amazing POV character. Unlike most “Chosen Ones” she denies her fate at every turn, yet continues on to save Khaf—arguably her enemy—and even accepts and acknowledges her mistakes, which helps her to realize that everything she has ever known about her history and her enmity with Khaf’s people are wrong. And then she not only accepts that her assumptions were wrong and rather racist, but she grows from these mistakes and becomes a better person (arguably a lot of the “hero protagonists” remain rather stagnant as characters and rarely have any growth or maturity unless through loss). Nefiri not only overcomes her loss and a surprising amount of betrayal, but refuses to give up when the odds and everyone else are against her.
Her romance with Khaf was the perfect amount of enemies to lovers, with the gradual acceptance of the other as a person with valid feelings, to friends, and eventually to lovers. Their banter was playful and their arguments fierce, but their shared experiences bound them together in life and death until they could forge their happy ending.
The notion that Nefiri was Chosen because she was Set’s daughter, a forbidden demigod, was the perfect red herring so that when the actual demigod was revealed I remained surprised—although looking back now the foreshadowing of Khaf’s mighty powers and healing abilities was rather obvious. The betrayal too was something I saw coming, although I figured he had to come around again in the end.
Mostly I was quite impressed with the introduction to Egyptian mythology. The way it was expressed was so organic, as we the readers encountered the gods as the plot progressed. Many times I find such information to just be dumped at the begining or explained to us early on by one of the characters—which when the pantheon is so complex and the myths so detailed it can become overwhelming very quickly. I loved how the gods hid themselves throughout the story, helping from behind the scenes and empowering Nefiri and Khaf to become the heroes they were meant to be.
Overall a wonderful adventure filled with magic and romance that will please not only YA readers but older ones as well, and a wonderful glimpse into a time period in history that we are all fascinated by even into adulthood.
Nefiri was an amazing POV character. Unlike most “Chosen Ones” she denies her fate at every turn, yet continues on to save Khaf—arguably her enemy—and even accepts and acknowledges her mistakes, which helps her to realize that everything she has ever known about her history and her enmity with Khaf’s people are wrong. And then she not only accepts that her assumptions were wrong and rather racist, but she grows from these mistakes and becomes a better person (arguably a lot of the “hero protagonists” remain rather stagnant as characters and rarely have any growth or maturity unless through loss). Nefiri not only overcomes her loss and a surprising amount of betrayal, but refuses to give up when the odds and everyone else are against her.
Her romance with Khaf was the perfect amount of enemies to lovers, with the gradual acceptance of the other as a person with valid feelings, to friends, and eventually to lovers. Their banter was playful and their arguments fierce, but their shared experiences bound them together in life and death until they could forge their happy ending.
The notion that Nefiri was Chosen because she was Set’s daughter, a forbidden demigod, was the perfect red herring so that when the actual demigod was revealed I remained surprised—although looking back now the foreshadowing of Khaf’s mighty powers and healing abilities was rather obvious. The betrayal too was something I saw coming, although I figured he had to come around again in the end.
Mostly I was quite impressed with the introduction to Egyptian mythology. The way it was expressed was so organic, as we the readers encountered the gods as the plot progressed. Many times I find such information to just be dumped at the begining or explained to us early on by one of the characters—which when the pantheon is so complex and the myths so detailed it can become overwhelming very quickly. I loved how the gods hid themselves throughout the story, helping from behind the scenes and empowering Nefiri and Khaf to become the heroes they were meant to be.
Overall a wonderful adventure filled with magic and romance that will please not only YA readers but older ones as well, and a wonderful glimpse into a time period in history that we are all fascinated by even into adulthood.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 28, 2024
Treasures of Egypt offers heart-pounding adventure and thought-provoking mystery that leaps off the pages and pulls YOU into Avaris along with it.
Amr Saleh captures an exciting combination of “The Mummy” meets “Moon Knight” to deliver a captivating story that’s filled with mythology and magic. If you enjoy ancient Egyptian mythology, you will love this story.
Though we enjoyed this book, the storyline was, at times, a bit confusing and difficult to follow. Overall, it’s a book that many will enjoy and we look forward to continuing to read Amr’s work
Amr Saleh captures an exciting combination of “The Mummy” meets “Moon Knight” to deliver a captivating story that’s filled with mythology and magic. If you enjoy ancient Egyptian mythology, you will love this story.
Though we enjoyed this book, the storyline was, at times, a bit confusing and difficult to follow. Overall, it’s a book that many will enjoy and we look forward to continuing to read Amr’s work
May 31, 2024
I have always been a fan of Greek and Roman mythology, but hadn’t yet read much of Egyptian mythology. This book was an amazing introduction to that cruel and beautiful world.
The plot follows Khafset and Nefiri, the Hyksos thief and the Egyptian apprentice, taught to hate one another from the moment they took their first breaths. They have an uneasy understanding but a series of events binds them together on a quest into the world of Egyptian gods and goddesses. They must overcome their differences and work together if they have any hope of saving Egypt and forging a better future.
Khafset’s arrogance and wit are wildly entertaining yet also endearing. Nefiri’s fierceness and intelligence combined with her characters growth over the course of the book made her a great main character. I loved seeing Egypt through her eyes.
The plot moved steadily along and I was never bored, but the storyline wasn’t rushed. Each plot point was explored, explained and then revisited if necessary but otherwise the story continued onwards. It made for a very quick and intriguing read. I would recommend this to just about anyone with an interest in fantasy/mythology.
Some tropes you’ll find are:
-enemies to lovers
- banter
- magic
- the Chosen
- found family
There is romance but no spice if you know what I mean 😉
Definitely more of a YA book comparable to Rick Riordan but I’d say the dialogue little older and the plot is more developed than The Lightning Thief series.
I received this as an e-arc and all opinions are my own. Would love to own this book! Amazing book for a debut novel.
The plot follows Khafset and Nefiri, the Hyksos thief and the Egyptian apprentice, taught to hate one another from the moment they took their first breaths. They have an uneasy understanding but a series of events binds them together on a quest into the world of Egyptian gods and goddesses. They must overcome their differences and work together if they have any hope of saving Egypt and forging a better future.
Khafset’s arrogance and wit are wildly entertaining yet also endearing. Nefiri’s fierceness and intelligence combined with her characters growth over the course of the book made her a great main character. I loved seeing Egypt through her eyes.
The plot moved steadily along and I was never bored, but the storyline wasn’t rushed. Each plot point was explored, explained and then revisited if necessary but otherwise the story continued onwards. It made for a very quick and intriguing read. I would recommend this to just about anyone with an interest in fantasy/mythology.
Some tropes you’ll find are:
-enemies to lovers
- banter
- magic
- the Chosen
- found family
There is romance but no spice if you know what I mean 😉
Definitely more of a YA book comparable to Rick Riordan but I’d say the dialogue little older and the plot is more developed than The Lightning Thief series.
I received this as an e-arc and all opinions are my own. Would love to own this book! Amazing book for a debut novel.
May 8, 2024
This was such an interesting read! I love the Olympus gods and goddesses so it was really interesting to learn more about the Egyptian gods and goddesses. The story with khaf and neferi was emotional and funny and just amazing in general! It had a mix of romance along with adventure and was in general a great story! I cannot wait for the second book to come out and read what happens next in the story it definitely had a HFN ending!
September 19, 2024
This was a wonderful fantasy read. I enjoyed following the characters Nefiri and Khafset in the story and loved their banter. The author did a great job of telling this tale in an engaging way as I was really rooting for the characters throughout the book. I loved the overall storyline and the characters journey as well as the Egyptian setting. Treasures of Egypt: The Spear & The Scythe did an excellent job of combining mythology and magic and was a great, adventure packed read.
Thank you @ourstreetbooks for the gifted copy of the book.
Thank you @ourstreetbooks for the gifted copy of the book.
June 25, 2024
Treasures of Egypt is a unique, adventure packed story that I quickly fell in love with. Not only did I fall in love with the story, but I fell in love with our main characters, Nefiri and Khafset. I am a sucker for mythology, Egyptian being a new one for me, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Once I got into the story and the characters, I did not want to put the book down. I had so many different feelings while reading - excited, nervous, happy, heartbroken. It was a great read and I would recommend this book to anyone, but especially fantasy and mythology lovers like myself. Add this to your TBR for October 2024!
May 30, 2024
A marvellous mixture of magic and mythology, with some flawed characters who try their best to move forward and grow.
There is evidence of the amount of time and attention Amr Saleh has spent to create this story, with how detailed the Ancient Egyptian mythology is. All the Gods and Goddesses are introduced as we meet them, with perfect portrayal of what they are known for. We are also introduced to Pharaohs of wide renown and those who have been forgotten because of history. I loved meeting Hatshepsut and looked into her more after finishing the book.
Now our main characters...they were both very flawed, their relationship very complicated yet when taking their age into factor it is very understandable. Both are young, with ambitions and plans for their own people, yet they have an attraction to each other. Nefiri's growth is clear throughout the book, with her starting off as a naive and single-minded being and ending with more tolerance towards others.
The red herring thrown in was done very well. All the setup was there and yet Amr manages to knock us off our perch before we realised we were on it.
Overall, a very good read and I look forward to the hinted second book!
There is evidence of the amount of time and attention Amr Saleh has spent to create this story, with how detailed the Ancient Egyptian mythology is. All the Gods and Goddesses are introduced as we meet them, with perfect portrayal of what they are known for. We are also introduced to Pharaohs of wide renown and those who have been forgotten because of history. I loved meeting Hatshepsut and looked into her more after finishing the book.
Now our main characters...they were both very flawed, their relationship very complicated yet when taking their age into factor it is very understandable. Both are young, with ambitions and plans for their own people, yet they have an attraction to each other. Nefiri's growth is clear throughout the book, with her starting off as a naive and single-minded being and ending with more tolerance towards others.
The red herring thrown in was done very well. All the setup was there and yet Amr manages to knock us off our perch before we realised we were on it.
Overall, a very good read and I look forward to the hinted second book!
May 2, 2024
I really liked this book. Egyptian mythology is one of my favorites, and I love reading about it and seeing other people's takes on it. I think Nefiri was a strong character who carried the book along with the rest of the characters. I love the author's interpretations and characterizations of the Egyptian deities and mythology. It was really great and it was paced well. The writing kept me engaged the entire time and I enjoyed it.
April 23, 2024
I am a huge fan of anything Mythology; from a young age, I have always been fascinated by it and I was not disappointed by this. I was captured right from the start and stayed up late to finish it!
Treasures of Egypt, was a beautifully written young adult novel that contains mythology, magic, romance and adventure. I look forward to reading more from this author!
Treasures of Egypt, was a beautifully written young adult novel that contains mythology, magic, romance and adventure. I look forward to reading more from this author!
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August 24, 2024From the moment I opened Treasures of Egypt: The Spear & the Scythe by Amr Saleh, I was completely immersed in the vibrant world of our reluctant heroine, Nefiri (Nefi Nef Nef!) and her little brother, Hote. Nef’s deep, unwavering love for her brother was so beautifully portrayed that I felt every ounce of her devotion and determination to protect him. Watching her navigate the challenges she faces for his sake was both inspiring and heartbreaking, pulling me deeper into her story with each turn of the page.
But it wasn’t just Nef who captured my attention; the cheeky thief, Khafset, stole my heart immediately with his charming wit, mischievous smile, and glowing amber eyes. Khaf was the perfect foil to Nefiri’s carefully laid-out plans. Their banter was a highlight for me—full of quips and playful tension. As the action took off at breakneck speed, I was drawn into Saleh’s dynamic adventure teeming with mystery, intensity, and a fascinating pantheon of Egyptian gods, each more intriguing and fearsome than the last. I didn’t know much about Egyptian mythology going in, but by the end, I had a new favorite god in Tawet!
The romance between Nef and Khaf was a sweet surprise, unfolding in a way that felt natural and unhurried amidst the chaos of their world. Their relationship added an extra layer of depth to the story without overshadowing the main plot. And just when I thought I had everything figured out, the plot threw in a twist that completely blindsided me—brilliantly done! All in all, Treasures of Egypt: The Spear & the Scythe is an explosive, action-packed, and thrilling ride—a sparkling gem for every treasure hunter out there to uncover!
But it wasn’t just Nef who captured my attention; the cheeky thief, Khafset, stole my heart immediately with his charming wit, mischievous smile, and glowing amber eyes. Khaf was the perfect foil to Nefiri’s carefully laid-out plans. Their banter was a highlight for me—full of quips and playful tension. As the action took off at breakneck speed, I was drawn into Saleh’s dynamic adventure teeming with mystery, intensity, and a fascinating pantheon of Egyptian gods, each more intriguing and fearsome than the last. I didn’t know much about Egyptian mythology going in, but by the end, I had a new favorite god in Tawet!
The romance between Nef and Khaf was a sweet surprise, unfolding in a way that felt natural and unhurried amidst the chaos of their world. Their relationship added an extra layer of depth to the story without overshadowing the main plot. And just when I thought I had everything figured out, the plot threw in a twist that completely blindsided me—brilliantly done! All in all, Treasures of Egypt: The Spear & the Scythe is an explosive, action-packed, and thrilling ride—a sparkling gem for every treasure hunter out there to uncover!
July 21, 2024
Firstly, I would like to thank the author, Amr Saleh, for an E-Arc of his debut novel. It's truly an honor to be given the opportunity.
Through the eyes of the main character, Nefiri, I was plunged into a world filled with love and sacrifice amidst a backdrop of heart-racing impending doom.
Amr's writing really brings forth wonderful words that draws his reader into Nefiri's world, who she is and who she would soon become.
Apart from lovely characters and their backstories and how that drives them forward by the challenges they face as the story progresses - there is so much beautiful Egyptian history embedded into the story. As someone who loves history, I couldn't pass up the opportunity to immerse myself in this story,
I highly recommend this story especially if you are looking for a fantasy story with history embedded within its pages.
Through the eyes of the main character, Nefiri, I was plunged into a world filled with love and sacrifice amidst a backdrop of heart-racing impending doom.
Amr's writing really brings forth wonderful words that draws his reader into Nefiri's world, who she is and who she would soon become.
Apart from lovely characters and their backstories and how that drives them forward by the challenges they face as the story progresses - there is so much beautiful Egyptian history embedded into the story. As someone who loves history, I couldn't pass up the opportunity to immerse myself in this story,
I highly recommend this story especially if you are looking for a fantasy story with history embedded within its pages.
June 10, 2024
I requested this ARC because the author reached out to see what my interest would be. I figured, "why not." The synopsis looked relatively okay, and I do enjoy a good fantasy story of Egyptian mythology. Let's just first address what the story is about: FMC and MMC pair together in an unlikely journey to save Egypt. Together, they journey to battle their gods, and face the "truth" of what they know versus what they have learned.
What I enjoyed: the retelling of Egyptian mythology
What I didn't enjoy: pretty much everything else. Harsh. I know. Specifically I disliked the FMC. Very annoying. I am trying to keep in mind that this is targeted as young adult, but how immature does she really need to be? Am I that ignorant? Then the relationship building between the two seems forced and VERY repetitive. After every mini adventure, it goes back to the whole "I hate you, but I like you" and "I can't like you because I'm Egyptian and you're not." It gets very old, very fast. Not every story needs to have a romance/relationship break after each step of their journey. I only really liked the FMC when she finally got her head out of her own dark orifice, and stopped being prideful. Maybe that's a part of the character development, but I just couldn't.
Honestly, I wanted to DNF this within the first few pages. But why 2 stars out of 5 when I wanted to DNF? Because despite the things that I disliked, the other things were redeeming enough that it wasn't a one star. Hopefully, this work gets a little more help with editing and the flow of things before it's publishing date.
Thank you to Netgalley, Collective Ink Limited | Our Street Books, and the author for allowing me to read this for an honest review.
What I enjoyed: the retelling of Egyptian mythology
What I didn't enjoy: pretty much everything else. Harsh. I know. Specifically I disliked the FMC. Very annoying. I am trying to keep in mind that this is targeted as young adult, but how immature does she really need to be? Am I that ignorant? Then the relationship building between the two seems forced and VERY repetitive. After every mini adventure, it goes back to the whole "I hate you, but I like you" and "I can't like you because I'm Egyptian and you're not." It gets very old, very fast. Not every story needs to have a romance/relationship break after each step of their journey. I only really liked the FMC when she finally got her head out of her own dark orifice, and stopped being prideful. Maybe that's a part of the character development, but I just couldn't.
Honestly, I wanted to DNF this within the first few pages. But why 2 stars out of 5 when I wanted to DNF? Because despite the things that I disliked, the other things were redeeming enough that it wasn't a one star. Hopefully, this work gets a little more help with editing and the flow of things before it's publishing date.
Thank you to Netgalley, Collective Ink Limited | Our Street Books, and the author for allowing me to read this for an honest review.
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November 11, 2024. . . This just isn’t cutting it for me. Thoughts on the first 18% to come. 😓
(FINAL REVIEW:)
Date read: September 25
I had a lot of hopes for this one. I’ve been wanting an Egyptian mythology inspired fantasy for a while, and so I was incredibly excited getting the chance to read this advanced reader’s copy. Sadly though, I just couldn’t find myself getting to the 20% mark without worsening the headache I was developing from reading it. 😓
I think my issues with it were the way in which the book was narrated. The narration style made the main character sound really immature for a 16-year-old and the love interest was also down right annoying. There were times where I thought I could push past this personal problem, but by the time I got to the part where the duo go after Set, I just couldn’t do it anymore. 😞
This might be for those who don’t mind having a rather modern like speech in a historical setting as well as a rather immature narration style, but for me personally, I really disliked it. 😔
I would like to say thank you to Our Street Books and NetGalley for accepting my request to read this in exchange for an honest review. I just wish I could have enjoyed it more. 😢
Publication date: October 1!
Overall: /5 ⭐️
(FINAL REVIEW:)
Date read: September 25
I had a lot of hopes for this one. I’ve been wanting an Egyptian mythology inspired fantasy for a while, and so I was incredibly excited getting the chance to read this advanced reader’s copy. Sadly though, I just couldn’t find myself getting to the 20% mark without worsening the headache I was developing from reading it. 😓
I think my issues with it were the way in which the book was narrated. The narration style made the main character sound really immature for a 16-year-old and the love interest was also down right annoying. There were times where I thought I could push past this personal problem, but by the time I got to the part where the duo go after Set, I just couldn’t do it anymore. 😞
This might be for those who don’t mind having a rather modern like speech in a historical setting as well as a rather immature narration style, but for me personally, I really disliked it. 😔
I would like to say thank you to Our Street Books and NetGalley for accepting my request to read this in exchange for an honest review. I just wish I could have enjoyed it more. 😢
Publication date: October 1!
Overall: /5 ⭐️
June 20, 2025
First, let me start by saying I’ve been sitting on this ARC ebook for a while now. When I saw it available and after reading the premise I instantly downloaded it. And there it sat in my to-do ARC box. I had such high hopes for this novel and I was afraid it would let me down and crush my dreams of finally finding an amazing Egyptian mythology-themed book.
I am delighted to say that I worried for nothing. Treasures of Egypt is the BEST mythology book I’ve read to date! I am so blown out of the water by this book it left me wanting more! I can’t wait to see more from Amr Saleh.
Let me start by saying Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and The Scythe is an amazingly well-written epic YA fantasy adventure that will keep readers on the edge of their seats. If you love a good epic fantasy with gods/goddesses, morally gray characters, hilarious banter, and found family vibes I highly recommend this book.
The world that Amr Saleh has created is beautiful and the character development is on point and our main female character, Nefiri, is very well-executed and relatable. Saleh has provided an extremely vivid world that sucks the reader in and spits you out with tears in your eyes by the end of the book.
There are other books based on Egyptian mythology but they always seem to be missing something for me to love the book, but Treasures of Egypt is now (and will be) one of my new recommendations for anyone who loves mythology books.
I am delighted to say that I worried for nothing. Treasures of Egypt is the BEST mythology book I’ve read to date! I am so blown out of the water by this book it left me wanting more! I can’t wait to see more from Amr Saleh.
Let me start by saying Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and The Scythe is an amazingly well-written epic YA fantasy adventure that will keep readers on the edge of their seats. If you love a good epic fantasy with gods/goddesses, morally gray characters, hilarious banter, and found family vibes I highly recommend this book.
The world that Amr Saleh has created is beautiful and the character development is on point and our main female character, Nefiri, is very well-executed and relatable. Saleh has provided an extremely vivid world that sucks the reader in and spits you out with tears in your eyes by the end of the book.
There are other books based on Egyptian mythology but they always seem to be missing something for me to love the book, but Treasures of Egypt is now (and will be) one of my new recommendations for anyone who loves mythology books.
May 24, 2024
DNF at 22% because I couldnt deal with the really annoying FMC anymore. Her idiocy and prejudice were just too much of an irritant to be able to get through. If she called the guy a Hypsos one time I’ll scream. It was the YA book equivalent of using the N word and it annoyed me to no end. Coupled with the misplaced dialogue, odd plot, weak inciting incident and characters who made no sense doing the things they did or being where they were, I just could not handle this silliness.
What is her brother sick with?
Why is she poor if shes apprentice to the second most powerful person in Egypt?
Why would the Queen Mother care who she is?
Why is Nefertari a villain?
A lot of this might have been explained later but i wasnt interested enough to get there cause the premise and initial chapters felt so juvenile.
I received an earc from Netgalley. All thoughts are my own.
What is her brother sick with?
Why is she poor if shes apprentice to the second most powerful person in Egypt?
Why would the Queen Mother care who she is?
Why is Nefertari a villain?
A lot of this might have been explained later but i wasnt interested enough to get there cause the premise and initial chapters felt so juvenile.
I received an earc from Netgalley. All thoughts are my own.
October 3, 2024
The following is an abridged version of my review. The full length version can be found on my site at www.readinghasruinedmylife.com
Thank you to Our Street Books and Collective Ink for sending me a copy of this book; they aren't paying me for my review, they just sent me the book for free.
Amr Saleh has a full content warning about his book over on his website. You can click here the following link for the full list: https://www.amrsalehduat.com/content-...
I will mention some of the big content and trigger warnings now though. Treasures of Egypt deals with child abuse and death, animal death, suicide, and various forms of racism and sexism. Please click the link above for the full list.
First of all, middle school me is living! She is having the time of her life. She is obsessed with this book simply because it takes place in ancient Egypt. I’ve lowkey healed my inner child with this book. That being said, do I think this title is good? Honestly, not really. Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and the Scythe is messy.
The author tries to make the main character relatable by having her inner monologue punctuated with sarcastic short sentences and exclamations to the point it comes across more as a major annoyance than anything close to being relatable. I wish this was my only issue with the writing, but as I said, things are messy. The dialogue is clunky at best, and the descriptions are few and far between.
Speaking of our main characters, they too aren’t great. Nefiri and Khafset have a Romeo and Juliet vibe going on. She’s Egyptian, he’s Hyksos; they can’t be together because of racism. Instead of getting down to the nitty-gritty of the issue and breaking down systemic racism even a little bit, Nefiri simply comments in her inner monologue that the two of them can’t be together then chooses not to care about what others may think at the end. Listen, not giving a shit about what racists have to say is great, but Nefiri and Khafset’s love story is not done well. The pair more or less declare their secret crushes on one another and become a couple just because. Most of their relationship is not shown, readers only see their relationship right before they begin their journey and get together. It’s not satisfying and I didn’t see the sparks between the two. Their chemistry was not there.
As far as the plot goes I once again have issues. Khafset knew his way through the realm of the gods with no problem, which Nefiri never questioned even though no living person has ever entered the realm. The Egyptian gods were basically Pokémon who gave the duo powerful gifts after the main characters met them. There were battles all throughout the read where the enemy, an ageless demon or angry god, was quickly dispatched by two mortals with very little combat training. Nefiri is told she can wield magic in this other realm and needs no training to do so, nor is there a hint of a learning curve. Everything worked out in the duo’s favor because it had to. Scenes were poorly connected by moments of Nefiri and Khafset supposedly falling harder for each other.
Yet despite it all, I enjoyed this read. Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and the Scythe healed my ancient Egypt loving inner child. Middle school me is very happy right now and I've rated this read higher than it probably should be.
Thank you once again to Collective Ink and Our Street Books for sending me a copy of this read.
Again, a full length version of my review can be found on my site www.readinghasruinedmylife.com where I post new reviews every Wednesday at noon EST.
Thank you to Our Street Books and Collective Ink for sending me a copy of this book; they aren't paying me for my review, they just sent me the book for free.
Amr Saleh has a full content warning about his book over on his website. You can click here the following link for the full list: https://www.amrsalehduat.com/content-...
I will mention some of the big content and trigger warnings now though. Treasures of Egypt deals with child abuse and death, animal death, suicide, and various forms of racism and sexism. Please click the link above for the full list.
First of all, middle school me is living! She is having the time of her life. She is obsessed with this book simply because it takes place in ancient Egypt. I’ve lowkey healed my inner child with this book. That being said, do I think this title is good? Honestly, not really. Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and the Scythe is messy.
The author tries to make the main character relatable by having her inner monologue punctuated with sarcastic short sentences and exclamations to the point it comes across more as a major annoyance than anything close to being relatable. I wish this was my only issue with the writing, but as I said, things are messy. The dialogue is clunky at best, and the descriptions are few and far between.
Speaking of our main characters, they too aren’t great. Nefiri and Khafset have a Romeo and Juliet vibe going on. She’s Egyptian, he’s Hyksos; they can’t be together because of racism. Instead of getting down to the nitty-gritty of the issue and breaking down systemic racism even a little bit, Nefiri simply comments in her inner monologue that the two of them can’t be together then chooses not to care about what others may think at the end. Listen, not giving a shit about what racists have to say is great, but Nefiri and Khafset’s love story is not done well. The pair more or less declare their secret crushes on one another and become a couple just because. Most of their relationship is not shown, readers only see their relationship right before they begin their journey and get together. It’s not satisfying and I didn’t see the sparks between the two. Their chemistry was not there.
As far as the plot goes I once again have issues. Khafset knew his way through the realm of the gods with no problem, which Nefiri never questioned even though no living person has ever entered the realm. The Egyptian gods were basically Pokémon who gave the duo powerful gifts after the main characters met them. There were battles all throughout the read where the enemy, an ageless demon or angry god, was quickly dispatched by two mortals with very little combat training. Nefiri is told she can wield magic in this other realm and needs no training to do so, nor is there a hint of a learning curve. Everything worked out in the duo’s favor because it had to. Scenes were poorly connected by moments of Nefiri and Khafset supposedly falling harder for each other.
Yet despite it all, I enjoyed this read. Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and the Scythe healed my ancient Egypt loving inner child. Middle school me is very happy right now and I've rated this read higher than it probably should be.
Thank you once again to Collective Ink and Our Street Books for sending me a copy of this read.
Again, a full length version of my review can be found on my site www.readinghasruinedmylife.com where I post new reviews every Wednesday at noon EST.
June 3, 2024
This book follows Neferi and Khafset. Nef in an attempt to save her ill brother she buys medicine from the thief Khafset of Avaris. One day Khaf asks for more than just money, he wants her to help him steal the spear of the Egyptian god of destruction . Nef is originally opposed to the idea of helping him steal but with no other way to get the medicine she agrees. At the last moment she changes her mind and tries to stop him from getting it and she ends up touching the spear. With that she frees the Egyptian god and unleashes a lot of problems upon Egypt. Now the both of them have to work together to undo all of this mess.
This book was phenomenal. It is the perfect mix of romance, mythology and fantasy! When i requested this book on Net Galley i didn't think i would love it this much but it has truly taken a place into my heart. It is so thrilling with lots of plot twists and you don't know the truth till the very last 5o pages.
The character development is one of my favorite parts . At the beginning Nefiri can't see how wrong her behavior is and neither can Khafset. But with the way they work together and with the help of all the Egyptian Gods they start to get better and the two of them at the end are very different from the two of them at the start of the book.
In this book a big part of it is Egyptian Mythology. You don't have to go in knowing anything about it cause everything is explained throughout the book. Amr Saleh has done an outstanding job at making us fall for this mythology and all of the gods. It was a very interesting aspect to the story and I want to see how he will use that aspect for the next book .
Nefiri and Khafset will leave in my mind rend free. Their relationship and friendship is my favorite part of this book. In a way a big aspect of this book is racism but it is shown in a very different way than just race differences. I wish I could have the second book in my hands right now but i do believe this is a book that you can also read as a standalone if you don't wish to read the next one. (but to be honest i don't think anyone wont want to continue this series )
This book is a 6 star read and I would recommend it to everyone who loves mythology and fantasy. The romance is subtle but still a major part of the book. You will be rooting for all of the characters by the end of the book and miss them as well. I will re read this for sure.
This book was phenomenal. It is the perfect mix of romance, mythology and fantasy! When i requested this book on Net Galley i didn't think i would love it this much but it has truly taken a place into my heart. It is so thrilling with lots of plot twists and you don't know the truth till the very last 5o pages.
The character development is one of my favorite parts . At the beginning Nefiri can't see how wrong her behavior is and neither can Khafset. But with the way they work together and with the help of all the Egyptian Gods they start to get better and the two of them at the end are very different from the two of them at the start of the book.
In this book a big part of it is Egyptian Mythology. You don't have to go in knowing anything about it cause everything is explained throughout the book. Amr Saleh has done an outstanding job at making us fall for this mythology and all of the gods. It was a very interesting aspect to the story and I want to see how he will use that aspect for the next book .
Nefiri and Khafset will leave in my mind rend free. Their relationship and friendship is my favorite part of this book. In a way a big aspect of this book is racism but it is shown in a very different way than just race differences. I wish I could have the second book in my hands right now but i do believe this is a book that you can also read as a standalone if you don't wish to read the next one. (but to be honest i don't think anyone wont want to continue this series )
This book is a 6 star read and I would recommend it to everyone who loves mythology and fantasy. The romance is subtle but still a major part of the book. You will be rooting for all of the characters by the end of the book and miss them as well. I will re read this for sure.
September 8, 2024
This book just didn't give what I wanted it to give. It started off well and I was excited to find out more about our main characters and the trials they would face to save Egypt, but it all went downhill the minute they stepped through the gateway.
All of the trials were grouped so close together and I wish Nefiri and Khaf had more time between each battle to develop their relationship and for us to learn more about them as their characters developed. The battles themselves felt a little underwhelming, and were sometimes over just as quickly as they started.
Nefiri was so annoying and I struggled to root for her as she wasn't giving me a lot of reasons to like her. The only time I did stick up for her is when Khaf took a hissy fit with her towards the end. That boy had messed her up so bad and was rather toxic in my opinion, but she managed to forgive him in the end.
*Spoilers*
An accident occurs during an altercation, which I feel wasn't her fault as it was explained that the bracelet she wore may try to protect her from harm, and Khaf is suddenly against helping her and hates her guts.
Khaf did worse things to her in order to complete his own master plan, and this made me lose so much interest in his character and tainted my opinions of him. It felt so out of character compared to how he was in the beginning. I don't mind a secret betrayal revealed at the end, as long as it is done well. This just made me hate his character and their whole relationship in general. The fact that Nefiri forgave him so easily for all of his betrayals made her seem desperate. He lied about the medicine he was selling to save her brother's life who ended up dying the minute she was gone! If that isn't a good reason to keep your distance, then I don't know what is.
I knew they were going to get together. It was obvious from page 1, but the moment they finally admitted they had feelings for each other felt forced and a little rigid. Nothing felt natural about it and after all that happened between them, I really didn't feel like they were a good match for each other. The foundation they built upon does not make for a great relationship.
I was happy to see that they saved Egypt and Nefiri fought to get the Hyksos the equality they deserved, but the cake scene stands out to me more than anything else did. If you've read it, you'll know what I'm talking about. I felt the whole cake thing wasn't necessary and just left me feeling irritated at the end.
All of the trials were grouped so close together and I wish Nefiri and Khaf had more time between each battle to develop their relationship and for us to learn more about them as their characters developed. The battles themselves felt a little underwhelming, and were sometimes over just as quickly as they started.
Nefiri was so annoying and I struggled to root for her as she wasn't giving me a lot of reasons to like her. The only time I did stick up for her is when Khaf took a hissy fit with her towards the end. That boy had messed her up so bad and was rather toxic in my opinion, but she managed to forgive him in the end.
*Spoilers*
An accident occurs during an altercation, which I feel wasn't her fault as it was explained that the bracelet she wore may try to protect her from harm, and Khaf is suddenly against helping her and hates her guts.
Khaf did worse things to her in order to complete his own master plan, and this made me lose so much interest in his character and tainted my opinions of him. It felt so out of character compared to how he was in the beginning. I don't mind a secret betrayal revealed at the end, as long as it is done well. This just made me hate his character and their whole relationship in general. The fact that Nefiri forgave him so easily for all of his betrayals made her seem desperate. He lied about the medicine he was selling to save her brother's life who ended up dying the minute she was gone! If that isn't a good reason to keep your distance, then I don't know what is.
I knew they were going to get together. It was obvious from page 1, but the moment they finally admitted they had feelings for each other felt forced and a little rigid. Nothing felt natural about it and after all that happened between them, I really didn't feel like they were a good match for each other. The foundation they built upon does not make for a great relationship.
I was happy to see that they saved Egypt and Nefiri fought to get the Hyksos the equality they deserved, but the cake scene stands out to me more than anything else did. If you've read it, you'll know what I'm talking about. I felt the whole cake thing wasn't necessary and just left me feeling irritated at the end.
May 18, 2024
Treasures of Egypt: The Spear and The Scythe is a must-read for everyone. Amr Saleh has arguably created one of the best stories I have read thus far. It's action-packed, full of emotions and drama, mystery and detective work, and all taking place during the historic reign of Ramesses II, the warrior pharaoh of Egypt, and his battle with the Hittites at the battle of Kadesh. The story is told from the perspective of Nef, a Numbian girl who is the apprentice to the vizier of Egypt. Nef's sole purpose is to save her younger brother, Hote, who is dying. She has sacrificed everything and everyone to help save her brother. This leads to the introduction of Setu and Khaft, the other characters in the story. Setu and Khaft are Hyksos, a group of people targeted by the Egyptian majority due to their ancestors usurping the throne the three centuries prior. Throughout the book, we learn more about the truth behind the hatred between the Hyksos and the Egyptians and realize that to survive, they must become one. This story is also a story of the five stages of acceptance, and Nef and the other main characters experience all five stages throughout the story. Her fate soon gets intertwined with Khaft as they must travel to the realm of the gods to save Egypt from destruction, and along their journey, secrets arise, and bonds are tested. Also, how can I forget the realm of the gods of Egyptian mythology? Amr painstakingly helps bring the world of the gods to life, with each deity acting as they have been recorded and documented over a millennium by historians and archeologists.
Furthermore, the author teases the existence of other gods from Asgardians, Romans, Greeks, and more. Everything in this story screams the work of a master storyteller. If anyone is looking for a new book to read for the fall season, I urge anyone and everyone to preorder a copy of this book, a thrilling adventure that will keep you on the edge of your seat.
Furthermore, the author teases the existence of other gods from Asgardians, Romans, Greeks, and more. Everything in this story screams the work of a master storyteller. If anyone is looking for a new book to read for the fall season, I urge anyone and everyone to preorder a copy of this book, a thrilling adventure that will keep you on the edge of your seat.
July 5, 2024
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review. I requested this as I was intrigued by the idea of a fantasy fiction set in Ancient Egypt - it wasn't something I'd seen before and the blurb sounded good. Sadly, I was dying to DNF already just after the first few pages but I powered through in order to give a full, honest review.
To start with and my main issues with this book, the writing is absolutely horrendous - it feels like a first draft that was never revised, from someone who had never written a single sentence before. There's SO many awkward sentences, weird phrasing, unnecessary details and nonsensical descriptions of what the characters were doing. The dialogue is so choppy and bizzarely written too. The entire book was punctuated with weird exclamations like "Great!" and "Curse him!" which felt so awkward. Sentences like "Leaning on his human-sized butcher knife" and "I chuckled, and my cold heart sank deeper with my chest’s vibration." (???) left me speechless, and there's so, so many of these like that, it was painful to read through 😅.
Writing aside, the characters were so unlikeable, immature and irritating. The romance felt so forced and repetitive and there was absolutely no chemistry between them, they just suddently apparently loved each other. The plot was poor at best and often made little sense. The constant racism also got really boring really quickly, it just never stopped and was sooo unnecessary. I'm sorry to say I can't really find any redeeming quality that would justify anything other than 1 stars.
To start with and my main issues with this book, the writing is absolutely horrendous - it feels like a first draft that was never revised, from someone who had never written a single sentence before. There's SO many awkward sentences, weird phrasing, unnecessary details and nonsensical descriptions of what the characters were doing. The dialogue is so choppy and bizzarely written too. The entire book was punctuated with weird exclamations like "Great!" and "Curse him!" which felt so awkward. Sentences like "Leaning on his human-sized butcher knife" and "I chuckled, and my cold heart sank deeper with my chest’s vibration." (???) left me speechless, and there's so, so many of these like that, it was painful to read through 😅.
Writing aside, the characters were so unlikeable, immature and irritating. The romance felt so forced and repetitive and there was absolutely no chemistry between them, they just suddently apparently loved each other. The plot was poor at best and often made little sense. The constant racism also got really boring really quickly, it just never stopped and was sooo unnecessary. I'm sorry to say I can't really find any redeeming quality that would justify anything other than 1 stars.
July 11, 2024
(3.5 rounded up to 4.0.)
I've enjoyed Ancient Egypt, its mythology and stories since I was a wee lassie, so I was drawn to this work like a moth to a flame. I loved the banter between Khafset (a Hyksos male) and Neferi (an Egyptian female). At first, their words were wounding to each other, like jabs from Set's spear, but in time it becomes friendlier. Nef also learns the truth of what she's been told in her lifetime as opposed to the lies. She also is made aware just how much Khaf knows about her gods and goddesses, and puts her to shame.
This book is for you, if:
1. You like Egyptian mythology/Egypt/magic;
2. You can turn your brain off, just go with the flow, and be transported into the story;
3. You like "The Mummy" and enjoy action and rooting for "The Chosen One" and "The Underdog"; or
4. You like flawed and complex characters who begin as enemies who fall in love.
I liked the way that the introduction of the Egyptian Gods and their particular backstroke happened throughout the book, rather than using a list at the start or the end. Sometimes these put me off reading a book. So thank you, Amr Saleh, for letting the stories be told when needed. I appreciated that very much. There are some minor errors that need to be fixed before publication, but apart from that, I really enjoyed this read and hope to read the second book in this series in the future.
I chose to read an ARC of this work, which I voluntarily and honestly read and reviewed. All opinions are my own. My thanks to the author, the publisher, and NetGalley.
I've enjoyed Ancient Egypt, its mythology and stories since I was a wee lassie, so I was drawn to this work like a moth to a flame. I loved the banter between Khafset (a Hyksos male) and Neferi (an Egyptian female). At first, their words were wounding to each other, like jabs from Set's spear, but in time it becomes friendlier. Nef also learns the truth of what she's been told in her lifetime as opposed to the lies. She also is made aware just how much Khaf knows about her gods and goddesses, and puts her to shame.
This book is for you, if:
1. You like Egyptian mythology/Egypt/magic;
2. You can turn your brain off, just go with the flow, and be transported into the story;
3. You like "The Mummy" and enjoy action and rooting for "The Chosen One" and "The Underdog"; or
4. You like flawed and complex characters who begin as enemies who fall in love.
I liked the way that the introduction of the Egyptian Gods and their particular backstroke happened throughout the book, rather than using a list at the start or the end. Sometimes these put me off reading a book. So thank you, Amr Saleh, for letting the stories be told when needed. I appreciated that very much. There are some minor errors that need to be fixed before publication, but apart from that, I really enjoyed this read and hope to read the second book in this series in the future.
I chose to read an ARC of this work, which I voluntarily and honestly read and reviewed. All opinions are my own. My thanks to the author, the publisher, and NetGalley.
April 23, 2024
4.5/5
"Treasures of Egypt" by Amr Saleh is like stepping into a time machine set to ancient Egypt, filled with treasure hunts, mysterious tombs, and modern-day excitement. If you've ever dreamt of exploring the wonders of the pyramids or unearthing hidden secrets beneath the desert sands, this book is your golden ticket to adventure!
Picture yourself alongside the protagonist, racing through bustling markets in Cairo, deciphering ancient hieroglyphics in forgotten temples, and facing down cunning villains in a quest for untold riches. Saleh's vivid descriptions make every scene come alive, immersing you in the sights, sounds, and smells of this magical land.
But it's not just about the action – the characters in "Treasures of Egypt" feel like friends you'd want by your side on any adventure. From the fearless archaeologist to the clever villain, each one is as real and relatable as the people you know in your own life. Their journey is full of twists and turns that will keep you guessing until the very end.
So, if you're ready to embark on the ultimate treasure hunt and experience the thrill of uncovering ancient mysteries, "Treasures of Egypt" is the book for you. Get ready to lose yourself in a world where history meets adventure, and the only limit is your imagination!
"Treasures of Egypt" by Amr Saleh is like stepping into a time machine set to ancient Egypt, filled with treasure hunts, mysterious tombs, and modern-day excitement. If you've ever dreamt of exploring the wonders of the pyramids or unearthing hidden secrets beneath the desert sands, this book is your golden ticket to adventure!
Picture yourself alongside the protagonist, racing through bustling markets in Cairo, deciphering ancient hieroglyphics in forgotten temples, and facing down cunning villains in a quest for untold riches. Saleh's vivid descriptions make every scene come alive, immersing you in the sights, sounds, and smells of this magical land.
But it's not just about the action – the characters in "Treasures of Egypt" feel like friends you'd want by your side on any adventure. From the fearless archaeologist to the clever villain, each one is as real and relatable as the people you know in your own life. Their journey is full of twists and turns that will keep you guessing until the very end.
So, if you're ready to embark on the ultimate treasure hunt and experience the thrill of uncovering ancient mysteries, "Treasures of Egypt" is the book for you. Get ready to lose yourself in a world where history meets adventure, and the only limit is your imagination!
August 8, 2024
I received an ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. Beware of possible spoilers.
I love the history of Egypt. I love the mythology, too. In fact, I'm always looking for more stories set in Egypt, which...there aren't a lot. So, when I saw this one on Netgalley, I knew I needed to read it. I was so ready to love it. The author clearly put a lot of love into the creation of this story. The settings are very well done and it does feel like you're in Egypt.
The novel itself is about an unlikely pair having to battle gods and their opinions as they try to save Egypt. The problem is, the characters are very flat. There isn't a lot to them. I saw just a glimmer of hope here and there, but the rest of the time it felt like they were just going through the motions, saying what they were supposed to say.
Additionally, when I first started reading it, I legit thought I was reading a sequel. There was just something about the writing that made me think I missed a whole other story I didn't read. The writing is just a little awkward with too modern catchphrases mixed with sentences that just weren't working, and I think it affected how I was absorbing the information. I honestly think it could do well with just a little more editing.
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for allowing me to read this in exchange for an honest review.
I love the history of Egypt. I love the mythology, too. In fact, I'm always looking for more stories set in Egypt, which...there aren't a lot. So, when I saw this one on Netgalley, I knew I needed to read it. I was so ready to love it. The author clearly put a lot of love into the creation of this story. The settings are very well done and it does feel like you're in Egypt.
The novel itself is about an unlikely pair having to battle gods and their opinions as they try to save Egypt. The problem is, the characters are very flat. There isn't a lot to them. I saw just a glimmer of hope here and there, but the rest of the time it felt like they were just going through the motions, saying what they were supposed to say.
Additionally, when I first started reading it, I legit thought I was reading a sequel. There was just something about the writing that made me think I missed a whole other story I didn't read. The writing is just a little awkward with too modern catchphrases mixed with sentences that just weren't working, and I think it affected how I was absorbing the information. I honestly think it could do well with just a little more editing.
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for allowing me to read this in exchange for an honest review.
October 2, 2024
💛🖤 Treasures of Egypt Review 🖤💛
Thank you so much to Amr Saleh for the opportunity to read and review this book
Treasures of Egypt is a historical fantasy novel. Sixteen year old Nefiri is an apprentice to the Grand Vizier and is determined to save her sick brother. When she has to team up with a thief, she finds herself in a battle to save all of Egypt
This was a fun read. I really enjoyed Nefiri and her growth throughout this book. I enjoyed watching her prejudices change over this book. Khaf was a good character and I thought he was a good match for Nefiri. I did feel like there were some points that felt a little long pacing-wise, but overall book had an enjoyable adventure story that integrated lots of Egyptian mythology, which was fun to read
Overall this was a fun 4 star read. I enjoyed these characters, this story and all the Egyptian mythology that played a part of the plot. This book did have some potential triggers, so please check if you’re sensitive. While this book did have a romantic subplot but, there was YA levels of on-page smut, so overall one flame for spice
If you’re a fan of Egyptian mythology, YA adventures and epic quests, then absolutely pick this one up!
Thank you so much to Amr Saleh for the opportunity to read and review this book
Treasures of Egypt is a historical fantasy novel. Sixteen year old Nefiri is an apprentice to the Grand Vizier and is determined to save her sick brother. When she has to team up with a thief, she finds herself in a battle to save all of Egypt
This was a fun read. I really enjoyed Nefiri and her growth throughout this book. I enjoyed watching her prejudices change over this book. Khaf was a good character and I thought he was a good match for Nefiri. I did feel like there were some points that felt a little long pacing-wise, but overall book had an enjoyable adventure story that integrated lots of Egyptian mythology, which was fun to read
Overall this was a fun 4 star read. I enjoyed these characters, this story and all the Egyptian mythology that played a part of the plot. This book did have some potential triggers, so please check if you’re sensitive. While this book did have a romantic subplot but, there was YA levels of on-page smut, so overall one flame for spice
If you’re a fan of Egyptian mythology, YA adventures and epic quests, then absolutely pick this one up!
September 19, 2024
Thank you to the author and Netgalley for this e-ARC in exchange for my honest review.
I've always been drawn to Egyptian mythology, but I don't read nearly enough of it. So, when the author offered me a chance to read their book, I was excited to dive in. Unfortunately, I had to DNF at 34%. While I did enjoy the elements of Egyptian mythology that were present, that was the only aspect I really connected with.
I felt the story would have greatly benefited from a glossary or more background information on the different warring factions. In this case, I think an info dump would have been helpful, as I often found myself confused.
The book is also very dialogue-heavy, which didn’t quite work for me. Though it's categorized as YA, it reads more like a middle-grade story, particularly because the FMC came across as immature and difficult to relate to. While this one wasn’t for me, I’m sure other readers might appreciate it more.
I've always been drawn to Egyptian mythology, but I don't read nearly enough of it. So, when the author offered me a chance to read their book, I was excited to dive in. Unfortunately, I had to DNF at 34%. While I did enjoy the elements of Egyptian mythology that were present, that was the only aspect I really connected with.
I felt the story would have greatly benefited from a glossary or more background information on the different warring factions. In this case, I think an info dump would have been helpful, as I often found myself confused.
The book is also very dialogue-heavy, which didn’t quite work for me. Though it's categorized as YA, it reads more like a middle-grade story, particularly because the FMC came across as immature and difficult to relate to. While this one wasn’t for me, I’m sure other readers might appreciate it more.
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