“I have never once in my life had control. I’ve always been told what to do, where to go, who to be with. I am reclaiming my life, starting with you. I’m choosing you.”
This was a nice surprise! I was expecting *yet another* romantasy novel with not much plot, but a looooooong slow burn between a generic morally-grey shadow daddy and a superpowered silver-haired ingénue who hates him but desires him at the same time. *yawn* But this book went in a direction I wasn’t expecting—and thank gods for that. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It’s a solid debut novel and I’m looking forward to continuing the series, but I do hope future ARCs will be more heavily edited.
Note: I received an ARC from the author in exchange for honest feedback.
❤️ Likeable characters
❤️ Captivating, yet very accessible, worldbuilding dans lore
❤️ Vivid, evocative descriptions
❌ Too many POV switches
❌ Stupid decision bonanza
❌ Choppy writing and typos (was probably fixed since I read the ARC)
Plot:
Evren is a prisoner in her own home. The only daughter of the High Ruler, she is told again and again that her sole purpose in life is to marry and then breed many heirs. With the help of her brother, she runs away to escape a forced marriage to a cruel and abusive male. But Evren knows nothing of the world outside her home, and her magical abilities still haven’t manifested. She is alone and vulnerable—and a dangerous bounty hunter is soon on her trail.
Dark magic and curses, angst, sibling love, and lots of tension with a hint of open-door, but not very explicit, spice. What more could a girl want? This book is fast-paced and hard to put down, with some plot twists that were predictable, and others you won’t see coming.
The author labelled it as having the enemies-to-lovers trope, but it really doesn’t. I’d say it’s more like instalove on the MMC’s part, and hate-to-love on the FMC’s (but then again, the hate part is very short, thank gods). I thought it was delightful and refreshing. Maybe I’m becoming bored with the genre, but I was happy not to read another absurdly long slow burn with way too many near-misses and “I hate you” lines.
The only thing that annoyed me a little about the pace and structure: the POV switches. They got a little out of control at some point, and I feel like things would have been better with only Evren and Delrik’s POVs. There is one specific chapter where the narrator, a villain, spoils a plot twist that would have been much more impactful if it had been revealed later, when reading from the MCs’ POV. I hope that in the next installments, the chapters will be a little longer, and more centred on limited characters.
Also, some inconsistencies could have been reworked a little: stupid decisions, wonky mind control parameters, characters not mourning after a death, etc.
Characters:
If you follow my reviews, then you know that this is usually where I get the most critical. I’m easily annoyed by characters and badly written character arcs or development (or lack of), except when I’m reading TJ Klune, the absolute character wizard. But I quite liked the characters in this one. I felt like Evren was very relatable. She was naïve but not stupid, slightly incompetent at first, inexperienced but sexually curious. She was not defined solely by her trauma. Delrik was a cheeky one, and I loved it. Such a flirt! Love them together.
Note: Maybe it’s just me, but having characters named Adaris and Aramis drove me nuts. There aren’t that many characters in the story, so why name two of them so similarly?! Aargh.
Writing:
I feel like I should abstain from commenting on the writing, because I seriously have no idea what the final result looks like. But as a professional writer myself, I was shocked by the state of the writing in the ARC I received. I felt like, writing-wise, I had been sent a very early draft. I’m not talking about a typo here and there—I’m talking typos, missing words, repetitions, choppy sentences, lines that make absolutely no sense no matter how many times you read them. It was very distracting at times…
I could tell the writer is probably very skilled, given the vocabulary, the pace, the dialogues, the descriptions, etc. But this draft should have been heavily edited before being called an ARC. I felt like more of a beta reader. I hope the author takes this into account for the next installments of this series.
That said, I thought Adams’ writing has huge potential—the descriptions, especially, were stellar and made it so easy to imagine the characters, settings, clothes, actions, etc.—and I can’t wait to read the final version.