great story! peter butcher living life, people getting in the way, telling him things he'd prefer not to hear. he unloads cellophane at the bay street paper company w/a colorful co-worker. jacksonville.
some funny happenings w/this old buck by the name of winekoff. great suitcase metaphor! i know people like that!
this girl, sarah, gets to pete. things happen. good things. bad things. they make do.
i like how crews will tell in the narrative, say something the character is thinking, and then the next time the character speaks, he mouths those words, "i respect you for this." i read that and say, nice, that's how it goes. looked for an example to post but no can do at the moment. he does it often enough that you notice.
a bunch of characters, pete, sarah, max winekoff, linga, mrs. leemer, george. yaks. heh heh!
update, 22 jun 13, saturday early evening, 6:15 p.m.
reading this one again...perhaps the 3rd or 4th read as i wait for a purchase or three to arrive in the mail.
story begins:
pete butcher had not meant to speak to her. and he probably would not have if she had not stared at him so directly as she stepped out of the shade of the oak tree in front of her house to stand in the sun on the sidewalk. the only place he had seen her before was in the yard, close to the trunk of the tree, dim as a ghost in the deep shade. but this morning he had to pass within a foot or two of her because she had come out to stand on the sidewalk. he could, of course, cross the street, but that wouldn't do now that she had her eyes locked directly on his.
scar lover, harry crews, 1992
dedicated: this book is dedicated to my main most man, sean penn
a quote: guilt is magic james dickey
onward and upward
time place scene settings
*the time is three years after the end of the korean war although i didn't really note this until this, the 3rd or 4th reading...there is little in the story to indicate a time...could be 1956 or it could be 2014
*place is jacksonville, florida
*bay street paper company where pete works unloading boxcars
*st johns river
*a diner where pete goes for cigarettes
*the boardinghouse where pete stays
*the leemers' residence, next door to the boardinghouse
*an ambulance parked out front the leemers' place
*main street
*a taxi
*memorial hospital...emergency room
*the jacksonville zoo...the yak cage...lion cage
*a store that sells harmonicas
*the trout river bridge
*the woodpile out back of the leemers'
*the mortuary of perpetual care
*this fugue state brick building where pete's younger brother is kept
*george's hudson hornet...29 coats of paint on it, give or take
*a flatbed truck
*cedar creek swamp
*a trailer surrounded by dogs where george/pete pick up a flatbed truck
*a purple double-wide trailer in cedar swamp where linga/george live and where they have the burning
characters, major minor scene setting so forth so on
*pete butcher...from south georgia, a place he is trying has been trying to shed, was in the u.s.m.c....tried to attend the university of florida but left after a short time, his folks dead in an accident w/a sunoco truck, his older brother not speaking to him, his younger brother in a place--crippled from pete hitting him between the eyes w/a hammer yay ago
*sarah leemer...the girl "who had brought pete home."
*a dirty little man passing blood (in san francisco where else)
*pete's mother father dead
*Jon...Jonathan, pete's crippled brother, is seven years old, damaged since the age of 4
*an older brother in the army
*max winekoff, 85-yr-old, walks and bends
*george, the burnt nigger, the burnt one, dickless one, linga's...pete's co-worker at the bay street paper company, rastafarian...george and linga will have been toether 10 years 3/4s-way into the story
*foreman at the paper company
*forklifts known by their numbers
*truck drivers
*two other men
*linga, rastafarian, obeah woman, bastard daughter of a wealthy white man, george and her from jamaica
*a black guy from georgia, usmc
*pete's landlady, mrs jackson
*a tutor (pete hired to shed his south georgia accent)
*everybody he knew back on the farm in south georgia
*3 jewish boys from miami beach
*his other blood kin
*a puffy, middle-aged drunk who snored w/his head down on the table (the cook's brother/ at the diner)
*a waitress stood near the grill reading a movie magazine
*the cook...and his old lady
*the boss (of the diner)
*construction workers (brdnghs)
*a small army of sullen black girls (brdnghse)
*henry sterns leemer, sarah's old man, cuts wood to sell to those who burn it winter
*two young men dressed in white
*gertrude leemer, sarah's mother, has had both breasts removed recently, been married to henry leemer for 43 years.
*cabby...taxi that pete/sarah use
*two men to wheel a bloody cot through
*whoever was on the cot groaned under the heavy gauze
*the man next to pete
*variously damaged people
*a nurse sat behind a desk
*a woman who held a screaming child
*somebody was wheeled in on an ambulance dolly
*a very small, yellow oriental
*a number of small children
*the parents of the children
*a pretty little girl w/a mouthful of silver braces
*a small group of men...first baptist's summer for christ's children...(as in the knockout artist...the teachers there in new orleans w/the pink tee-shirts)
*pete's mother's four brothers, his uncles, all dead before 40, hearts
*the young man behind the counter
*people turning on the sidewalk to stare at him
*uncles on his daddy's side of the family
*mr leemer's mama
*his grandparents' funerals
*a man w/a deeply sympathetic voice
*a nurse, a doctor
*a boy in the corps
*private tutoes...linga, england...so she speaks w/an english accent though she is jamaican
*a wealthy white man who is her father
*the funeral director, mortuary of perpetual care
*the mortician at the same place
*hundreds of guys in the corps smoke
*converts to linga's form of rastafarianism
*a prematurely balding young man (mortuary)
*two young black men stood on either side of a gurney (mortuary)
*a corpse
*a young lady back there (mortuary)
*men and women wearing gauze masks and rubber gloves
*corpses, men and women, were bedded down on shelves
*fugue state time passage, a man wearing khaki trousers and a sweater w/a red tie under it
*many men and women
*a long ward w/nothing but young children
*young black men
*daddy's laywer
*george's friend who has the flatbed...we never see him...out in the cedar swamp though we see the dogs around his trailer where they fetch the flatbed...george and pete
this is what i meant earlier, from the text this is
there's this scene where pete is carrying max winekoff who'd been bent double--he bends and walks, remember--pete started around the side of the porch to the stairs leading up the back of the boardinghouse, carrying mr. winekoff--still bent double--like a suitcase.
"you're carrying me just like a suitcase," mr. winekoff said.
context is all...here's another: oops...thought i indexed it...not. but there's more to follow. i'm up to page 181 here, bout a hundred to go.
update, finished reading this one again...last night, 9:30 p.m. e.s.t. 23 jun 13, sunday...i'd like to say hi to the n.s.a....to all others, greetings from the authoritarian-ship
seems like the first half of this story is a bit more polished than the 2nd part...funnier, too. satirical...and there is the gratifying cha-cha-cha-changes by part two. ask alfie. it's what it's all about. wish i had marked those...two other places like i noted above...but the above does provide a bit of the flavor crews uses. there's a sense that crews was as surprised by what his characters say and do as the reader. booga booga.