HELLO! I just want you to know that it is not safe to read this review unless you have read the book. Bear with me, please. This contains explicit content as well as pieces of informations from the book itself also known as spoilers. If you want to know how I've seen it after, or how I felt about it, don't say I didn't warn you. But please feel free to read (: xx
Okay, um how do I start this?
Say, I guessed it right, the whole "it's her kid! I knew it!" thing. It was already hinted at part 2 that there was something that Katie was hiding. But the Denise part was something. I won't say that it surprises me or something but it wasn't something to be said as big a deal.
The whole time throughout the three books that the authors kept on shifting from present to past and past to present tense sort of ruined the whole thing. It was confusing. One moment Katie's talking about now and the next thing it was like seven years ago. I mean, they should've italicized the letters for better reading comprehension, you know?
Okay, another one was the prologue of this part 3. This totally confused me. Because you know back in part two, it ended with Matt on the phone with Brandon, right? Okay, let's get this straight. We now all know it was Will, who died of a heart attack *may his soul rest in peace* how on earth was he involved with this? Or, let me rephrase that one, why does he partake a part of a POV in this story? You know at first I thought it was Brandon, but then he was watching a couple and he was watching the girl being happy and far from the gold digger they thought so he must be talking about Katie. Then, I thought, it was weird, Matt called and he said "he loved when one of his sons called" so I was like, WTH Matt is Brandon's son? (And you see, I was wrong about that.) So I had to re-read the prologue 3-5 times, I think before I decided to move on and just find out how it was related.
Okay, another one. Um, the plot. Right. The plot. I am big into plots. And this didn't even satisfied my hunger for it. All throughout the story I was expecting some big fancy plot. I thought some grande shit was going to get on. Then and there Brandon revealed how he planned the whole seven years. That was just creepy. Like stalker creepy. I was not proud of it. I know the whole idea was of breaking Katie's heart all throughout the story and he succeeded in that. But the point of using and dumping and using again and to telling her that he loves her. Wrong move dude, just so wrong! I was into expecting more of um, say, Maria kidnapping Katie and Brandon comes like a knight in shining armor and all those things? Plus the blackmailing things that could just top it off? Hauling them to traps, shits and craps like those? It could've been more exciting for me. But yeah, that's just for me.
As much as I loathed the planned seven years, the plan was actually brilliant. I mean, who thought a man not easily satiable with sex could wait and abstain for seven years? Um, way to go, bruh! I mean, is that even possible? Ignoring ones libido? That's just hard for a man like him who's very active in sex. I just have to say this one you know? It hard to shake out of my system. ((:
How do I end this review? I've never given up a two stars you know, but it's actually hard not to.
I did expect something from this novella.