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MR. DENVER
Kyle Denver, 26 years old
He's controlling, perfectionist and sinfully handsome. He's a workaholic who doesn't really understand how time works. After 9 years of hard work, he got the billionaire title. Instead of enjoying life like all other billionaires do, he keeps working making all his employees work on weekends and holidays.
Dakota Lennix, 25 years old
Kyle Denver's secretary for 5 years and she's the best secretary that's ever been working with him. She loves her job so much that she sometimes sleeps with her secretary clothes on because she never knows when Kyle will call her. As much as she loves her job, she.. has to quit.
He's controlling, perfectionist and sinfully handsome. He's a workaholic who doesn't really understand how time works. After 9 years of hard work, he got the billionaire title. Instead of enjoying life like all other billionaires do, he keeps working making all his employees work on weekends and holidays.
Dakota Lennix, 25 years old
Kyle Denver's secretary for 5 years and she's the best secretary that's ever been working with him. She loves her job so much that she sometimes sleeps with her secretary clothes on because she never knows when Kyle will call her. As much as she loves her job, she.. has to quit.
193 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 6, 2024
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July 5, 2025
This book feels like it was written by a child…and not a very bright one. I want these hours of my life back.
August 3, 2024
Liked the storyline but the grammar and the sentence structure were hideous. Please correct it!
September 14, 2024
I couldn’t get passed the grammar, flow and errors what a shame the blurb held so much promise, a good edit would sort it out I’m sure
April 18, 2025
poor grammar, lots of typos.
July 30, 2024
Entertaining but predictable
Rated 2 stars. Interesting at first, but ended up being predictable. The whole mafia bit was random and didn’t add anything to the story. Picking up 2 years later and then getting back together in the span of a couple of days without any developments seemed rushed. What was the point of Amanda and Logan’s storyline? I kept reading thinking something more was coming and then it ends. Lots of grammatical errors.
Rated 2 stars. Interesting at first, but ended up being predictable. The whole mafia bit was random and didn’t add anything to the story. Picking up 2 years later and then getting back together in the span of a couple of days without any developments seemed rushed. What was the point of Amanda and Logan’s storyline? I kept reading thinking something more was coming and then it ends. Lots of grammatical errors.
April 12, 2025
Good read
not gonna lie I found this on facebook, bought it on Kindle. It was a quick read, but too quick, left too much out in certain parts. lots of spelling errors. But okay book.
not gonna lie I found this on facebook, bought it on Kindle. It was a quick read, but too quick, left too much out in certain parts. lots of spelling errors. But okay book.
April 16, 2025
Is this AI or is this the author's 1st attempt at writing a story?
Very hard to read and follow along. Spelling, grammar and storyline errors in almost every paragraph and single page. The conversations were mismatched and I was never sure who was actually speaking. Way too many angles, Mafia for 3 pages, cheating 1 paragraph, jealousy 1/2 paragraph, coma, run away, new love interest, a prince, arranged marriage, bath tub, pregnancy. It felt like the author was trying to touch every romance concept and it didn't make sense. I really cannot recommend this book until it is edited and the storyline is rebuilt and organized.
Very hard to read and follow along. Spelling, grammar and storyline errors in almost every paragraph and single page. The conversations were mismatched and I was never sure who was actually speaking. Way too many angles, Mafia for 3 pages, cheating 1 paragraph, jealousy 1/2 paragraph, coma, run away, new love interest, a prince, arranged marriage, bath tub, pregnancy. It felt like the author was trying to touch every romance concept and it didn't make sense. I really cannot recommend this book until it is edited and the storyline is rebuilt and organized.
May 13, 2025
This hurt my brain to read.
This book was genuinely difficult to get through. I'm all for supporting new and aspiring writers, but before publishing a work—especially one being sold—it’s crucial to have it reviewed by a few readers or a professional editor.
Mr. Denver had potential as a short story, but as a full-length book, it fell flat. The writing lacked structure, the characters had no emotional depth, and overall, it felt rushed and underdeveloped. With some thorough proofreading and attention to narrative flow, there’s a chance this story could shine. But as it stands, this was one of the most poorly written books I’ve read.
This book was genuinely difficult to get through. I'm all for supporting new and aspiring writers, but before publishing a work—especially one being sold—it’s crucial to have it reviewed by a few readers or a professional editor.
Mr. Denver had potential as a short story, but as a full-length book, it fell flat. The writing lacked structure, the characters had no emotional depth, and overall, it felt rushed and underdeveloped. With some thorough proofreading and attention to narrative flow, there’s a chance this story could shine. But as it stands, this was one of the most poorly written books I’ve read.
July 10, 2025
very cute love story
I have read 64 love stories in the past two months. Although this book contains some grammatical and sentence structure errors, it is not overly complicated like the last four books I read, which each had 900 ongoing chapters. This book features endearing characters and an excellent plot structure, culminating in a beautiful ending. Overall, it's a real feel-good read.
I have read 64 love stories in the past two months. Although this book contains some grammatical and sentence structure errors, it is not overly complicated like the last four books I read, which each had 900 ongoing chapters. This book features endearing characters and an excellent plot structure, culminating in a beautiful ending. Overall, it's a real feel-good read.
July 12, 2025
I wish I could give half a star
If you are an avid reader steer clear of this grammar and syntax catastrophe. The overall idea of the plot is cute but extremely tough to keep up with. The poor structure, holes in the storyline and more made what should have been a seamless read drag on. I rolled my eyes at several descriptions like "down there" and others. It seemed the author was a juvenile writing an adult novel. Sad I even paid .99 for it.
If you are an avid reader steer clear of this grammar and syntax catastrophe. The overall idea of the plot is cute but extremely tough to keep up with. The poor structure, holes in the storyline and more made what should have been a seamless read drag on. I rolled my eyes at several descriptions like "down there" and others. It seemed the author was a juvenile writing an adult novel. Sad I even paid .99 for it.
July 31, 2024
I might be a sucker for romance
Yes there is a lot of grammar errors but the story line is AMAZING. If you got ADHD you’ll automatically fix the grammar in your head so it’s not like it was as big of a deal as it was for some. When a book can make you laugh, cry and giggle you know it’s a damn good book. Even with its quirks.
Yes there is a lot of grammar errors but the story line is AMAZING. If you got ADHD you’ll automatically fix the grammar in your head so it’s not like it was as big of a deal as it was for some. When a book can make you laugh, cry and giggle you know it’s a damn good book. Even with its quirks.
January 17, 2025
Wtf did I just read?
Initially it was off to an okay start, could use some editing but… it was okay. But half way in, it went to hell in a hand basket. Did they change writers midways? Idk 🤦🏾♀️ I guess it was worth the $.99. I would’ve been thoroughly pissed if I used one of those pay by chapters app.
Initially it was off to an okay start, could use some editing but… it was okay. But half way in, it went to hell in a hand basket. Did they change writers midways? Idk 🤦🏾♀️ I guess it was worth the $.99. I would’ve been thoroughly pissed if I used one of those pay by chapters app.
April 8, 2025
DNF at 15% mark. This book had promise but it turned out to be an absolute hot mess. The author clearly does not speak English as their primary language. Sentence structure was stilted and the grammatical errors were just too much. Definitely not an enjoyable read. I'm surprised that a book can be listed on Amazon for sale without having gone through a review for grammar and typos.
May 7, 2025
Meh
It started out interesting then it tanked after they found out who each other really were. The gramma was terrible. Had a bit of a head ache correcting it in my head especially the tenses. Fluidity and character development was poor. Some parts of the story were unnecessary and bordering on ridiculous. But seeing it was £0.78 I got my moneys worth then.
It started out interesting then it tanked after they found out who each other really were. The gramma was terrible. Had a bit of a head ache correcting it in my head especially the tenses. Fluidity and character development was poor. Some parts of the story were unnecessary and bordering on ridiculous. But seeing it was £0.78 I got my moneys worth then.
May 16, 2025
It’s a good short story
Ok, I really enjoyed the story line. Yes, there’s some grammatical errors but my focus was on the storyline. The couple is adorable and I loved how the Female lead worked out her mistakes. It’s a good story, but if you are anal about all the grammar, then this is not the story for you.
Ok, I really enjoyed the story line. Yes, there’s some grammatical errors but my focus was on the storyline. The couple is adorable and I loved how the Female lead worked out her mistakes. It’s a good story, but if you are anal about all the grammar, then this is not the story for you.
June 14, 2025
Terrible
The book needs severe editing. There is a lot of unnecessary dialogue. The story is all over the place. Seems like a really young person wrote this book. I got this book because I read a couple chapters on Facebook. Come to find out it's a completely different book. I'm glad I spent less than 5 bucks on this book. Do not recommend.
The book needs severe editing. There is a lot of unnecessary dialogue. The story is all over the place. Seems like a really young person wrote this book. I got this book because I read a couple chapters on Facebook. Come to find out it's a completely different book. I'm glad I spent less than 5 bucks on this book. Do not recommend.
June 10, 2024
would have been good book
If only written by a grown up. It’s so juvenile that I can’t believe it got published. I’m sure it was written by someone who doesn’t have English as their language and hopefully it was translated incorrectly. It was extremely hard to read.
If only written by a grown up. It’s so juvenile that I can’t believe it got published. I’m sure it was written by someone who doesn’t have English as their language and hopefully it was translated incorrectly. It was extremely hard to read.
June 25, 2024
Beautiful Love Story
This was a great beginning. The unfolding twist of these two people meeting in different cities that have already known each other for five years was great. Love always wins!!
This was a great beginning. The unfolding twist of these two people meeting in different cities that have already known each other for five years was great. Love always wins!!
August 1, 2024
Not worth it
The verbiage, language spelling all a major turn off for this book. Wasn't horrible I only finished because I hate DNF books. So I hustled through. But surely just not worth it.
The verbiage, language spelling all a major turn off for this book. Wasn't horrible I only finished because I hate DNF books. So I hustled through. But surely just not worth it.
December 16, 2024
Good storyline but....
Good story, but it needs a LOT of proofreading and fixing. Sometimes, it gets confusing with all the grammar errors. The writer needs to proofread and actually fix the many mistakes.
Good story, but it needs a LOT of proofreading and fixing. Sometimes, it gets confusing with all the grammar errors. The writer needs to proofread and actually fix the many mistakes.
February 19, 2025
Needs editing but ok for 0.99
The book was ok but there were a lot of misspelling, grammatical errors and at time sentences didn’t make sense almost as if a poor translation to English.
The book was ok but there were a lot of misspelling, grammatical errors and at time sentences didn’t make sense almost as if a poor translation to English.
April 8, 2025
horrific writing
This is obviously a first draft. The story line could be good but a lot of incomplete thoughts are random storylines that have not bearing to the main storyline. I regret spending $1 on this book
This is obviously a first draft. The story line could be good but a lot of incomplete thoughts are random storylines that have not bearing to the main storyline. I regret spending $1 on this book
April 21, 2025
This is a Short story
It was a decent read, lots of grammar errors but not horrible. The story didn’t drag on. Went a little too fast and probably could have been longer. But over all worth the read if you are looking for something to fill your time.
It was a decent read, lots of grammar errors but not horrible. The story didn’t drag on. Went a little too fast and probably could have been longer. But over all worth the read if you are looking for something to fill your time.
May 5, 2025
started out interesting
Started out interesting, but the more involved the worse the sentence structure, wording a storyline became. I hope the author gets a better publication technique.
Started out interesting, but the more involved the worse the sentence structure, wording a storyline became. I hope the author gets a better publication technique.
May 18, 2025
wonderful story
Absolutely loved the story line and the characters the only thing I wish was that the story was longer . There were a few typos but nothing that really hurt the book. It was a wonderful book and would recommend to all of my girlies who love a good romance book!
Absolutely loved the story line and the characters the only thing I wish was that the story was longer . There were a few typos but nothing that really hurt the book. It was a wonderful book and would recommend to all of my girlies who love a good romance book!
June 1, 2025
Good storyline, could benefit from an editor
Good storyline overall, confusing at times, and poor grammar. Would benefit a bunch of proof reading and some rephrasing and restructure by an editor.
Good storyline overall, confusing at times, and poor grammar. Would benefit a bunch of proof reading and some rephrasing and restructure by an editor.
June 14, 2025
The story line itself was good but the way it was written and the vocabulary, it was all over the place. It’s okay as it’s a quick read but it would’ve been better if there was better details and set scenes and timeline.
June 24, 2025
wack!
Story is cliche. (I knew it would be but…🙄)
The story line jumps all over the place and the character conversations jump just as hard. I found this book on a Facebook ad…I knew better so the 99¢ loss is on me.
Story is cliche. (I knew it would be but…🙄)
The story line jumps all over the place and the character conversations jump just as hard. I found this book on a Facebook ad…I knew better so the 99¢ loss is on me.
July 2, 2025
Can't believe I paid even 99c for this, when so many great books are free with my Kindle Unlimited🤨 has terrible editing! story could be good but it's almost as if AI written, ir badly translated from another language?, character-he/she mixed up, weird sayings and descriptions
July 12, 2025
Mr. Denver
It's a cute little love story about two people being matched together by their grandfather's that are friends. How it starts out as duty to please their grandfather's but turns into love. They have their ups and downs but finally realized they love each other.
It's a cute little love story about two people being matched together by their grandfather's that are friends. How it starts out as duty to please their grandfather's but turns into love. They have their ups and downs but finally realized they love each other.
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