Okay, so I have some pretty mixed feelings about this book. In a nutshell, though, I liked it enough that I will read the second book, particularly towards the middle of the book when the plot really got going. Once it did, it hooked me, and I finished this book in a day.
Let's start with what I liked about it. First and foremost, I think the plot and world-building in this book are incredibly original. I've read quite a few 'romantasy' books in the past year or so, and this one is not like anything I've read. The premise was easy enough to understand but left enough room for unexpected plot twists. This book kept me guessing until the end and was not what I thought it would be, which I liked. I also liked the personalities of many of the characters, and the author does a good job of creating endearing and memorable personas. Selene grew on me, and I'm excited to see how she continues to evolve in book two.
There were a couple of things I didn't like. First of all, I had an issue with the sentence structure in many parts of the book. I know it's self-published, so some of that is to be expected. Still, beyond the occasional grammar error, the way some of the sentences were written interrupted the flow of the prose. I think this book may have benefitted from some more rigorous line editing. The other thing that bothered me is that the relationships in part one happened quickly and not necessarily in a way that I found believable. Both the romantic interest and the friendships in part one felt nearly instantaneous and rushed, and I felt like they were missing something. This issue is remedied somewhat in parts two and three, where new and existing relationships are more carefully developed. Still, something about the pacing of the relationships from part one feels off.
Again, all in all, I liked this book, and I will definitely read book two. However, I thought it was a bit polarizing; the good aspects were really good, and the not-so-good aspects were very lacking, in my opinion. All things considered, it lands somewhere in the middle, so I give it three stars. I'm excited to read book two!