So, first of all, I want to say that I really loved the whole concept of the story, an evil God trapped inside this young girl's body; however, I did have some issues with how the story unfolded.
1. After some point, I just couldn't stand how naive and "innocent" Mary was. I know that the author probably wanted to show us that she was childlike bcs of her unusual situation, but yes, after a point, I wanted to shake her in hope she would wake up. Things were happening around her and she didn't seem in a hurry to ask questions, press for questions, accepted whatever she was told and sometimes even her questions weren't the correct ones.
2. After her release, you would think she would run away from Aris, but no, she makes a deal with another God whom she barely knows. She is being abused and mistreated constantly and she shows zero backbone.
3. I really liked the whole Aris is evil, I cannot change him but I am attracted to him. So, I was so disappointed when Mary literally had to erase his memories, transforming him into this boring, lovable sheep, in order for them to be together, and once he remembered we have zero romantic interaction btw them. Like there is no explosion of intense feelings, anger that would lead up to a hot make up session, and the thing is we were really expecting it. This romance was supposed from the start to be an abusive/ toxic one, which I feel it didn't live up to our expectations.
4. Also, the whole God-sibling rivalry was a bit pointless by the end of the story.
5. Mary was meant to be with him, she was created for him, she didn't change him, so they just moved to destroy another planet, yet in the end he locks her up in one of his "zoo" rooms or whatever, insinuating that their relationship will always be the same. And ???
Zero romantic interaction apart from the moments in the cabin where Aris was like a happy puppy. I think what readers expected was a scene like the one in the Castle before he touched her rune, that scene was truly amazing. I just found it a bit tiring and repetitive after a point, thus and my low rating.
Anyways, still the author wrote two books and we have to congratulate her for that!