My first read by this author, and I have to say, I'm quite impressed! I loved the way the flavor of the setting and the time period came through, and I loved the way biblical details were worked in (have to admit with all the times I've read the Bible, I've never made that connection with Jabesh Gilead before)! Oh, while I'm saying that--I did have a bit of a hard time with the way some of the names were written--I'm guessing it was to be more authentic and add flavor? The only issue was that every time a known name or place name came up, I had to do a split-second mental translation to connect it to the Bible names and places I know. A small annoyance, but I did notice it, so I thought I'd mention it. ;)
I really wasn't sure what I was going to think of Avidan because usually rebellious characters don't sit very well with me. But Avi and his cousins were such regular and believable teenagers, straining against the bonds as they grew, and caught up in world-changing events perfectly calculated to stir their blood and make them want to be a part of something more. I didn't always like Avi's choices, but I understood them so well, and I never disliked him, even when his attitude was worst, which was also a shorter time than it might have been. I loved his bond with his cousins, and my heart hurt for his struggle after everything went wrong. And I loved the way he finally found his place in the work God had put before him--not exactly the thing he'd been fighting against, but not as far off from it as he imagined at first.
Keziah was a dear, and I loved the way her attitude reflected what would have been normal in her time--she had her hopes and fears about who she would marry, but she accepted the inevitable with grace and only fled when the situation spiraled significantly. I liked the realism of her struggles, both on the journey and spiritually. (Can I also say, I loved the fact that Avi knew she was a girl from the very beginning, even though he didn't let on?) All the talk about her Asherahs, etc. was a bit uncomfortable, especially when it was weirdly melded with leftover bits of worship to the true God, but it was a sobering reminder of how easy it is for a society to go off track spiritually and not even realize it. I loved watching her interest in learning from Avi (okay honestly, I just loved the dynamic between her and Avi overall) and seeing her begin to turn more and more toward the true God.
A couple small notes--I'm still a bit confused about the family's backstory and exactly how it all fits together (seriously, WHAT is it with me stumbling into book-one-but-the-series-is-a-sequel titles lately???). All those details left me confused for a while at the beginning, but once the story picked up more, it didn't bother me as much. Also I loved the cousin bonds so much that seeing the cracks left there at the end saddened me quite a bit. Also, there was one plot point that I did NOT expect to be left hanging... O.O (I know, I know, the others' stories are coming; it was just a more bittersweet ending in some ways than I was prepared for.) But those drawbacks aside, I very much enjoyed the story and will probably continue the series--when it comes out. (Perhaps I should have started with an earlier series... XD) 4.5 stars