1.3 stars
WHY HAS 2025 BEEN SO SHIT?!?!? WHY HAS EVERY SINGLE BOOK IVE PICKED UP SUCKED SOMEHOW??? ugh someone seriously needs to recommend me some GOOD books because there is no way im at one 5 star read 2 months in. ive been in like a half slump all year and i need to fix it
ANYWAYS THIS BOOK WAS SHIT
i picked it up because, oh this looks cute and it's on those stuff your kindle days!! hahahahaha WHY??? genuinely why was this written? it is the most basic, boring, poor-paced, gimicky piece of media i have ever consumed. i had no idea what the plot was, but here's a summary:
rich, privileged, bratty girl decides she wants to be hard-working and have GRIT.
THE END!
WHAT??? HOW ORIGINAL!!!!
and i mean her full personality change??? at the start we're screaming at an attendant about a dress, THEN SUDDENLY THE NICEST, MOST HARD-WORKING PERSON EVER??? oh and don't you forget, she's gonna prove herself. BECAUSE SHE'S GOT GRIT. grit. grit. grit. grit. grit. grit. grit. grit. DID I MENTION GRIT????????
and WHAT was the writing style? here let me show you how it's written.
a few bland, basic sentences with 10000 unnecessary big words to seem SMORT.
new paragraph. no reason why, not a new time, setting, character speaking or chapter. because why not break up everything to make my book seem slightly bigger???
two spaces for a new time. isn't my book so unique??
here goes another paragraph.
LIKE ACTUALLY SHUT UP. AND SHE JUST EXCUSES EVERY BRATTY, STUCK UP THOUGHT SHE HAS WITH "but wait... i dont like being rich!!!! i wanna be... different!" SHUT THE FUCK UP. AND EVERYONE ACTS SO SHOCKED WHEN IT COMES OUT THAT SHE'S A RICH LITTLE BITCH, AND HER BF IS LIKE WOAH THIS IS THE ULTIMATE BETRAYAL. UH, NO IT'S NOT??? GOD FORBID SHE HAS A SECRET IDENTITY OR SOME SHIT??? UGH.
and the time skips???? maybe rather than writing like 80 pages (be so fr, without all the dumbass paragraphs it would be that much) WRITE A REAL BOOK? 300 PAGES WITH A REAL PLOT AND TIMELINE SO PERHAPS IT ISN'T SO BASIC AND FORCED??? like it goes:
im a spoilt brat. wait, the media doesn't like that???? GUESS I BETTER GO BE A COWGIRL
woah. this hard. i feel left out and tired. FOR LIKE ONE CHAPTER.
MWAHAHAHAHAHAH I FIT IN IM PERFECT I KNOW HOW TO RIDE HORSES THIS GUY IS IN LOVE WITH ME I HAVE....... GRIT!!!!
omg no media person saw me. i have to go home :( everyone hates me now for some reason
BOOM TAKE ME HOME BABY AND 1 CHAPTER OF LONLINESS AND IM FITTING IN!!!!
now im married BOOM TAKE THAT RICH PRIVELEDGED LIFE!!!
and don't forget all this takes place over 144 PAGES?!??! SPACED OUT IN WEIRD PARAGRAPHS??? AND WHY DID WE HAVE SO MANY WEIRD, UNNECESSARY BIG WORDS?? LIKE YOU'RE NOT SPECIAL FOR USING A BIG WORD THAT DOESN'T EVEN MAKE SENSE IN THE SENTENCE AND MY KINDLE DOESN'T EVEN KNOW THE DEFINITION FOR???
anyways this was shit dont read it