The Red Hot Empress (Annie Szabo #3)
by Meredith Blevins
Even if I didn't think this was the best of the three books in the series, I would have given it 5 stars just on the basis of the fact that there was only one proofing error in the book (that I noticed.). In other books in the series, I have complained loud and clear about the lack of adequate proofing, and I'd love to take credit for the improvement, but as I read this in a compilation 3-in-1 book, I can't!
As usual, Blevins' writing carries the reader away on a literary feast of words and phrasing that is evocative and seductive. Her characters are drawn consistently and fully fleshed out. The reader feels he is along for the ride, experiencing the beauty, the pathos, the danger, and the caring that are part and parcel of her writing. The pacing is good, moving you deeper into the story as it progresses. There is a wonderful plot, with enough subplots to keep the reader wondering what surprise awaits the turn of a page or the flick of the reader screen.
The one mistake I found appears at 11611 (remember, I read this in a 3-in-1 compilation)on my Kindle, and is spoken by Leo: "You are very much of a which of something." Huh? I kept re-reading that page and the page before, thinking I must be missing something, but I never was able to make any sense out of this sentence.
More often I was enchanted by turns of phrase or by the relevance of passages in a book that bears a copyright of 2005. Some instances of passages I enjoyed are:
At 9999, in a conversation involving one the characters, Flora, a TV evangelist, there is a reference to a bumper sticker that reads: "God, protect me from your followers." Very timely in this year of the Ultra-Right.
Another timely phrase at 11022: "The CDC is more important than whatever knucklehead is currently in possession of the White House keys." Soon to become regrettably true.
And stuff I just loved:
At 12882, in a passage on what a new world might look like: "The few forms of remaining life would resemble cockroaches and Keith Richards."
And at 13575, in a discussion about whether men actually do any household chores and commercials for cleaning products, came this idea, that my sister and I have often discussed: "...but they use very poor grammar when making household-product commercials."
This episode of Annie Sazbo's life was especially satisfying. It had new characters, new situations, revelations, unasked for emotional entanglements, red herrings galore, unexpected villains and unexpected heroes, excitement, danger, action, and more. So, yes, if there are more in the series, I will probably keep reading about Annie and her crazy, yet enviable, life.