Louise Meriwether hurls us into Harlem’s 1930s through the sharp corners of ordinary despair and defiance. Francie Coffin, eleven and already an expert at dodging fists, hunger, and male hands, records the mess of Black girlhood like a scribe taking notes from inside the belly of the beast.
“Shit,” she concludes from the stoop in the book’s final lines. It’s a child’s declaration, but also a national indictment. Earlier, her mother tells her: “Francie, you can beat anything, anybody, if you face up to it and if you’re not scared.”
But Francie learns fast that Harlem’s streets reward stoicism with bruises, and clarity with sorrow. Boys are mugged into masculinity, girls are molested into womanhood, and everyone bets on dreams, literally.
Francie’s father runs numbers, trading hope in pocket change. “Any day you hit the number is Christmas,” she says, but the real odds always favor the butcher, the landlord, and the perverts hiding behind Sunday suits.
The novel staggers beautifully through scenes like Francie being offered a dime by a bald white man on the rooftop to “touch this,” or Sukie, Francie’s peach-skinned nemesis-bestie, punching her teeth loose over some casually flung comment about China Doll, the sister turned prostitute who gets dragged off the street by her pimp.
A nickel will get you a peek, a squeeze earns you two soup bones, and if you’re lucky - or unlucky - you can catch a rooftop flasher offering dimes for a touch of his “ugly, purple and wet-looking” thing.
Sexual abuse is as ordinary as corner-store candy, and just as cheap. The butcher, Mr. Morristein, feels up Francie while weighing ground meat, murmuring about how “big you’re getting,” his fingers slipping like sausages down her thigh. Max the Baker hands out rolls with a side of gropes. Francie and Sukie treat it like small talk. Sukie even brags about the old men in Mt. Morris Park, one of whom pays them to pull down their bloomers so he can drool like a drunk puppy. Sukie lays down the rules: no touching. The men ignore them. “Just let me look,” they beg, panting into the grass. It’s the sort of trauma that comes so often, and so early, it stops shocking and starts sounding like routine, roaches on the kitchen floor, or rats in the hallway. The girls are too wise to be innocent, too young to be safe.
In one of the book’s most withering ironies, Francie’s brother James Junior joins the Ebony Earls because “It don’t make no difference whether you’re bad or not, just as long as people think you are.” Sterling, the other brother, experiments with shoeshines and chemicals, dodging delinquency with a tight frown and scorn for feelings.
Francie’s parents oscillate between dysfunction and affection—her mother, brittle and practical; her father, magnetic and unreliable, a “giant of a man” who glows while playing piano at rent parties, then spends his pay on chitlins and gin.
When the ceiling leaks or the rats return, the family staples cardboard to the floor and prays. And yet, the most terrifying moment might be when Francie casually inserts a jumper wire into the fuse box to steal electricity, her small hand braced against death like it’s part of her chores.
Meriwether’s sentences walk the tightrope between humor and humiliation with unnerving ease. “You had to laugh with Mrs. Mackey,” Francie tells us, “she was that jolly and fat.” Later, she observes the furniture as “a gift from the Jewish plumber downstairs, and one year older than God.”
The prose carries a dangerous innocence, a language that skips until it stumbles on another grimy truth.
Francie will grow up, but into what? The perverts aren’t disappearing. The roof man hasn’t been arrested. The war council of the Ebony Earls still holds meetings. In the book’s final sigh, nothing changes - except Francie, who now sees through the American success story like a fish dream from Madame Zora’s number book: 514, “catfish bit me,” no hit, better luck next time.