"Omega's are supposed to stay quiet. Omega's are supposed to obey. Omega's are supposed to do EVERYTHING I fucking say!" I lived each day in fear for my life.
I was the pack's slave, tortured, beaten, and treated worse than scum. To my pack- I was a nobody, especially to our alpha-to-be, Alpha Jaxon. But when he finds I am his mate, he takes it upon himself to reject me, and make my life hell. After all, how can a strong alpha be mated to the pack’s scum, right?
One destined night, a visiting pack and a ruthless alpha who no one dares defy may just be my savior. But will he accept me as his mate? A worthless omega from a weaker pack? Or will I be rejected again and become an enslaved she-wolf for the rest of my life?
I read the first couple of chapters on an ad for some random alpha books.. it was interesting and well written, so I looked for a copy of the whole book, and I found it here on kindle, so I bought it. But as I was looking over the authors others books, I saw she did actually edit this, and republished it with a new cover. I tried to return this so I could buy the newer version but was unsuccessful. I kept this version. That said I liked the story.. it seems familiar. Disappointed it was split into 2 smaller books, and it really does need editing, so don’t buy this look for the newer version pub in nov 2024.
This book has a good storyline and is one of a few that I have read that doesn't doesn't keep repeating itself to elongate the chapters. One thing that I will say is that it really needed a good proof read before publishing as there are many errors and incorrect words/phrases through out that can make it difficult to understand what happening or change a meaning of a sentence. Also, the end of the book is very abrupt. However, once you get past that, it's not a bad read.
I really enjoyed the story and the characters. However, it cost $10 to read book one and two. It was divided into two titles but there was really only one story. Also, I was really frustrated paying that much for an unedited book. There were many spelling, grammar, and usage errors throughout the story. Would be five stars if edited and done as one book instead of dividing for a money grab.
This story starts out really well , and as it gets further in the book you notice the words the author's using are wrong. Bets for beta, sprawl for spar. Could be a great book if it was edited better.
I like the story line. I dislike that chapter 4 and 5 are exactly the same. I dislike that there are a TON of misused words, improper punctuation, spelling and grammar errors. Check your work.
The main character is so boring, while also being a marysue, just how is that possible? Anyways I had to drop it after chapter 15(?) I just couldnt anymore, all the characters were all so boring.
Good storyline but poorly laid out. Chapter headings make no sense as the content doesn’t always match. Grammar and spelling errors. Poor ending as storyline is incomplete.