Needs editing
I read the first couple of chapters on an ad for some random alpha books.. it was interesting and well written, so I looked for a copy of the whole book, and I found it here on kindle, so I bought it. But as I was looking over the authors others books, I saw she did actually edit this, and republished it with a new cover. I tried to return this so I could buy the newer version but was unsuccessful. I kept this version. That said I liked the story.. it seems familiar. Disappointed it was split into 2 smaller books, and it really does need editing, so don’t buy this look for the newer version pub in nov 2024.