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387 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 2, 2024
Even if it was an arranged marriage, he wanted a healthy and mutually satisfying bond, like what his parents had. On the same hand, he wasn’t willing to compromise on a husband that could provide for him and their eventual children, both financially and with a name and title that they could be proud to carry.I think I'm repelled by the tone-deafness of the language. There's the Ernie Wise touch of "like what his parents had", and the frankly baffling "on the same hand", not to mention the laziness of "compromise on a husband". And "who could provide for him", please. I could point to other infelicities in the sample—there's POV hopping, anachronistic language, awkward vocabulary ("he travelled through the kitchen").