Living on Earth by Peter Godfrey-Smith
Expected publication: September 3, 2024
Rating: 2.5 stars
Date Read: 3 June 2023
DISCLAIMER: This is an unbiased review provided in exchange for the ARC of this book from Netgalley (though the publisher probably regrets it now. Sorry! but the book just didn't work for me.)
"Human action should not be contrasted with "nature", should not be set against it. The evolution of human action is part of the evolution of the transformation of environments by living activity. This starts out as a near-inevitable consequence of life, takes new forms in animals, then reaches the extravagances made possible by human minds, societies, and cultures."
This is a quote from the beginning of chapter 8 of Living on Earth by Peter Godfrey-Smith. It is also the whole point of the book, followed by an appeal to think differently about our role in this world and our responsibility towards it. Especially in light of the enormous scope of human influence over other organisms and their environment.
At the end of this book, I've come to the conclusion that the book was not meant for me. With phrases such as "dinosaur times", explanations for simple things such as rust and "crossing the Rubicon", and the repetitive explanations for photosynthesis and mitochondria, not to mention the plethora of examples of all the "cool" things nature does (all the examples that I have spent a life-time seeing on Attenborough's nature and other documentaries, and also reading in numerous books), as well as harping on the evils of modern civilization (which we are constantly and repeatedly inundated with already), this book seems to be written with those brand new to the marvels of the world, how it functions and what effects humans have on it. Not someone like me looking for new marvels, or a new perspective on old marvels, or feasible solutions.
This book does not provide anything new or original. Not even the author's perspective - the "story of living action, and its impact" - is original. The author's version (I cannot call it a thesis since it is not developed properly) of nature (animals, plants, bacteria, humans etc) "making the world in which we live" seems to be an afterthought in each chapter, until you get to the "humans are bad" chapters. The last two opinionated chapters on ethics and the evils of modern high density civilization (and humans as a species) are preaching to the choir, not particularly well researched, and extremely superficial. These are complicated topics that are more nuanced than belied by the author's brief talking points.
The writing style starts of nebulous, with musings and anecdotes*, several paragraph that doesn't serve a purpose, and is not particularly well structured i.e. the different examples tend to bounce from one to the other and don't feed into each other organically. The writing style gets more solid as the book progresses, but there are still issues with transitions between examples/sections/chapters. I felt the book lacked proper cohesion and focus; it felt too disjointed - there was no proper spine to hang the contents on, just a whole lot of hyoid, malleu, incus, and stapes bones. I also got the distinct impression that the author apparently likes the sound of his own voice, or perhaps the appearance of his words on the page, since he just drones on instead of getting to the point, using more concise language/explanations, or he would include information/anecdotes that simply weren't relevant. On the other hand, the chapter on Godfrey-Smith's pet subject, consciousness, and language development was downright exciting compared to the preceding and following chapters.
The author is a philosopher, rather than a biologist, but he insists on combining the two, so I do expect something more substantial than oft-repeated biological/environmental factoids slathered in philosophical musings and personal anecdotes.
*This author should stick to writing about his beloved octopodes. A semi-memoir type book about his experiences diving to his octopus "cities" and the interesting things octopodes do would fit better with this author's writing style - and would be a hell of a lot more interesting to read than a rehash of "old stuff".
Note: There are three plurals for octopus. Octopi is the oldest plural of octopus, coming from the belief that words of Latin origin should have Latin endings. Octopuses was the next plural, giving the word an English ending to match its adoption as an English word. Lastly, octopodes stemmed from the belief that because octopus is originally Greek, it should have a Greek ending. - From the Merriam Webster Dictionary.
I'm using octopodes because I like it!