This books was a huge let down for me, it had a crazy good start but after the middle - exactly after they kiss for the first time- it gets lost
It’s supposed to be a Dark romance with Organized crime- bikers- but I don’t see any of that.
1- The bikers, other from the words “ bike” and “club” it really is no important to the plot. Kain DOES NOTHING for the club during all of the book, also the book never talks about what he does for work why does he Hate the Serpents, why does he hates the new boss ( or how he got there btw). The book never shows, it only ever talks. He is crazy, and he is a biker. Other than that I don’t get why the Biker setting
2- The past, oh boy does this book talk a big game about past. We have Lilith with her parentes being murdered and Kain’s Father burning half his face off. But other than being mentioned nothing is ever explained ( there is this character called Ghost… I don’t get it) Like, after the pag 280 I can’t think of Kain’s mask being mentioned again, or even Lillith’s past
3- Drugs, Kain talks about using drugs MULTIPLE TIMES! After the page 200/280 he never uses it again ( this drugs is described by Lilith as terrible drug who destroys people) And that folks is the power of good pussy! He only had to fuck her and BOOM, an addicted no more!
4- Lillith, if she had a personality I didn’t see it. She talks back, sure; She is funny, she is a dork. But girl is KIDNAPPED and in about 15 to 25 pages FORGETS IT EVEN MATTERS? Like she just accepts, she is kept in a cage you know? That seems IMPORTANT( and her name… girl …what a stupid as name).
5- Kain; he did have a personality, he was quick to anger and seemed obsessed, and a addict ( yes, he is addicted to this life destroying drug, which again btw seems to never really matter in this books, as all the orders things. Jesus), but after they have sex for the first time he looses it. After he only says the same things over and over in his chapters. He is supposed to be our dark love interest but other than killing guys and magic healing ( he is an avenger sure) he does NOTHING. And it bothers me SOME MUCH, how he has this flashback about his face, and his face this and that and how he has not been touched for a while BUT IT IS FORGOTTEN IN THE PLOT ( the name again, I get it you know. To call back to the Bible … Cain… but with an K. You see this is the cherry on the sundae of the type of stupid in this book)
6- Magic Healing, Kain gets shot near the heart in the begging. And he seems “ peachy” ( as he would say), and good in about a week. Than Lillith stabs him in the Leg, it’s never talked about again. And the ending… GIRL?! The guy is the new Captain America, he can heal wholes in about 2 days
7- Ghost, don’t care. Couldn’t be more boring.( he gets his own book, couldn’t be LESS excited about that, the guy is a DOOR)
8- The Villain guy, also don’t care. He has no personality ( as the rest of the characters in this book, you see i got give congratulations to the author for writing all of her characters as boring as watching paint dry, and I mean : ALL)
9- Man, every guys who comes in about a 1km radius of Lillith is fact trying to do something bad to her, only to justify her being with love with Kain in about 2.5 seconds.
10- Dark romance, he stalks her but in the books it’s gets dropped in about a 100 pages. He kidnaps her, it’s gets dropped in an about 100 pages. AND BETTER, he puts her in a CAGE! But it’s never used, AND BETTER, he puts her in a collar and it’s never used - BOTH AFTER ONLY ONE SCENE. Where is the dark romance? Where is Lillith fighting? She just gives up? Let’s Kain BRAND HER? All because she wants to be dicked down?
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This books reads like a contemporary’s romance attempt at Dark romance, it’s not fully committed. Has great ideas, great characters ( ideias! IDEIAS OK?! Because if lacks execution) great points but always stopes halfway there
It’s not the worse book because the author has a tallent for writing, but it’s not good. It’s not even medium. It’s readable ( until the page 280), and is funny because is absurd!