Full disclosure: I received an ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) of Forged in Peril for free in exchange for an honest review.
Forged in Peril is the first book of the Christian romantic suspense series Forge Brothers Security by Kendra Warden (after a novella called Forged in Darkness). Typically I read high fantasy and science fiction, so this was a bit of a genre hop for me, but it was a genre hop I enjoyed. I found the story compelling, and appreciated the way Warden tackles some difficult topics in the book: she doesn’t gloss over them by any means, but neither does she dwell on them too long or even revel in them, as some authors are wont to do. It was also good to read a Christian romance book in which God is not an afterthought or included just to get the word ‘Christian’ in the genre. While not the main focus of this book, the characters’ faith is a large part of who they are and is a major theme woven throughout it.
I’ll try to break down specific things I did or did not like below. Be aware there will be spoilers ahead. I’ll try to keep them minor, but still: you have been warned. As a literary pirate might say: ‘here be spoilers!’
What I liked:
- Warden has a strong writing style that keeps the book moving forward. I’ve read several of the Storm and Spire series Warden wrote under a different name, and found the writing lacking, especially in the early books in the series. Here, I did not find the writing lacking at all; it served its purpose well and really kept the book fast-paced and engaging.
- I felt the portrayal of the emotional trauma and guilt experienced (and driving) Bristol throughout the book was well done. Bristol felt like a well fleshed-out character, relatable in many ways, who has very real flaws. She’s not a Mary Sue and she’s not a Strong Independent Female Character in the modern sense of the term (which is a good thing, in case you couldn’t tell by this being included in the positives section), but she’s not a demure push-over, either. It was a nice balance. The one small down-side to this (which isn’t really a down-side, but does include a spoiler) is that at the end of the book I wasn’t actually sure if I should be celebrating her new relationship or not because she’d (realistically) gone back and forth so frequently before in the book. I know, I know, she’s had resolution now and so things are better, but she still has a decent chunk of healing to do!
- As touched on above, God is an ever-present theme in the book. He’s not simply a backdrop; He’s a major part of the characters’ lives. At one point Bristol is even thinking about how, without His will, everything would fall apart instantly. Since this is true, it means that God is the primary plot and actually the main character in the book, if you think about it. I come from a slightly different Christian background from the author, but very much enjoyed her portrayal of Christian values and practical religion in this book.
What I didn’t like:
- Cameron felt less well-rounded as a character than Bristol. The struggles he experiences in the book (avast! Spoilers do lie ahead!) are all about her: how she made him feel when she broke up with him; how he wishes he hadn’t argued with her; how he wants to keep her safe when she’s in danger. While Bristol feels well-rounded and realistic in her portrayal in the book, Cameron is more of a one-dimensional hanger-on. I would have enjoyed a little more of a dive into who he is and what’s important to him (other than Bristol).
- The use of the word ‘bro’. To be fair, this is really a personal quibble and has nothing to do with how good the story (or book) is, but every time I read “hey bro” in the book, I shook my head slightly. I shook my head more than once due to this, so I decided it merited a place in my review. There certainly are men who refer to each other as ‘bro’, but in my experience they tend to be few and far between, and not always the sort of men I enjoy hanging out with.
- The action sequences felt slightly underwhelming. They’re by no means the focal point of the book, so this is more a minor issue, but it felt a little frustrating reading about a professional security firm run by men who are constantly working out and well-built, but who can’t ever seem to catch a bad guy in a foot race.
- Finally, another small quibble I had was that the theme of (ahar, another small spoiler ahead) Bristol being poor is mentioned throughout the book, and several times there’s phrasing such as ‘she really needed that paycheck to come in’ (not a direct quotation), but there’s no sense that she ever actually does get paid. Maybe the timeline is just extremely short so she never gets a paycheck, but to my mind it would have been nice to have some sort of acknowledgement that the work she’s doing (which she puts in crazy hours for) is actually paying off. It doesn’t have to be much; just a mention how she was able to afford a better outfit, or maybe she treats someone else to lunch or something. The premise of the book in the beginning is that she desperately wants to make money to get out of her current circumstances, so it would have been nice to have a bit of a follow-through on that. Again, it’s not a big problem with the book and (again spoilers I guess? Err, I mean… Spoilers, matey!) she probably won’t have to worry about money ever again after the book ends, but it was something I thought about throughout my reading of the novel.
So that’s my (somewhat lengthy) review! To be clear, the ‘bad’ things I noted above weren’t deal-breakers for me, and some of them are likely the result of different genre expectations. I found the book engaging, fun, and a quick read (which is a testament to good and fast-paced story and writing rather than a short page count). I’m now looking forward to reading the next book in this series!