Reviewing this as an ARC reader - Ms. Bell, thank you for this opportunity!
When I started reading, my initial thought was that I needed more from the characters. I wasn’t getting enough about their lives, how and why they tick. Because of this, the characters seemed very shallow - no depth, very surface-level. This feeling continued well into the book, then it definitely got better.
I liked this book, however I have two issues. First, whomever edited it missed a LOT - wrong possessive apostrophes used, two dots instead of three for ellipses, not starting a new paragraph when a different character begins speaking, etc. It makes the work appear not as polished and being a journalist, it irks me!
The second issue I have is with the last part of the book. You’re seriously going to tell me Emerald didn’t flip the eff out on Val and the others for duping her? I get WHY they did it (truth serum), but come on! Her mate actually condoned this bait and switch?! She wasn’t NEARLY mad enough at them all, especially Aryn, and especially in the scene on the beach right after she’s rescued. Her parting words as she’s being captured are “You’d better hope they kill me! If I ever see you again, I’ll put you in the fucking ground, you traitor!” and she embraces him on the beach?! THAT SAID - hell of a plot twist. I did NOT see the betrayal coming, and I typically can see stuff like that coming from a mile away!
Overall, good book. I had a bit of trouble getting into it, but then about halfway through, it hooked me and I couldn’t put it down.