It’s clear meticulous research went into the planning and preparation of this novel. The customs, language, people, and events are portrayed with remarkable authenticity, drawing readers into the richly woven tapestry of the era. Each character is fleshed out with depth, showcasing their motivations and struggles in a way that feels genuine and relatable. The dialogue resonates with the cadence of the time, making the scenes vibrant and dynamic. Small details are scripted with care; the life and times of these characters are easy to visualize, making the storytelling rich and immersive.
Though various voices tell this story, Bobbie Hilliard is the soprano leading the diverse and storied chorus. She is a courageous, intelligent, and fiercely loyal woman. Being queer and Black in 1953 makes her journey challenging, but she has it better than most. Using her wit, money, and connections, she builds a support network to carve out a better life for herself and those around her. Through her, readers witness the blood, sweat, and tears it takes to survive in a society that often seeks to silence individuals like her. Her relationships are beautifully complex and filled with moments of joy and heartache. As she forges connections with others, she learns the power of vulnerability and the importance of standing up for what is right.
Dr. Grace Hannon serves as Bobbie’s love interest in this meticulously told tale. Though paired with a woman who has a magnetic and powerful presence, Grace is scripted as a remarkable woman in her own right. Because Mickelbury stays true to the history, I strongly suspect that Grace’s character is influenced by the likes of Dr. May Edward Chinn and Dr. Helen Octavia Dickens, two well-known Harlem physicians during the 50’s. Much like these two Black female doctors, Grace, a board-certified gynecologist, dedicates her practice to providing care to the underserved Black women of Harlem. This background provides the storytelling with compelling, grounded context, enriching the reader’s experience. Grace’s character highlights the intersection of race, gender, and healthcare in a time when both were fraught with challenges. Though marginalized and pushed aside, Grace ultimately reminds readers of the importance of banning together to support one another, showcasing how it can lift a community in troubled times.
Mickelbury strengthens the story world by seamlessly integrating influential figures and landmark events into it, providing the storytelling with contextual depth. She smoothly inserts Stephanie St. Clair, Mary Lou Williams, Billy Strayhorn, and Adam Clayton Powell, Jr. into the dialogue, giving the narrative validity and relevance. The interplay between historical accuracy and creative storytelling captivates, inviting readers to ponder the complexities of the human experience in Harlem post-Korean War. The result is a vivid story world, one that reflects the social tensions as well as the artistic talent of the era. By weaving these real-life figures into the storytelling, Mickelbury not only enriches the narrative but also honors the legacy of those who shaped Harlem’s cultural and political landscape, making the story dynamic and moving.
Entangled in all of the history and hardship lies a beautiful and tender love story. Bobbie and Grace’s story brings a softness to the narrative, providing light during a chaotic, troubled time. While trying to carve out a future in a world that seems determined to stifle Black and queer independence, their love makes everything more bearable. As their paths intertwine, they find solace in each other’s company, but the shadows of their struggles loom large. The pain of her family’s murder leaves Bobbie vulnerable and untrusting, while Grace’s relentless desire to serve the underserved leaves little room for anything else. As they navigate the complexities of love, friendship, and ambition, they are forced to confront their demons. Together, they embark on a path of justice and freedom for their community, proving that even in the darkest times, hope and resilience can always emerge from love.
Final remarks…
Penny Mickelbury is a storyteller of the highest order. Her latest novel Payback is set in 1953 Harlem, and it is sure to gather much acclaim from the critics. Just as she demonstrated in The Two Wings Saga, she has an impressive ability to blend fact and fiction, immersing readers in a period that’s filled with vibrant characters, rich culture, and troubling politics. In Payback, she meticulously weaves together the struggles and triumphs of the community, highlighting the resilience, ingenuity, and talent of its residents. Using her distinctive style and voice, she skillfully gives the narrative thematic depth and relevance. Her fresh perspective resonates with contemporary readers; they don’t just enjoy an engaging, thought-provoking tale, they receive a rich, impressionable history lesson.
Strengths…
Well-written
Immersive story world
Charismatic, diverse characters
Well-paced, engrossing
Vibrantly told
Top-notch historical fiction