2.5 stars
The experience of reading books for a project is always...weird. I think I would have DNF'd this if I wasn't, because I spent most of my time narrowing my eyes at its convolution and improbability. It's also a very specific type of improbability, in that I could believe a lot of what happened, but often the attempts to make this into such a twisty mystery actually sort of took away from its effect. There are so many times where there's a disconnection (even a slight disconnection) from intention and act, from result and explanation. For example, if a woman is freaking out because her husband isn't pulling his weight with their newborn baby, she walks out on him and leaves him with the baby for a couple of weeks. Okay, fine. I mean, yes, it's dramatic, but okay. I could see that. But instead of making her point, she pretends to be having a psychotic break (or something) instead, and pretends that it manifests in trying to jump out of their (very high) apartment window? Why?
However, it turns out that that isn't even the full story. She ditches her family because she regrets giving up so much control of her business and she wants to go to a big conference abroad, and she's embarrassed to tell her husband that. So pretending to have a psychotic break (that resulted in her getting up on a window ledge and hanging out) was somehow a better choice?! Why??? And what if she had actually fallen? And, just to compound the whole thing, she swears her business partner to secrecy...and that woman says nothing. She watches while her friend is slandered in the press and in court as a potential psychotic child murderer when she knew at least some of the truth the whole time. And why? Because the person in question asked her to "keep it a secret". This friend never actually appears on page, so we're just left to assume that she never once thought that, no matter how hard she had been sworn to secrecy, perhaps the truth that her business partner was at a conference (is that kind of thing not recorded anyway?) was actually a little bit better than everyone thinking she was a suicidal abusive mother who was about to go to prison?
This is just one particularly egregious example, but there are so many moments like this throughout the book. Like, sure, maybe the general public has forgotten Fliss's family, but have none of the supposed journalists and researchers for whom she works ever thought that actually Fliss is from this area where this extremely relevant thing happened and oh wait, what if she's related to that person? The little boy said something cryptic, should we talk to him further? So many moments where the scene ends off on a dramatic clue or potential revelation from a witness, but instead of questioning them further, or asking ANY question, or even continuing the interview, the police officers just sort of shrug and say "okay, that doesn't make sense, but surely it's not important!" And I for one never once suspected that the police would have a eureka moment just in time. Sure.
Hannah's book is very "high concept"...but it's also sort of high concept in a way that doesn't work, in the sense that EVERYTHING is so intensely heightened that it becomes unbelievable in the worst way. It's at times almost painfully convoluted and contrived, which is a shame, because the subject matter is not only fascinating but the ideas are extremely well-formed. The characters and their situations, though, are not just unbelievable, but borderline incoherent. To top this all off, the fact is, it's never really explained WHY the character EVER thought getting up on a window ledge was a better option than just saying to her husband that she was going to a conference, or why her friend/co-worker wouldn't say anything. It's just that, early in the novel, it was important that the reader might think this character was suicidal. However, later in the novel, it had to transpire that she wasn't, and it was an act, but a sort of benevolent and understandable act. I'm picking on this one incident (which is not all that important to the novel itself) because it's an easy example,
Even if I can sort of wrap my head around 75% of it (and that's pushing it), the other 25% is always there to slam the door in my face. Suspension of disbelief is always a significant part of a novel (especially a high-concept mystery), but there's this sort of fundamental incoherence between how the characters act, why, and what the outcome is. To move onto another subplot (there's far too many subplots), there is a moment where the protagonist, Fliss, tries to move into her new documentary subject's house (a convicted and suspected murderer), which might sound pretty WTF on its own, but I promise it gets weirder. She learns that the house doesn't actually belong to suspected murderer/documentary subject, but to the close relation of a mutual friend, who both Fliss and the documentary subject/murderer happen to have slept with. He tells her to get out, which is probably one of the most realistic things that happen. She refuses, and he asks her out, so that they can develop a romantic relationship based on their mutual hatred of this guy Fliss slept with. IMMEDIATELY AFTERWARD. These two things transition into each other as if they're perfectly normal and natural.
It's the novelistic version of saying "okay, wait, ignore that bit, because I PROMISE it gets really good later". The problem with that line of thinking is that it can only persist for so long before it totally ruins, or at least undermines, the characters and any sense of plausibility.
But, somehow, it does get really good. The ending scene between Fliss and the murderer(s?) is amazing. It actually manages to wrap up in a very satisfying, climactic, and intense way. It becomes 2o pages of revelations, craziness, and great ideas, with a fascinating killer, a great showdown, and some genuinely surprising twists that made me reassess what I'd previously read.
That's why my first instinct was to round this review up to a 3, but I keep changing the rating overall between 2 and 3 (although I think 2.5 is a good compromise). The thing that makes me keep coming back to it is that the book is extremely anti-vax, and for basically no reason. The story ALREADY dramatises the interesting controversy around Munchausen Syndrome by Proxy in the 1990s and 00s (which is why I read it), and it does so in a way that is...mixed. (For example, there's a very weird section with a character called Ray Meredow, who is an extremely subtle (!) version of Professor Roy Meadow, the architect of the MbP scandal in the UK and elsewhere - but who actually espouses the opposite of what Meadow did during his tenure. It's a choice! Maybe not a good choice! But who can say?). Then, for almost no reason (because it isn't discussed at all), a character and a nurse join forces to tell Fliss that vaccines killed two of her babies, and that Andrew Wakefield - who gets his real name used - is a great man who has been shut up by Big Pharma.
This is the Andrew Wakefield who failed to declare that he had a financial stake in the misinformation he spread, and whose research has led to a rise in deaths from measles, mumps, and rubella all over the world. Fliss notes that this theory "sounds pretty crazy", which might be a good time to insert - as Fliss is supposed to be a researcher - some of the actual research demonstrating that Wakefield's findings were unsafe (and, in several cases, straight-up invented), that the multiple studies done over the years have failed to reproduce them, and that there is actually no empirical evidence to support any of what Wakefield wrote. But nope. That just sort of trails off, which can only lead a reader who is not familiar with the situation to conclude that hey, there must actually be something in Wakefield's research since a bestselling crime novel is taking such a strong stance on it. After all, we all know what Big Pharma is capable of. And we do!
Except - none of that actually applies to the Wakefield case, a moral panic perpetuated largely (but not exclusively) over the Internet that has literally killed people, especially children, and that has been proven to be unsupported by any sort of robust data. Facts matter, kids! And we deserve better than a novel just blatantly ignoring them for the sake of a good - and, honestly, sometimes, not even good - story.