Great collection of short twisted and alternative fairy tales! I especially loved the inclusion and representation of ethnic minorities in a genre notorious for being white-washed and patriarchal. I think it is really important that this generation of children are exposed to characters that are more representative of our current society, rather than following traditions. Out of all the short stories, I enjoyed reading 'The Golden Carp' and 'Emeka the Pathfinder'.
When looking at the collection of stories as a whole, I didn’t enjoy 'The Purple Lady' due to it being quite dark and gory. I also felt 'Blackberry Blue' and 'The Night Princess' were still too traditional for a book of alternative fairy tales, despite having black women as their protagonists.
In terms of using this book in the classroom, I think it is only really appropriate for UKS2 and, even then, you would have to be careful with the choice of stories to use depending on your cohort. It would be great to use when looking at alternatives to fairy tales and third person narratives. However, I think that the description is lacking in places. Although the appearance of many of the characters is described beautifully, you don't get a true sense of the personalities in each story. Therefore, I found it really difficult to connect or relate to any of the characters, to the point where I didn't care what happened to them. If I felt this way, I would be worried about how children would feel about the book.
In terms of cross-curricular uses, I think it would be great to do some artwork based on the stories in this book. As there is an array of characters from different backgrounds, it would be interesting to see how the children interpret the characters and settings into artwork.
The Golden Carp (focused review):
The Golden Carp is just one of the alternative fairy tales told within the collection Blackberry Blue and Other Fairy Tales. Each of the stories within Blackberry Blue start with a moral, a bit like a fable. The moral for The Golden Carp is:
Greed and Laziness are two of the deadliest sins because they lead to other evils, but Kindness and Generosity can bring Good Fortune.
The story is about a young man called Chi, whose father passes away and therefore lives alone with his mother. However, early on in the story, Chi’s mother remarries to a cruel and greedy man who moves into Chi’s home with his lazy son, Lu. Throughout the story, Chi and his mother face numerous ordeals at the hands of these two cruel men but maintain their inherent kindness and generosity despite adversity. The story ends with both Chi and his mother receiving good fortune due to their persistent good nature.
The story is told in a third person narrative, much like a traditional fairy tale. As with the other Blackberry Blue stories, the reader is provided with very little description about the characters. There is a character description of Chi’s appearance on page 83, and we are told a little about each of the characters’ qualities, but other than that it is hard to truly know the characters or relate to them in a deep way.
I would have to carefully consider which classes to use this story with. Although it is very imaginative, and offers an insight into a culture most children in the UK won’t get a chance to experience, there are elements of the story which are hard to grasp. Some puzzles that children may struggle with are:
How the father becomes the golden carp?
How Chi ends up underwater and this interaction with the old woman?
What happens to Chi when he returns to the house and then disappears in a pool of green water?
How Lu ends up underwater and his interaction with the old woman?
What relevance the carved jewels have?
What happens to Lu when he presents himself to the princess?
Obviously these are puzzles in the story to consider with a class, but they also create brilliant learning opportunities for discussion, predictions, hypotheses, deduction and speculation.
For me, the story reminds me of Cinderella: Chi is Cinderella, forced to labour on the farm from dawn until dusk by his awful step-father (evil step-mother) whilst Lu (ugly step-sister) lazes around spending all the family’s money. However, Chi has a fairy godmother figure: the golden carp (his father), who guides him towards good fortune. Lu tries to win the hand of the princess (just like the ugly step-sisters try to win over the prince), however it is Chi who wins the princess’s affections in the end.
In addition to the clear links between The Golden Carp and Cinderella, Gavin also directly uses language from traditional fairy tales in order to ground the story within the genre. For example, Gavin does this explicitly at the end (p. 114): ‘Chi married the princess, and not only lived happily ever after with her…’, and also more subtly right at the beginning (p. 81): ‘Deep in the valley was a hidden lake.’ Quite often, after ‘once upon a time’, fairy tales will lead straight into a setting description to give the reader a sense of where the story takes place.
Ideas for use with a class:
- Setting descriptions: Initial setting description (p. 81)
- Character descriptions: Chi’s appearance (p. 83)
- Description: Fish (p. 84)
- Personification/Similes: ‘willows trailed their branches like wet hair’ (p. 81) (p. 89) (p. 97)
- Shape and effect: The font of the writing in numerous places throughout the story match what is being written eg. skipped (p. 83), counting (p. 87), dipping and twirling (p. 88), (pp. 92-93), (p. 98), verbs (p. 112)
- Focus on verbs for sound/movement: (p. 87), (p. 112)
- Compare to other fairy tales: Look at similarities and differences eg. Cinderella, look at language which is similar to the genre
- PSHE: Focus on characters’ qualities eg. Chi and his mother vs. Lu and his father, comparison between Chi’s and Lu’s response to the old woman underwater
- Art: Carving activity
Further predictions/questions:
- Foreshadowing on page 86: What could Chi mean by ‘something will happen to end this injustice’?
- What is the shape beneath the water (p. 89)? Why did the fish seem familiar (p. 90)?
- Whose prediction was right about the fish (p. 94)?
- Is there a link between Chi skipping the pebbles and the carp appearing (p. 95)?
- What do you think has happened to Chi (p. 101)?
- What else in the story is blue, green, black and golden (p. 102)?
- What is going to happen to Lu (p. 103)?
- Why did the carp and Chi rescue Lu (p. 107)?
- Why does Chi need the carved animals (p. 110)?
- What does the interaction between Lu and his father say about the father (p. 111)?
- Who do you think the hag is (p. 113)?
- What does the ending of the story teach us (p. 115)?
- How does the story link to the moral at the start?