***Free ARC copy received by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. ***
I should begin with the whispered admittance: I didn’t like Romeo and Juliet. Loved the concept, just…not a big Shakespeare fan—period, Romeo and Juliet perhaps least of all. That did not stop me from enjoying this story.
Also, I would probably give it three and a half stars... I wish GoodReads would let you add half-star ratings.
It took me a while to warm up to this book, even though I was actually quite excited to start it. I didn’t like the ways the chapters jump unceremoniously from modern day with MC to the past with Benny and Nick. I would have preferred for the present day/past scenes to be broken up into larger chunks. I found it very difficult to get into/stay into either story (until closer to the end), because by the time I finished one short chapter of Gigi’s story (before a scene was actually over) and was interested, I was thrown back into the past. It was jarring—like reading one chapter of one book and then a chapter of an entirely different book. Consequently it was a slow read, as I could only read a chapter or 2 at a time—3 chapters tops in one sitting (again, until closer to the end). I prefer to be sucked into a story and not want to stop reading, which I would’ve been several times if not for the constant back and forth.
The first 1/3 of the book was a little slow moving; it took some time to get through the backstory, but once I did, I was much more into it.
I liked Roman pretty immediately. I also had no issues with Gigi! (I have to exclaim about that, because I’m pretty picky about my heroines.) Their feelings accelerated a little fast for my personal taste, but this is based on Romeo and Juliet, so… it made perfect sense. It was also well-done, which made it easier to accept. Some of the dialogue when they first met (not the very first sighting, but… later the same night) was pretty on-the-nose considering the source material, which I’m 100% on board for, but… I kind of hoped for it to be delivered in a more playful/clever/tongue-in-cheek way. Since the reader (presumably) has either read Romeo and Juliet, or is at least familiar with some of the most famous quotes, I prefer for quotes that reference the source to material to be more like an inside joke—the author knows why the characters are saying it, the reader knows why they’re saying it, and it should make me smile a little, maybe snicker… I don’t know. Just a personal preference, no points off or anything! I just think it’s more fun that way. Essentially, be prepared for it to FEEL like a few translations of Shakespeare’s own lines that could’ve come from No Fear Shakespeare (I think that’s what they were called) instead of sounding like something these two teenagers would actually want to say to each other- especially all in the same clump of dialogue. (Later on in the book, though, I did get to experience a little, "Ha," moment when Gigi referred to them as Bonnie and Clyde without the guns, when most people in that situation would reference Romeo and Juliet. That made me smile a little.)
I didn’t particularly like Benny even early on in the book, but by the end, I liked him even less. Even when I know I was supposed to like him, I just kind of felt indifferent. Honestly, (and completely unexpectedly) I was more interested in Nick and Benny’s story than I was Gigi and Roman’s. Closer to the end of the book, I just wanted to keep reading what happened in Ben and Nick’s time, so I was frustrated again that before I could get to the next chapter to find out what was happening, I had to get through a chapter of modern-day with Gigi.
There were too many background characters, just a matter of opinion, but I would have preferred less background noise. There were more than enough characters to try to keep track of between the two time periods.
Overall, I liked it. It took a little while to get into, but it picked up a little over halfway through. There was even one scene that gave me chills. By the end, everything was tied up beautifully with a nice little bow. All in all, I would say it’s definitely worth a read!