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686 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 13, 2014
One example of dialogue in one particular scene that bothered me was when Mr. Wenn dropped Jennifer off for the first time outside of her apartment. He learns that she lives on the 4th floor in her building and his first reaction to her was to say,
"That's got to be hot"
Who says that as a first reaction??? How did he know from inside his limo that there wasn't any air conditioning inside the building? It seemed to me that he was upset she is living in a bad area of town by his facial reactions that Jennifer picked up on as they pulled near her residence. I feel that Mr. Wenn should have said something more about the area she resides in general, not something about the heating/cooling of her unit without previous knowledge of her space. He has never set foot inside her apartment.
This story had so much potential but fell flat in my opinion. Who knows, maybe it's just me.