Come take a ride with Malicia as she takes you through her life. A woman left to survive alone at the age of 10 with $20,000.00 that her parents left her. What will become of her life? What will she do to support herself?
After meeting four like-minded woman, they figure out a way to support themselves. They decide to take a job only women can do without being detected. So is born the Ghost Squad, Contract Killers for hire. If the price is right, they are your women!
no ma'am this book is not what's up. the writing is horrible. where is the character development? the story jumped all over the place, I honestly couldn't keep up, I only finished it because I always want to give authors a chance but I just can't find the good in this book. I'm so sorry
I love the romance between Mal and Domi, can't wait to see what happens next. Sabrenna is absolutely nuts can't wait to see what's going to happen with the contract killers and will Domi survive.
I like the story. It was a good plot, good read, good alot of things. I like the fact that she shows the struggling of her sexuality and how the author described in details just about every detail. That was the good, now for the bad, which is more. One, this is a true definition of a book going all around the place. Books are suppose to be 1,2,3,4, or 4,1,2,3,4. This was 4, 3, 1, 2, 3, 5, 3.5. It goes from her being in the hospital, to her be in one place in time, then another, then another, it was truly to the point where i had to go back and re-read to see where and when she was. That's not the only time i had to re-read. I had to re-read twice to see who was talking and who they was talking to. Kateri did not give no indication on who was talking and who she was talking to, and when the statement ended and started. As an author, i know how difficult it is to edit, especially when you do it yourself, but as an author and as a reader, i know the importance of re-reading and reviewing your own work. And i usually do not add grammar mistakes to my reviews, but if it wasn't so many errors, then it would have been a 4 /12, but the fact that i had to go back, read, go back, re-read, and go back, and re-read to find out who, what, when, and where, it gotten a solid 3, and that's because it was a good story. the problem i am contemplating is do i finish reading the rest of the series, or not. It probably good stories, but if i have to do this much re-reading to understand is talking, then it's not worth it.
Haven't even been able to get through the first page. Some people just don't seem to understand the importance of a good editor - 'your' used in place of 'you're' in the first sentence, most of the rest of the dialog on that page is stilted. The concept seems interesting enough, but I don't think I'll be able to read this book based on the grammar issues alone. Best of luck to both the author and her (his?) readers.
The story was entertaining but the punctuation was horrible. There were periods where there should have been commas. Quotation marks were all wrong. The dialogue was confusing because the quotation marks were in the wrong place. One character was named "Sabreana" & the other was "Breana" but they were both nicknamed "Bre" at times in the book.
Loved your book, but u could've left out a lot of that mumbo jumbo about all those plugs...to me so what. Let's just enjoy the book n the characters. I am going g to purchase the other books. Interested n c'ing what's going to happen next. Hopefully the other 3 books will not have all those plugs. just right a book already. Don't need to get personal.
This novel is not realistic in any kind of way. The author spend too much time on the lesbian lifestyle. The contract killing was on the back burner. Everything is pure fantasy of a person with a very youthful mind. Teenagers will love it. Definitely not for adults. I'm glad I didn't pay for this.
A the beginning of this book I had question? It started off as a read about same sex which is not my kinda read but as I went along it got more interesting. Contract killers was the name of this game. These ladies surely put their lifestyle of killing out there on the block. Ghost Squad it is.
Did not enjoy this book. The title had nothing to do with the book. They only spoke about two murders. Also, the story was all over the place and you couldn't tell who was speaking half of the time.
it was ok, I think the title should have been something different because the book was not focused on the contract killing it was more focused on the love story.
this story had no real structure. it had many grammatical errors. it was hard to follow. this was not a good read at all. I recommend this book to no one.