This book has the potential to be very good. The story was interesting and the narrative style was good. However, this was the most poorly edited book I’ve ever read. It was full of sentence fragments and typos. It’s like the author published the first draft without even reading through it again. Additionally, it was full of British phrases, even though the book supposedly took place in Idaho. The dialogue was also oddly formal. I’m from Idaho, and I can tell you that people do not talk that way.
Writers, please, for the love of God, hire a copy editor!