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At Her Command
Standing six-two in her five-inch pumps, Bridget Kelly relished staring down at Nathan West and the other male attorneys. Female attorneys were afraid of her. She wore her thick mane of black hair on her shoulders, and dressed in dark suits that accented her curves. She took Nathan for drinks after a bad week, where she killed his clients in the courtroom.
“I’ve been meaning to do this for a while. Well, ever since I heard you were available.” He stared into her ice water blue eyes and froze, unable to look away, as heat radiated from his face. “You’ve been searching for a dominant woman your entire life. A woman who will take complete control of you,” she said just above a whisper, “a strong, beautiful woman, who will completely dominate you in every facet of your life.” Nathan winced in pain as his cock throbbed, pinched inside his pants. He started to gasp and checked himself, taking in slow shallow breaths. “Your marriage fell apart because your wife didn’t give you the structure you needed.” She squeezed his hand. “I will.” The sharp pain stabbed Nathan beneath his sternum again as he stared into Bridget’s pale, blue eyes. A nineteen thousand word novella
“I’ve been meaning to do this for a while. Well, ever since I heard you were available.” He stared into her ice water blue eyes and froze, unable to look away, as heat radiated from his face. “You’ve been searching for a dominant woman your entire life. A woman who will take complete control of you,” she said just above a whisper, “a strong, beautiful woman, who will completely dominate you in every facet of your life.” Nathan winced in pain as his cock throbbed, pinched inside his pants. He started to gasp and checked himself, taking in slow shallow breaths. “Your marriage fell apart because your wife didn’t give you the structure you needed.” She squeezed his hand. “I will.” The sharp pain stabbed Nathan beneath his sternum again as he stared into Bridget’s pale, blue eyes. A nineteen thousand word novella
194 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 17, 2014
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September 4, 2016
Good.
I have no negative criticism of the writing,as it was quite good and had an excellent progression for a story that was not that long. That is not easy to do and in many cases it is sub- par. My pullback is purely subjective. I don't understand and I just can't get my mind around cuckolding and forced homosexuality. Her powerful sexuality,high libido and his male-chastity, do not these things work in spades to break him and his will down initially and onward?
I have no negative criticism of the writing,as it was quite good and had an excellent progression for a story that was not that long. That is not easy to do and in many cases it is sub- par. My pullback is purely subjective. I don't understand and I just can't get my mind around cuckolding and forced homosexuality. Her powerful sexuality,high libido and his male-chastity, do not these things work in spades to break him and his will down initially and onward?
June 17, 2021
Pretty mediocre story. Characters development is ignored completely early on. As the whole scenario is consensual, the story is going straight in line with various scenes in line, many of which are not even fun to read.
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March 4, 2014I'm still thinking about what I thought of this. Wow....
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