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The Bones of Our House
There are things that wait in the dark. The century-old farmhouse was meant to be a haven for Anna Pall and her daughters, seventeen-year-old Nina and ten-year-old Sam. It was meant to be a fresh start following her bitter divorce from her unfaithful husband, and an opportunity for Anna to rebuild and strengthen her fractured bonds with her girls. Instead, the terrifying and violent events that occurred there ended up splashed on the pages of tabloids and newspapers, following Nina into her reclusive adulthood. Anna, Nina, and Sam are subject to the darkness in their new home, one that feeds on the pain and fears provided by the Pall women. The shades that hide in this darkness will test the delicate fragments of the family's sanity and leave at least one body in its wake.
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Published June 25, 2023
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September 1, 2024
Reread on audio 2024
Ummmm okay. Sooo I didn't think this book could get creepier.
***Enter narrator Erin Lin***
Dammmn! One of my favourite scenes is the closet scene, and Erin elevated that further than I knew was possible😍
This woman was able to completely change a book I already loved in the best possible way!
Can we talk about how many voices she has trapped in her mouth?
Each character had a CLEAR and individual voice. You immediately knew who was speaking without needed to be told.
Absolutely amazing performance!!!
Update:
Ms. Folan now has this on Amazon (.com & .ca) in kindle AND paperback formats!
While it's no longer on Wattpad, you can now get your own physical copy!
GO GO GO!!!
Original review December 2019:
Beautifully crafted to ebb & flow seamlessly.
Despite being a modern haunt it had a very Victorian flair to it.
My heart clenched & raced & giggled (yes a heart can giggle!).
Hop on over to Wattpad and read it for yourself.
You're welcome in advance!
Update:
Look who won 1st place in the horror fiction category of the Wattpad cosmic awards!!!
Ummmm okay. Sooo I didn't think this book could get creepier.
***Enter narrator Erin Lin***
Dammmn! One of my favourite scenes is the closet scene, and Erin elevated that further than I knew was possible😍
This woman was able to completely change a book I already loved in the best possible way!
Can we talk about how many voices she has trapped in her mouth?
Each character had a CLEAR and individual voice. You immediately knew who was speaking without needed to be told.
Absolutely amazing performance!!!
Update:
Ms. Folan now has this on Amazon (.com & .ca) in kindle AND paperback formats!
While it's no longer on Wattpad, you can now get your own physical copy!
GO GO GO!!!
Original review December 2019:
Beautifully crafted to ebb & flow seamlessly.
Despite being a modern haunt it had a very Victorian flair to it.
My heart clenched & raced & giggled (yes a heart can giggle!).
Hop on over to Wattpad and read it for yourself.
You're welcome in advance!
Update:
Look who won 1st place in the horror fiction category of the Wattpad cosmic awards!!!
July 9, 2021
Full disclosure. Nina attended a small school and was forced to take English with her mother. The author of this book also attended a small school and was forced to take English with me, a Math Major. I am clearly very biased.
High Four Rating - Many suspense/horror novels get you with unexpected twists that keep you guessing, introduction of new characters and settings, for example. This novel does not use this device. It's a slow vise with the pressure gradually increasing. Think Stephen King's The Shining, as Jack slowly descends into madness.
Very relatable, likeable characters. A very believable plot progression. Even the young man was well written: a blend of young adolescent vigor but also very respectful and thoughtful.
Very proud that my student succeeded despite my interference. (Also, don't ask her for help with your trigonometry.)
High Four Rating - Many suspense/horror novels get you with unexpected twists that keep you guessing, introduction of new characters and settings, for example. This novel does not use this device. It's a slow vise with the pressure gradually increasing. Think Stephen King's The Shining, as Jack slowly descends into madness.
Very relatable, likeable characters. A very believable plot progression. Even the young man was well written: a blend of young adolescent vigor but also very respectful and thoughtful.
Very proud that my student succeeded despite my interference. (Also, don't ask her for help with your trigonometry.)
July 22, 2024
The Bones of our House
I truly enjoyed this audiobook. This story was creepy. It was so creepy, I only listened to it at night because I’m not usually a horror reader. The narration was fantastic and kept me on the edge of my seat. If you are a fan of the September House, this book is for you!
I truly enjoyed this audiobook. This story was creepy. It was so creepy, I only listened to it at night because I’m not usually a horror reader. The narration was fantastic and kept me on the edge of my seat. If you are a fan of the September House, this book is for you!
December 17, 2021
Y'all, you know I'm a sucker for a haunted house story. This one is one of the best ones I've read in a while! It has a chilling creepy vibe and gave me goosebumps. I love the way it's written, from all the family members points of view and from the present and 15 years in the past. And I had quite the scare while reading it when the damn mop decided to fall over in the laundry room!! Anna Pall moves herself and her two daughters to a century old farmhouse. She's hoping for a fresh start after leaving her cheating husband. Instead her family starts to fall apart. The house and darkness that lurks inside starts to feed on the Pall women. Nina, 15 years later and pretty much a recluse, has decided to finally tell the truth about what happened there in that house. Y'all this is his author's debut novel and it is outstanding!!!
September 23, 2023
What a story!
Absolutely captivating, I could really feel the energy of this story. So many emotions, it made you care about the characters.
A book for any lover of supernatural or psychological debate.
I love the question of the age old 'do ghosts exists or are we just crazy.'
Absolutely captivating, I could really feel the energy of this story. So many emotions, it made you care about the characters.
A book for any lover of supernatural or psychological debate.
I love the question of the age old 'do ghosts exists or are we just crazy.'
September 15, 2021
THE BONES OF OUR HOUSE will resonate with you long after you’ve read the final page. Christine Folan weaves a seamless retelling between past and present events that makes you feel as though you are watching it all unfold before your eyes.
Past: After a pride-shattering divorce, Anna Pall decides to move her family to Ontario to have a fresh start. Her daughters, Nina and Samantha, don’t want to leave their friends, but they try to find ways to embrace their new surroundings. It’s not long before Sam starts noticing strange movements and sounds in the house, and when angry spirits that only Sam can see start gliding through the rooms, no one seems to be able to explain the change. Is the source of the trouble on the surface, or does it sink beneath the foundation, permeating the bones of the house?
Present: Jamie Tracey searches for proof of real supernatural events, but she has been disappointed every time when the true causes for the incidences surface. She believes that her interview with Nina Pall will be no different, as she is certain that the reason for the paranormal activity was merely triggered by the deteriorating mental conditions of Anna and Sam. However, as Nina tells her story will Jamie be able to pin the haunting on paranoid and shared hallucinations, or will she see something skulking around Nina, waiting to cover her in shadows?
I truly enjoyed this gripping tale. Folan’s description of the events was suspenseful, and her preface was intriguing. I wondered what parts of the tale were based on true accounts, and it was creepy that she had experienced paranormal activity in a house with the same floor plan as the one in her book.
I recommend the book for young adults and experienced readers, as the book mentions some abuse and frightening scenes.
Past: After a pride-shattering divorce, Anna Pall decides to move her family to Ontario to have a fresh start. Her daughters, Nina and Samantha, don’t want to leave their friends, but they try to find ways to embrace their new surroundings. It’s not long before Sam starts noticing strange movements and sounds in the house, and when angry spirits that only Sam can see start gliding through the rooms, no one seems to be able to explain the change. Is the source of the trouble on the surface, or does it sink beneath the foundation, permeating the bones of the house?
Present: Jamie Tracey searches for proof of real supernatural events, but she has been disappointed every time when the true causes for the incidences surface. She believes that her interview with Nina Pall will be no different, as she is certain that the reason for the paranormal activity was merely triggered by the deteriorating mental conditions of Anna and Sam. However, as Nina tells her story will Jamie be able to pin the haunting on paranoid and shared hallucinations, or will she see something skulking around Nina, waiting to cover her in shadows?
I truly enjoyed this gripping tale. Folan’s description of the events was suspenseful, and her preface was intriguing. I wondered what parts of the tale were based on true accounts, and it was creepy that she had experienced paranormal activity in a house with the same floor plan as the one in her book.
I recommend the book for young adults and experienced readers, as the book mentions some abuse and frightening scenes.
October 21, 2024
I LOVE when hauntings have multiple ghosts. I love learning how the ghosts interact with each other and how they manifest themselves in different ways.
This was a fun and spooky read for October. I cried for these characters! I won't say who I cried for more to avoid spoilers. I am very curious about something that's seen by a character in the future, but I won't say more.
This was a fun and spooky read for October. I cried for these characters! I won't say who I cried for more to avoid spoilers. I am very curious about something that's seen by a character in the future, but I won't say more.
September 5, 2024
Haunting, eerie and absorbing.
At first I didn’t think this would get me like it did. I doubted it would scare me and wasn’t warming up to the characters. There were a couple of early mentions of horror ‘things’ that had happened and I thought yeah okay, that doesn’t a horror make.
At some point I realised I couldn’t put it down. I felt a bit uneasy reading late at night. I found it really sad at times also. It was clever and well done, it gave me a feel of The Shining or Hill House. I found there to be a lot of originality to the story.
At first I didn’t think this would get me like it did. I doubted it would scare me and wasn’t warming up to the characters. There were a couple of early mentions of horror ‘things’ that had happened and I thought yeah okay, that doesn’t a horror make.
At some point I realised I couldn’t put it down. I felt a bit uneasy reading late at night. I found it really sad at times also. It was clever and well done, it gave me a feel of The Shining or Hill House. I found there to be a lot of originality to the story.
August 25, 2024
4.5/5 rounded up. I really enjoyed this story. I listened to it on audiobook and there were some chapters that gave me literal shivers and I love that! It was creepy and dark and to me, that makes it so fun! A fantastic read for spooky season!
December 29, 2024
I'm a sucker for a ghost story, and I really enjoyed this one, despite its flaws.
Premise: Anna Pall, an English teacher recently separated from her cheating husband, moves into a beautiful (haunted?) house in the countryside, along with her two daughters, Nina (17) and Sam (10). Curious and creepy events happen, leading to the death of one person.
The Good
- I loved the story. The ghost aspects were incredibly creepy, had me feeling like I needed to check over my shoulder. I was reminded of Mike Flanagan (without the monologues), of The Shining, and American Horror Story S1.
- The pacing was spot on, too. Small chapters with lots of action; I never wanted to put this book down.
- The opening sentence is excellent:
The Bad-ish
- So, this story is told in "the past" and "the present." In the present, a writer interviews Nina about her experiences in the house. The interviewer did not feel fleshed out. I was reminded of The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo, which also features an interviewer/interviewee. The difference is that in Seven Husbands, the narrator has her own character arc. Without that, this book lacked some emotional depth.
The Ugly
- Here is why I'm only rating this 3 stars. There was an abundance of typos and errors. It started small—an errant space after quotation marks, missing commas, etc.
A couple of times, the wrong pronoun gets used, or the wrong name gets mentioned. Example:
Should be her.
- And again:
- Then, in Chapter 14, the book suddenly goes from being in the past tense to being in the present tense for a page, before switching back to the past tense. Yes. There is an entire tense change and I'm honestly shocked that none of the other reviewers have caught this massive error.
- There were more errors, I just got tired of noting them.
Conclusion
So: did I love this book? Honestly, yes. I would read it again. I would even recommend it.
But I can't rate it higher than 3 stars, not while it's riddled with errors.
Premise: Anna Pall, an English teacher recently separated from her cheating husband, moves into a beautiful (haunted?) house in the countryside, along with her two daughters, Nina (17) and Sam (10). Curious and creepy events happen, leading to the death of one person.
The Good
- I loved the story. The ghost aspects were incredibly creepy, had me feeling like I needed to check over my shoulder. I was reminded of Mike Flanagan (without the monologues), of The Shining, and American Horror Story S1.
- The pacing was spot on, too. Small chapters with lots of action; I never wanted to put this book down.
- The opening sentence is excellent:
The house was immense and crawled towards the night sky with the ease of a cat unfurling itself and stretching its back into an arch.
The Bad-ish
- So, this story is told in "the past" and "the present." In the present, a writer interviews Nina about her experiences in the house. The interviewer did not feel fleshed out. I was reminded of The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo, which also features an interviewer/interviewee. The difference is that in Seven Husbands, the narrator has her own character arc. Without that, this book lacked some emotional depth.
The Ugly
- Here is why I'm only rating this 3 stars. There was an abundance of typos and errors. It started small—an errant space after quotation marks, missing commas, etc.
A couple of times, the wrong pronoun gets used, or the wrong name gets mentioned. Example:
If Anna’s stress about her two daughters didn’t kill me, then the house definitely would.
Should be her.
- And again:
She sighed, pulling the skin of her face taught at the eyes and her mouth, looking in vain for the features of the young woman Anna felt that she’d been not so very long ago. John had stolen more than my dignity from his first wife. He had stolen the very vestiges of her youth.
- Then, in Chapter 14, the book suddenly goes from being in the past tense to being in the present tense for a page, before switching back to the past tense. Yes. There is an entire tense change and I'm honestly shocked that none of the other reviewers have caught this massive error.
- There were more errors, I just got tired of noting them.
Conclusion
So: did I love this book? Honestly, yes. I would read it again. I would even recommend it.
But I can't rate it higher than 3 stars, not while it's riddled with errors.
April 13, 2023
The biggest mistake I made was reading this book at night before bed. I found myself turning my lights on and using my phone flashlight to look at the corners of my room to make sure there were no ominous shadows…and I don’t even believe in the paranormal!
The only books of this type that I’ve read in the past have been by Stephen King, and I think this reads very much like one of his books. The mystery, the suspense, wondering what those shadows are and who those sounds are coming from. It all makes for a very spooky experience. This would have been an awesome book to read in October.
The prose was also hauntingly beautiful. I hope there’s more to come from Christine in the future!
The only books of this type that I’ve read in the past have been by Stephen King, and I think this reads very much like one of his books. The mystery, the suspense, wondering what those shadows are and who those sounds are coming from. It all makes for a very spooky experience. This would have been an awesome book to read in October.
The prose was also hauntingly beautiful. I hope there’s more to come from Christine in the future!
December 28, 2023
Makes me scared to buy a house. Ever. Because this looks like the house I'd fall in love with and I would stubbornly not believe in anything supernatural.
June 18, 2021
Review originally published here, at Reedsy Discovery: https://reedsy.com/discovery/book/the...
A recently divorced mother and her two daughters get more than they bargained for after moving into a house that seems to be haunted.
High school English teacher Anna Pall, a main character in Christine Folan's lush and compelling horror novel The Bones of Our House, desperately needs something positive to happen in her life. She's recently discovered her professor husband cheating with one of his twenty-year-old undergraduate students. Her relationship with her two daughters has become tense and strained: seventeen-year-old Nina has turned angry and rebellious, and ten-year-old Sam distracts herself with books and has trouble making friends. In an attempt to reestablish normality in their lives, Anna moves the girls to an 1863 farmhouse in small town Southern Ontario in 2003. Within about half a year's time, the family has completely fallen apart--culminating in a horrific murder.
So what actually happened in the Pall household? In 2018, writer Jamie Tracey is determined to find out. Jamie tracks down Nina, who agrees to finally reveal the truth about everything. Nina recounts a chilling story of ghosts, hauntings, hallucinations, deteriorating mental health, physical abuse, and emotional aggression that ripped through her family during their short time living in the house. Jamie is generally a skeptic who debunks hoaxes, but in the case of Nina Pall, the supernatural occurrences might just be real.
The Bones of Our House is a strongly-written and plotted classic haunted house story with excellent well-rounded characters and an intimate focus on the struggles of being a single mom. Anna cares so much about her children that she neglects the obvious trauma she's experienced from her separation and her husband's betrayal, and the house thrives off of these negative emotions. As Sam starts to lose her grip on reality, we see Nina have to step up and mediate between her mother and her sister, who are both being manipulated and changed by the forces of the house. The spirits in Christine Folan's novel are certainly hair-raising, but her stark, unflinching portrait of family members becoming completely unrecognizable to one another is the most frightening thing of all.
A recently divorced mother and her two daughters get more than they bargained for after moving into a house that seems to be haunted.
High school English teacher Anna Pall, a main character in Christine Folan's lush and compelling horror novel The Bones of Our House, desperately needs something positive to happen in her life. She's recently discovered her professor husband cheating with one of his twenty-year-old undergraduate students. Her relationship with her two daughters has become tense and strained: seventeen-year-old Nina has turned angry and rebellious, and ten-year-old Sam distracts herself with books and has trouble making friends. In an attempt to reestablish normality in their lives, Anna moves the girls to an 1863 farmhouse in small town Southern Ontario in 2003. Within about half a year's time, the family has completely fallen apart--culminating in a horrific murder.
So what actually happened in the Pall household? In 2018, writer Jamie Tracey is determined to find out. Jamie tracks down Nina, who agrees to finally reveal the truth about everything. Nina recounts a chilling story of ghosts, hauntings, hallucinations, deteriorating mental health, physical abuse, and emotional aggression that ripped through her family during their short time living in the house. Jamie is generally a skeptic who debunks hoaxes, but in the case of Nina Pall, the supernatural occurrences might just be real.
The Bones of Our House is a strongly-written and plotted classic haunted house story with excellent well-rounded characters and an intimate focus on the struggles of being a single mom. Anna cares so much about her children that she neglects the obvious trauma she's experienced from her separation and her husband's betrayal, and the house thrives off of these negative emotions. As Sam starts to lose her grip on reality, we see Nina have to step up and mediate between her mother and her sister, who are both being manipulated and changed by the forces of the house. The spirits in Christine Folan's novel are certainly hair-raising, but her stark, unflinching portrait of family members becoming completely unrecognizable to one another is the most frightening thing of all.
October 30, 2021
𝑻𝒊𝒕𝒍𝒆: The Bones of our House
𝑨𝒖𝒕𝒉𝒐𝒓: Christine Folan
𝑴𝒚 𝑹𝒆𝒗𝒊𝒆𝒘:
"The Bones of Our House" penned by the author Christine Folan is a great horror fiction. After her divorce Anna Pall moved to a new house with her two daughters: Nina and Sam. The farmhouse seems to be century old. Anna wanted a new start. Her daughter Sam was surprised to see their new home is antique and gives the Victorian vibe that is quite opposite to her mother's tastes.
Anna's husband John was unfaithful. That's the reason they had a divorce. While teaching biology, her husband met twenty-something undergraduate. In the new small town, the local high school had taken Nina as an English teacher. Nina was angry with her mother because of her parents divorce. Also, she had to leave her friends and teachers behind and move to a new place where she has her mother as her English teacher. The strange events that Anna, Nina and Sam experienced in the new house were terrifying. Grab a copy of this novel and find out for yourself what's gonna happen next.
Story is intriguing. Since I read it at night, I was a little scared. Cover photo of the book looks nice. Pace of the story is fast and I didn't feel bored anytime while reading it. Author's writing style is nice and the storyline is gripping. Language used in the book is lucid and I was easily able to follow the story. Those who love to read spooky stories should read this one.
𝑴𝒚 𝑹𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈: 5/5
𝑨𝒖𝒕𝒉𝒐𝒓: Christine Folan
𝑴𝒚 𝑹𝒆𝒗𝒊𝒆𝒘:
"The Bones of Our House" penned by the author Christine Folan is a great horror fiction. After her divorce Anna Pall moved to a new house with her two daughters: Nina and Sam. The farmhouse seems to be century old. Anna wanted a new start. Her daughter Sam was surprised to see their new home is antique and gives the Victorian vibe that is quite opposite to her mother's tastes.
Anna's husband John was unfaithful. That's the reason they had a divorce. While teaching biology, her husband met twenty-something undergraduate. In the new small town, the local high school had taken Nina as an English teacher. Nina was angry with her mother because of her parents divorce. Also, she had to leave her friends and teachers behind and move to a new place where she has her mother as her English teacher. The strange events that Anna, Nina and Sam experienced in the new house were terrifying. Grab a copy of this novel and find out for yourself what's gonna happen next.
Story is intriguing. Since I read it at night, I was a little scared. Cover photo of the book looks nice. Pace of the story is fast and I didn't feel bored anytime while reading it. Author's writing style is nice and the storyline is gripping. Language used in the book is lucid and I was easily able to follow the story. Those who love to read spooky stories should read this one.
𝑴𝒚 𝑹𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈: 5/5
May 3, 2026
I enjoyed this! I'm a sucker for a good haunted house story, and this one was pretty decent. I enjoyed the cast of characters, and the back and forth between past and present. There were a few minor errors here and there, things I noticed but didn't care about enough for it to ruin or take me out of the story. I know there are people who love to bitch about that kind of thing, so if that bothers you, maybe either hold off on reading it or just try and get past it.
ANYWAY.
The first couple of scenes inside the closet under the stairs were nice and creepy. Also the little glimpses of people coming and going without being there. I love when a book is really creepy and atmospheric. Definitely pleasant when reading horror. I hope she writes some more horror stories, I"d love to read them!
ANYWAY.
The first couple of scenes inside the closet under the stairs were nice and creepy. Also the little glimpses of people coming and going without being there. I love when a book is really creepy and atmospheric. Definitely pleasant when reading horror. I hope she writes some more horror stories, I"d love to read them!
September 3, 2025
I purchased this book at a local Author sale. I was told that it was a YA fiction book and it was. I enjoyed the story and found it suspenseful and it moved along at a good pace.
There were a few errors in the printing such as I instead of she so I suspect it may originally have been a first person account perspective and was later changed but none of these oversights impacted my enjoyment of the book
I am an avid reader of suspense and thrillers so my standards may be a bit high. It wasn’t the best I have ever read but certainly did it’s job of keeping me entertained and engaged with the characters
There were a few errors in the printing such as I instead of she so I suspect it may originally have been a first person account perspective and was later changed but none of these oversights impacted my enjoyment of the book
I am an avid reader of suspense and thrillers so my standards may be a bit high. It wasn’t the best I have ever read but certainly did it’s job of keeping me entertained and engaged with the characters
March 12, 2026
DNF’d at page 25. I tried to give this a good, honest shot because I really loved The Haunting of Hill House but I couldn’t do it.
Between the grammatical errors and the fact that the internal and external dialogue seemed to blur at times, it just took me out completely. Personally the writing style wasn’t for me as well, it felt really millennial-coded if that makes sense and I felt myself physically cringing more than I’d like.
If the grammar was more sound and things were given a little bit of a buff, I think I’d like it more. The concept is really intriguing and I love supporting Canadian authors but unfortunately I can’t do this one.
Between the grammatical errors and the fact that the internal and external dialogue seemed to blur at times, it just took me out completely. Personally the writing style wasn’t for me as well, it felt really millennial-coded if that makes sense and I felt myself physically cringing more than I’d like.
If the grammar was more sound and things were given a little bit of a buff, I think I’d like it more. The concept is really intriguing and I love supporting Canadian authors but unfortunately I can’t do this one.
April 30, 2026
Got this book from the author at an Expo in my city. I'm usually primarily a fantasy reader so this is really outside my typical genre but I was really excited to read a local author.
The story was so interesting and fun! Really spooky and atmospheric. It suffers a little from editing issues which took me out of the moment a few times but the story and writing more then makes up for it.
I look really forward to reading more works from this author.
The story was so interesting and fun! Really spooky and atmospheric. It suffers a little from editing issues which took me out of the moment a few times but the story and writing more then makes up for it.
I look really forward to reading more works from this author.
September 3, 2024
I absolutely loved this book! I finished it in one afternoon because I could not put it down! The twists it took surprised me! The two daughters were both so easy to fall in love with- even the cranky teenager. I am excited to check out more from this author
February 9, 2025
I finished this book less than 24 hours after I received it !!
I was a lucky winner on TikTok
To say this book gave me the creeps and full body chills would be an understatement!!
So well written and clearly meant to mess with you !! Absolutely wild !
Thank you for creating this world !!
I was a lucky winner on TikTok
To say this book gave me the creeps and full body chills would be an understatement!!
So well written and clearly meant to mess with you !! Absolutely wild !
Thank you for creating this world !!
July 11, 2024
This book was creepy AF. And the audio made it even creepier. Not my usual tutor of book but it was so fun to wade in. Made me feel like I was 13 again, curling up with a Christopher Pike novel.
October 12, 2023
4 stars
Based on some editing mistakes, I think this may have originally been written in first person, and I really wish it had been kept that way, as I think the flashbacks would have been much more engaging.
Based on some editing mistakes, I think this may have originally been written in first person, and I really wish it had been kept that way, as I think the flashbacks would have been much more engaging.
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