Heather Simms was a beautiful BBW, with high self esteem, and had the perfect life or so she thought. One day her husband filed for divorce, crushing her entire world. Leaving her with nothing, she had to find a way to make money even if it meant doing the inevitable. Trying her hardest to stay focused, she will meet a man that will turn her world upside down.
Herc Alexander has dealt with a lot of trauma growing up. It cost him ten years in prison and a lot of time away from his mother. Unfortunately, his family has tried everything to bring him down and failed. Unbeknownst to him, someone is praying on his demise and will stop at nothing to see it through.
Find out what happens when Heather meets a man that will show her the true meaning of love. Will Herc be her knight and shining armor or will Heather retreat back to he husband who wants her back.
This was a fast read and I will be reading book 2 however it's a lot going on and a lot why moments to me. Why this or that and we don't get a reason just the drama and I will say the lack of self confidence of most of the main characters got old quick. However I do want to see what happens next
I felt sorry for Heather. She thought her and Darryl marriage was good until he went behind her back and filed for a divorce and left her with absolutely nothing. Darryl is a trifling, lousy, disrespectful piece of sh*t. He thought the grass was greener with Farrah but found out the grass was dead and the water bill was higher. Farrah ain't nothing but a hoe who's using him. She have zero self respect. Herc have no filter. He's disrespectful towards anybody. I understand where his anger come from. The way his scandalous ass family turned on him for protecting his mother from his abusive father but he need to tone it down because everybody isn't his enemy. I'm surprised Heather is attracted to him after all the arguments they had, him calling her out of her name, pulling a gun on her, and throwing her in a lake,etc. Darryl see Heather have moved on and found out Farrah isn't worth a damn. Now he's in his feeling but he should keep his mouth closed because Herc done put hands on him twice. When Nisha gave her whole name at the beginning. I was laughing hard as hell and knew her mother had to be a mess and she is. Rolanda is so disrespectful, try to take all of Nisha hard earned money, verbally, and physically abusive towards her. You can tell Rolanda is jealous of her own child and that's why she try to tear Nisha down. Vasquez has his eyes on Nisha. He's smitten with her and go through great lengths to make her his woman. I was so glad he checked Rolanda although it didn't seem to stop her assault on Nisha. However Vasquez have a obsessed and stalking ex who don't know how to let go. Millie don't want to see him happy unless he's with her. I have a feeling that is Millie at the end who set Vasquez up and I wouldn't be surprised if Herc cousin Jock is involved.
I am literally in a chokehold with the way the drama just unfolded in this book. Heather is such a sweetheart and was totally blindsided by Darryl and his shenanigans. But after refusing to be a victim she has put on her big girl panties and let go of her toxic marriage. Darryl is pure scum you don’t want Heather because you think you have something better but have a problem with her moving on to the next man what a narcissist. Herc is a mess he rude and aggressive and takes no sh$t, he gave poor Heather hell in the beginning but things eventually changed and I was glad too see it because she definitely deserved to be treated like a Queen. I just hope that she is ok in part 2 because I have a feeling something went down after she left her old apartment. Nisha is my girl but she has been dealt a bad hand by her hateful and spiteful mama. It’s crazy how jealous her mom is of her. Vasquez stepping in to help her out and finally letting her know that he wants to be with her is exactly what she needs but now there has been a whole other level of drama added to their situation by that cliffhanger. I definitely can’t wait until part 2 drops too see how all of the drama plays out because Herc and Vasquez are not two people you want to tangle with.
So Heather gets divorce from a guy who really just wanted some new pu***, like okay whatever. The guy were supposed to accept as her "New love & Savior" threatens to kill her and throws her in a lake?! WTH???
Theeennnnn.... He practically forces her on his plane and tells her were going to be in Paris for three days, and because she so desperate for dick, she doesn't even attempt to get off the plane or put up a fight.
Theennnnn... He notices how uncomfortable she is, and instead trying to talk to her to make her feel more at ease, he unbuckles her pants and basically observes, smells & fondles her pussy?!
How in the hell is this bull*** written by woman??
It's disgusting how many women are drooling over Herc when he is a manipulative, controlling, immature as*****!
I wish these authors would stop trying to make woman believe that a rich psychopath is what you need.
Authoress Tina J, please forgive me for cursing you out🤣🤣🤣. I had no idea this was a series, so of course I didn’t know this book ended on a cliffhanger, I hate those🤷🏽♀️. Daryl was a bih a** phuck boy who only got a snippet of the karma coming his hoax a** way for three way he treated and disrespected Heather. I was being disappointed when Heather gave into temptation, the latter a second cause the way sis bosses tf up on Daryl bih a** had me chewing her on. My heart went out to Nisha😔. Her moms is gonna get her karma too cause that evil vindictive jealous ain’t is bih right there has me wanting to jump through the tablet on her 😡🤣. Although Herc is a true gentleman, I love Ann’s hate him. That ninja is brewing disrespectful and he needs to seek therapy for his anger issues. So looking forward to book 2
Now this book had me from page one, the audacity of Heather's husband to try to be so sneaky then gets jealous when she agrees to everything not wanting anything but the car he still wanted to be selfish, but big bad Herc stepped in the way they started at each other reminded you of when your were in middle school and a boy liked you so he treated you badly that's what the both of them did to each other. Now when Herc took her to Paris making her feel like the Queen she is was crazy. Can't wait to see what Darryl and his mistress got up their sleeve now.
I can't wait until Darryl, Farrah, Rolanda and Vasquez ex get theirs. Vasquez should have done what his mother told him about his crazy ex. Heather starting to boss up on these men. Darryl should realize Heather has more evidence 🧾 then he has. Now he realize you can't make brown grass greener without tilling it first. Herc is the man but he's also a little mean.
I wish these authors stop trying to write like other good authors, i.e., Nina. Tina J you write ok but your not good, too many grammatical errors but it's not as many as before. Also Google information you're unsure of, for example, Wal-Mart in Paris, France don't exist. Its stupid and shows the level of writer you are. I may sound harsh so I apologize but this is just ignorant. A little research don't hurt.
I was drawn in from page 1! Darryl is trifling and I hope he gets the karma that he deserves for mistreating Heather. Farrah is weird and seems obsessed with Heather. Nisha & Vasquez fit together. Millie lost and needs to accept defeat. Herc's paternal family (minus grams) can lay down because they are taking up space. Heather deserves the world and I bet Herc is going to give it to her 😁
I love this author don’t you just love a book that have you thinking what’s going to happen in the next chapter. Darryl ain’t nothing neither is Farrah they going to get what’s coming to them. Bo’Nisha momma is a hot mess. Hercules is a straight fool. Heather and Hercules had me rolling especially when he threw her in the pond and she threw the sand on him. I love this book 💕❤️
Yes ma’am I knew you were coming with this fire but that’s to be expected with you I can’t wait to see what happens next that voice was Millie evil butt you fumbled him now move on just bitter but Farrah just nasty and bitter envy is a sin she’s jealous of heather last but not least dumb Daryl just sad how he can’t spell your wife name smh
Omg I was devastated when this just ended. I need part 2 asap. I thought herc was a psychopath but he was not, I think him and Heather will definitely make it. I wanted to beat the lights out if rolanda james she was a horrible individual and Darryl going to get his payback
Tina J. Oh my Lord! Heather really had it bad. She really had to realize she was the prize. Herc was a man of a few words he gave something of himself he didn't even know he had. It's snakes in the mix. It's jealousy and envy in the mix as well. I didn't want this to end. Boy, what a way to have us biting our nails. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Omg. Darryl is such a jerk. It's funny how he found out the grass wasn't greener on the other side. I hope Herc and Heather relationship grows. Elian is probably being set up by his old bed buddy. I hope part 2 is coming soon. Tina J. you've done it again. Another amazing page turner.
How the hell Elian Vasquez get caught up it's the crazy ex of his that he keeps having sex with. Heather trifling husband who cheated on her with his secretary Farrah and also slept with Heather's new boo Herc. Vasquez just got arrested and his ex got something to do with it. Let's see what happens in book two.
The people in this book are straight dirty. Darryl is thee worst. How you divorce me cause you’re cheating, then mad cause another man found his treasure. Natalia’s mother is a dirty bird. You wanna put hands on people and when they beat you because you can’t fight you call the police smh. I hope Elian is good and Heather too cause those last chapters left you wondering.
Whew child, Herd is a mess, but he got the right one in Heather! So happy Heather is gaining her self esteem and being strong when it comes to how she feels. Poor Nisha can't seem to catch a break, but I know Vasquez will take care of her, now the question is who called them folks on him, hmmmmmm.
OMG...Hamburgerler? This book has it all. Every emotion is covered including humor without needing to be funny. Well, yeah I guess it was meant to be. Herc and Heather are meant to be. Farrah and Darryl, hmph anyway! Elian and Nisha, I'm here for it! Part 2 better be just as good.
Okay I was enjoying the book despite the errors but I was confused when Nisha said she’s never driven before but didn’t derryle mom got the back of her car 🤔 over all its cool but the author must’ve forgotten what she wrote in the beginning on some parts and what’s her secret
I must say this book was pretty average, but it cheered me up and made me laugh when everyone started beating Daryll's ass. Miss Hamburglar??? I choked on my water at that one. To tell a shop assistant/manager your whole business is nothing but bullshit, not even a fool would do that J. NELL went too far with the Pretty Woman escapism chapter.
Im going to be real… this book had potential but it just alot of stuff happening with no rhyme or reason. Real life just random things with no bridge in between. Idk how I got here. 😂😂😂
Please get an editor. I would love to give this book another chance.
Let me start off by saying I have read several books by this author and was looking forward to reading something new. The characters development was all over the place. It lacked the seamless flow. I found myself re-reading paragraphs thinking I missed a page. I would have given this a 5 star because it has potential but I’m not even sure I want to finish the series.
Darryl has audacity if nothing else. Herc is a straight menace and I love it! I knew Elian ex was going to be a problem. I’ll never understand how people will mess up then refuse to go away! Like how sway how?
Nish and Heather went through alot wire the people..Darryl can't fight worth nothing .herc is bae..elisan is bae also..can't wait to see how him and nish story play out.. I love then for each other
Whew!!!! That dang on girl know she crazy. She set Eilian up. Now that Herc, chile he a got mess lol. Niesha and Vasquez gonna have to fight cause that crazy girl ain't letting up. I can't wait for part 2.
I enjoyed the book from beginning to end. So many twist and turns. Herc and Elian are some characters. Nisha and Heather are true friends. Darryl is definitely a snake. I hope he lose everything. Nisha mama is crazy as hell.
I'm loving this story so far and can't wait for part two to come out. Herc is a little loco but seems like a good dude. I hope Heather gets what she deserves in the divorce.
I can’t stand a female who can’t let go especially when she was the one who messed up Millie is def delulu and Darryl how he letting himself get pounced on by a woman is beyond me goofy
This storyline is amazing. It gives way to drama, trauma, and betrayals. The characters have some very big personalities and some interesting relationships.