I used to say that one could read just about any Johnstone book and find quality. The past five years or so has altered my stating or writing such. I don't know what's happened, but have included in my reviews a number of ideas. After reading through onward to 300 Johnstone books, there has definitely been a shift downward. Here is still another example of that.
I believe what first gets me is a third wagon train novel nearly in a row from the Johnstone Clan. I read the first two earlier this year and saw this was another writing of a haul west across the country and thought best to hold off as I had troubles with the first two. Didn't help, had trouble with this one, too.
What I marked most in this book were the endless contemporary phrases, Valley-Girl-like, throughout the entire book from ALL characters, whatever their persuasion. What makes that error glare is my simultaneously reading the Jonas Ward 'Buchanan' series of books written in the 1950s. What a contrast in language! Take into account when William was writing these and there has been quite a change. Is it to appeal to younger readers, bad writing or the lack of knowledge of the time period? Considering the odd assortment of instances which makes this book hard to pin in time, it's hard to know. Though, an editor should have better knowledge of the railroad industry throughout the 1800s to flag errors.
Of the three latest Johnstone books of traveling west, this one is the weakest. There's supposed to be a bad guy that is mentioned and there is confrontation, but throughout the book, I never read enough to find the conflict as to why there are so many later attacks. The attacks are more tacked on. The plot structure is just all are traveling west with obstacles thrown in. The connection between those that attacked and the bad guy is not better defined than involving money.
The ending, I found, very unsatisfying and as the focus was wrapping the story of the hero character and the bad guy got a short sendoff.
There are many better Johnstone Clan tales of wagon trains, specifically in the first quarter of the Preacher series. Hopefully, this is the Last of them.
Bottom line: i don't recommend this book. 3 out of ten points.