Audiobook Review
1 Star
In 12 hours and 11 minutes of Peter Berkrot's moaning, breathless narration of "Desperate," you'll experience a 2 hour B-Minus LifeTime movie. 12 hours of my life wasted. Palmer has successfully lifted every lame plot from bad Compulsive Wannabe Mom Needs a Baby stories, knits it together (with a lot of dropped stitches) with a long con job, and comes out with a horrible mess of story.
Gage and Anna Dekker are newly weds with tragic pasts: both had children die under horrid circumstances. They want another child, but Anna miscarries. They decide to adopt. They find a pregnant homeless girl on a bus stop crying because her boyfriend threw her out. They decide to give her a home and adopt her baby, with little if any background investigation. Smart, right?
Gage is a Quality Assurance Manager for a high-tech battery firm. Anna is a Business Consultant to Retail. Both should be very diligent about checking into the woman's and father's background, genetics, etc., but they behave incredibly stupidly. Until Lilly's deadbeat criminal boyfriend moves in. Then things get really dicey. Gage gets conned into pulling off a job with 'Roy' and is sucked into a criminal enterprise.
At any given point in this story where a homeless pregnant girl was considered as a direct-adoption candidate, a full medical and background check would have been done. At any given point in this story where things became possibly criminal, any normal human would have called the police. But noooo - two successful business people who have jobs in industries that require detail and diligence in facts - none is done, so the idiotic story can continue.
Much of the dialogue is Gage bemoaning the loss of his son, and giving moment by moment narrative of his innermost feelings, then repeating it. This wasted about 50% of the story.
I gave Palmer the benefit of the doubt and listened to the entire disaster. Believe it or not, the last few chapters were actually like an action/thriller, but even those were poorly thought through.
Daniel Palmer must have watched too much bad television as a kid. It should been a 2-hour seen once and forgotten made-for-TV movie. And now, the coup de grâce -- If Michael Palmer, Author of repute, was not his father, he'd never get his name in ink on anything.
Re The Narrator: Peter Berkrot should stick to horror. He's great in that genre. The only thing horror about this story is this story.