I realize that this book was not written for adults, but I believe excellent writing is for anyone. This book had a tedious, boring writing style. I could barely get through it. Plus, I didn't think it did a good job telling the story. For example, why were there a herd of dead sheep on the mountain before the eruption? Never explained. Also, in ancient Rome, I think it was every man for himself...I simply do not believe a slave and his son, once they found freedom would return to a dangerous situation and risk capture, torture, death to tell their former master (and others who were strangers) that doom approaches. They should have run. Finally, the dad gets injured in Pompeii (why did they ever go back??? It would've been more believable if there was someone they loved back in the city), and can't walk/run so he tells the son to leave him. But then he can climb down a ladder and move himself out of a tunnel to safety? I thought he was too hurt to move? This story could've been really well done, but it just was not. I wouldn't read another one. (Oh, and L read a different I survived, but gave up halfway through because she didn't like it at all. And she is the target audience, at 8 years old.)