As climate disasters wreak havoc, a sister and brother take opposing sides on the fate of the human race.
Syrah Carthan wants to save it. A tour guide for the Sequoia National Park, Syrah has an affinity for the millennia-old Giants that extends to Rhiza, a subterranean world as ancient as Earth itself. Syrah is the reluctant heir apparent as its Keeper. Her duty is to maintain a balance between nature and humans. But Syrah’s greatest adversary has his duty as well.
Romelo, Syrah’s brother, wants humankind to get what it deserves. To protect the forests, he’s already instigated one battle that ended in chaos and death. To reverse the near extinction of the magnificent trees, Romelo’s next move is to conspire with the sequoias themselves. If all goes according to plan, it will leave human beings absolutely breathless.
The siblings are going to battle. In the worlds above and below, only one of them can emerge victorious.
Veronica G. Henry is the author of Bacchanal, The Quarter Storm, and The Foreign Exchange in the Mambo Reina series.
Her work has debuted at #1 on multiple Amazon bestseller charts, was chosen as an editors’ pick for Best African American Fantasy, and shortlisted for the Manly Wade Wellman Award.
She is a Viable Paradise alum and a member of SFWA and MWA. Her stories have appeared, or are forthcoming, in the Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction and FIYAH Literary Magazine.
A Breathless Sky (The Scorched Earth) by Veronica G. Henry is a fantasy fiction for young adults and adults alike. It continues the story of Syrah who is now a guide for the Sequoia National Park. This enables here to be able to be close to the giants and Rhiza - a world as ancient as the Earth they lived beneath.
Can I just say, first of all, that the cover provided is stunning and perfectly fits Syrah and her fungi. Perfect.
I struggled with the first half of this book. It was boring for me, but in saying that there was a lot of good character building, so I get it and the authors need for it. I pushed on and found myself drawn into the book at about 60 percent.
After that I couldn't put it down and read the rest in one sitting.
There's a few errors, but nothing that pulls away from the story. Another run through with an editor will get those.
The prose throughout was lovely and we'll through out, however, I feel like it pulled from the layout and the kindle versions layout is less than ideal.
This series is an absolute gem and I really enjoyed the characters, the plot, and the fantastic world building. I am not sure if I would read again, but I would recommend it to others to read. Fantastic job.
This sequel picks up a few years after the dramatic ending of The Canopy Keepers, in the Sequoia National Park, California 2043. Global warming, climate change, and human neglect has caused further damage to the forest and the global environment. Sister and brother go to battle once again, at odds with how to stop the damage. Humans like to think we are the most important species on earth and that we are in control of the environment. This story says no, and that there are greater forces and other species that need to be listened to in order for humanity to survive. This story is about relationships. Those with our family, friends, ourselves, and especially with that of nature. The underground world of the Rhiza, The Keeper, and The Mother is a nice break for the reader from the topsider world. Great follow up to the first book, with another dramatic ending. If you are a fantasy fan I highly recommend this series.
I had a tough time rating this book. The writing was beautiful. It was a unique story of another world below the forest where the people are struggling to keep the climate crisis from ruining the world, while one woman struggles between that world and above ground where her family and friends are. The biggest issue I had was the lack of character development. The first book built up these amazing characters but fell short with them with this one. 3.5⭐️
Original review at Gabic Reads. eARC received from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
DNF @ 16%
I love the concept of this book, but this book was just not enacting it well. Like the first book, it feels like nothing is happening as we move through the book. I couldn't get invested in the story in order to keep reading.
This book starts a few months after the first one ends. Syrah has agreed to a new position at the NP that was created for her. She is in the middle of a tour, when she lets an idiot antagonizer rile her up. Then she gets cornered and questioned by a scientist and she literally runs away in the middle of the conversation. Definitely not suspicious. And that's pretty much all that happens in the first 16%.
Review: The Breathless Sky by Veronica Henry Book Two of The Scorched Earth Series
A contemporary fantasy woven with threads of climate fiction and dystopian speculation, The Breathless Sky captivated me with its central premise: what if nature stopped cooperating?
The novel’s most compelling idea lies in its reimagining of photosynthesis. The ancient sequoias— the Earth’s lungs—consciously cease releasing oxygen. Instead, they hoard carbon dioxide, creating a slow suffocation as a form of ecological reckoning. This inversion of natural law was both eerie and fascinating, a bold metaphor for environmental collapse and moral consequence.
Themes of family bonds, betrayal, environmentalism, climate change, ancestral memory preservation and radical change
While the concept kept me reading, my experience with the protagonist, Syrah, was less satisfying. Her emotional spirals, frequent self-pity, and sluggish personal growth grated on me. In contrast, I found the Rhiza community deeply admirable—their ethos, mutual care, and grounded approach to life offered a hopeful counterpoint to the novel’s darker themes.
Ultimately, The Breathless Sky is a provocative exploration of what might happen if the natural world decided to fight back. It asks not just what we’ve done to the Earth, but what the Earth might do in return.
Below is my synopsis of the book.
She doesn’t speak in words. She speaks in memory—in ash, in mycelium, in the silence between roots.” —from The Breathless Sky
The Breathless Sky is a story of two siblings—Syrah and Romelo—caught between love and fury, myth and memory. Beneath the towering sequoias lies the lattice: a vast, subterranean root system that connects the forest in silence. Interlaced with it is the filament, a sentient fungal network that remembers everything. Together, they form Rhiza—a hidden world that pulses with ancestral memory and ecological power.
At the center of Rhiza is The Mother. She has been here since the Earth first breathed. She remembers what the world forgets. Syrah hears her whispers and begins to understand Rhiza’s ancient pull. But becoming its keeper isn’t a given—it’s a calling she must earn, and one Romelo believes should fall to someone else. Their visions for Rhiza diverge, and as wildfire and memory surge, the siblings find themselves on opposite sides of a mythic reckoning.
As the forest burns and the Earth’s oldest voices rise, The Breathless Sky asks: what do we owe the planet—and what do we owe each other?
The Mother has been here since the Earth first breathed. She remembers what the world forgets.
*I was given a free advanced e-copy in exchange for an honest review*
Release Date: December 17th, 2024 (USA)
CW: racism, sexism, general bigotry that comes with the territory of a Black FMC in a position of power, violence, family-related issues and violent sibling conflict.
So, I don't involve spoilers in reviews for the book I'm reviewing. But since this is a sequel, I am going to be spoiling Canopy Keepers.
Henry's writing style really needs a shoutout, it reminds me a lot of Octavia E. Butler and NK Jemison, and other SciFi/Fantasy giants. I got similar vibes from Speech Sounds by Butler. But Henry breathes her own touch to it. It doesn't feel like she's trying to copy their writing style, the prose isn't overly flowery or extravagant and she's not using the kind of language that can lose the reader.
While I don't think this is exactly an introductory book to the genre, I think it isn't too far off either. The concept of the entire series is REALLY inventive. But because it is so out there, and leans on speculative fiction (similar to The Power by Naomi Alderman) I think there is still a bit of a learning curve with the concept. I, personally, like that.
The concept is incredibly refreshing and mixes a message with good world-building. I think part of the charm of the first book is that it has this one aspect of figuring-it-out-as-we-go with Syrah and "outsider living within" with Romelo. I think the second book loses a bit because the world-building isn't the same.
I like Syrah's development and Romelo's lack therefore-of (in a stubborn way) by the start of book two. Romelo not learning his lesson, and seeing his SISTER as a traitor rather than, like, just not wanting all of humanity to die is an extremely in-character (and realistic) thing to do.
And I think it's a credit to Henry that I honestly wasn't THAT mad at Romelo. Like, all right, Diva, you're right, humanity kinda sucks. But babe, there's a way to fix things that isn't "burn the world" but you know what? Your hatred is fair.
The discussion of race in conservation continues. Syrah's arch is grounded in and out of the "fantasy world"/"SciFi-world" they're in. She starts as a Black Female firefighter, now she's a Black Female NPS Park Ranger. Henry manages to balance both worlds, and both struggles, really well and draws parallels for this struggle for both Romelo and Syrah.
A Breathless Sky by Veronica G. Henry is a captivating blend of fantasy and real-world issues, set in a not-too-distant future where the consequences of climate change have begun to unravel. This series follows Syrah, now a guide at Sequoia National Park, as she becomes entwined in a hidden world of ancient beings dedicated to protecting the Earth’s remaining giants and their secrets.
At its core, this book is an exploration of the complex relationships we have with both the families we’re born into and the ones we choose. It delves into themes of grief, betrayal, love, and self-discovery, all while drawing a vivid connection to the ongoing climate crisis. Henry’s portrayal of natural disasters, rampant diseases, and the extinction of species serves as a powerful reminder of humanity’s impact on the world—a sobering backdrop to this enchanting fantasy.
The first half of the book, though slower-paced, is rich with character development, laying a strong foundation for the intense and gripping second half. Once the story picks up, it becomes impossible to put down, with a narrative that pulls you in and holds you tight until the very end.
Henry’s prose is beautifully crafted, bringing the world of Rhiza and the ancient Sequoias to life with vivid imagery and a deep respect for nature. Despite some minor editorial oversights and layout issues in the Kindle version, the storytelling remains strong and immersive. The cover art, too, is a stunning representation of Syrah and her connection to the ancient world she’s come to protect.
In A Breathless Sky, Henry masterfully intertwines fantasy with pressing environmental themes, creating a story that resonates on multiple levels. It’s a must-read for both young adults and adults who appreciate fantasy that speaks to real-world concerns. This series is a gem, and while it may not be one I revisit often, it’s certainly one I’ll recommend to others. Henry has done a fantastic job, and I look forward to seeing where she takes us next.
The author weaves a hauntingly beautiful narrative set in a near-future world where humanity’s neglect of the environment has reached its tipping point. While the story is a work of fiction, it serves as an alarming reflection of our current trajectory—a dystopian warning of what awaits if we fail to address the ecological challenges of today.
What makes A Breathless Sky so gripping is its chilling plausibility. It doesn’t feel like science fiction; it feels like an inevitable outcome if humanity continues to prioritize short-term gains over long-term sustainability. The narrative is infused with subtle yet powerful calls to action, urging readers to consider their impact on the world around them.
The book’s strength lies not only in its storytelling but in its ability to spark reflection. It forces readers to confront uncomfortable questions: Are we truly aware of the consequences of our actions? Will we wait until the air becomes unbreathable, the soil infertile, and the waters barren before we change?
A Breathless Sky is not just a story—it’s a mirror held up to society, reflecting our apathy and ignorance. The novel is a clarion call for environmental stewardship, reminding us that fiction can quickly become reality if we don’t act decisively. For those who enjoy thought-provoking and socially relevant narratives, this book is a must-read.
In the end, A Breathless Sky leaves readers with both a sense of urgency and a glimmer of hope. The future is not yet written, and while the sky may seem breathless in the story, we still have the power to keep ours clear.
I received an audiobook ARC via NetGally in exchange for an honest review. This book was narrated by Robin Miles.
I was initially excited for the synopsis of this book, it touches on many themes I’m passionate about, so I had high hopes. I realised this was the second book so went ahead and read the first one as well so I had the context needed.
Following in from the first book, A Breathless Sky continues to follow the turmoil faced by Siblings Syrah and Romelo as they continue to fight to protect the Giant Sequoias they both love so much, while also fighting each other over how to do it.
Overall I thought the story was pretty good, and the writing was ok. There were moments I thought the story became repetitive, and moving too slowly. From the synopsis I guess I was expecting more action than what was delivered. I did enjoy the clarity that came with the change of POV, while not announced as such, it was clear which siblings perspective I was reading.
Overall I do recommend giving this series a read, especially if you love nature and enjoy books from a futuristic perspective of the planet.
Thank you NetGally and Brilliance Publishing - Brilliance Audio for the opportunity to read this ARC.
I loved the overall message behind this environmentally-focused duet. Still, I thought the story went fast for all of the life-altering events the main character, Syrah, went through, but it also felt slow overall due to everything the story attempted but didn't quite accomplish. I liked that the focus wasn't on a love story between Syrah and one of the other characters, but for as brief as it was, I didn't think it needed to be included. The main relationship in this one was between Syrah and her brother, Romelo, who were separated at the beginning of the first book in a forest fire where Romelo was presumed dead. They found each other again in the underground world of Rhiza, whose leadership and the fate of humanity they fought over in the end. I think some things were done beautifully in this story, and the message of what could happen environmentally very soon if we don't make serious world changes is very important, but this fell flat for me. I wanted more from Syrah's relationships, more descriptions of the beautiful world the author created, and more catharsis for the characters.
I received, graciously, an ARC copy from Netgalley.
A climate change, based fantasy set in the (not too distant) future, where a woman is faced with viciously protecting the trees (and the secret society of fantastical beings who protect the trees) and the humans who are not nearly as respectful to nature as they should.
This series explores the complicated relationship between family. More specifically between the family we share blood with and the family we choose (or those who choose us). It also explores grief, betrayal, love and finding one's self.
The way this series engages the climate crisis is absolutely gripping. The disasters that take place and how we are watching diseases run rampant and the dying off of species, all due to human nature and greed.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I think the author did a wonderful job with the characters and capturing the complexity of human emotions and how those emotions fuel our decisions and ultimately the paths we choose!
Like a few other readers, I requested *A Breathless Sky* from NetGalley without realising it was the second book in a duology, and that's my bad, so I'll leave related issues out of this of course!
I couldn't completely get into the writing style. While I recognise this might be more of a personal preference, I felt the narrative didn’t flow smoothly. As a result, I didn’t always look forward to picking the book up and had difficulty pushing through.
That said, I really appreciated the central theme of nature versus humanity, especially the main character’s struggle with her brother and the pursuit of her own desires to figure out where she truly belongs. I also enjoyed the character development and world-building.
Overall, I did enjoy the book, but it felt a bit long at times and lost momentum. That said, it did what a good book should: it made me reflect on important issues, particularly about the environment.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own. Thank you to NetGalley, Veronica G. Henry and 47north for this ARC.
A Breathless Sky is book 2 in The Scorched Earth duology.
Syrah is a tour guide at Sequoia National Park but she's also the heir and expected to be the next Keeper in the ancient subterranean world of Rhiza. But her brother is hell-bent on becoming the Keeper himself and will go to great lengths to make that happen.
So I requested this book because I loved the cover, only to find out it's the second in a series and I hadn't read the first! So of course it took me a while to get into it and at about 40% the story had me hooked too. However, I didn't find any suspense and it was a bit obvious what was going to happen. There were betrayals that Syrah should have expected. But this book also makes you realise the real world problems that humans create for themselves and the wild life.
𐙚 Eco-conscious Fantasy 𐙚 Self-Discovery 𐙚 Family Dynamics
Veronica G. Henry’s A Breathless Sky blends fantasy and environmental themes in a futuristic setting. This was a unique and thought-provoking listen for me. The story follows Syrah, now a guide at Sequoia National Park, as she navigates a hidden world of ancient beings protecting Earth’s natural wonders. The book explores family dynamics, betrayal, grief, and self-discovery while weaving in commentary on the climate crisis. Overall, the imaginative world-building and emotional depth kept me invested. Fans of eco-conscious fantasy will enjoy this.
Rating: ✰✰✰ /5
Thank you NetGalley for providing me with an advance copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own. ・❥・
I got canopy keepers through first reads I believe when it came out, I never read it until I saw book two was coming out, and I managed to snag an arc. The book is not exactly my wheelhouse, as I tend to stick to romantasy, but I really enjoyed it! The world building is authentic and fully fleshed out, the conflicts feel genuine, and the fmc is easy to empathize with. There’s no cliff hanger but room for more books down the road. If there’s a third book in the series I would definitely read it!
Stop destroying the trees and help them save the planet.
Trees clean the air, provide shade and support the planet. This series shows the people above ground and the people below ground and their effects on earth. The trees try to clean the earth and people are oblivious to how their litter and stupidity harms earth. The good vs evil fight throughout. But a great story and hopefully people will look at how they effect the planet by their activities. Be part of the solution and not part of the problem!
I really enjoyed book one. There was a lot of plot and character development and it moved along nicely. I was excited for this sequel but I STRUGGLED to get through it. The story drug for over half the book. Around 60% through, it picked up speed and I was able to finish quickly. Although action did start happening around this time, I felt that the last if the book was rushed to wrap things up. The introduced protagonist was suddenly neatly packed away into a box and done with. Disappointed
This book / series has a great balance of real world problems and fantasy/magical elements. Veronica Henry wrote an excellent book which tells the consequences of humans damaging the earth and how the earth and its magical creatures fight back against them. Syrah is stuck in the middle between saving the human race and knowing they are the very ones killing the planet and the trees she holds dear.
I have to admit I was a little skeptical as to how Veronica was going to carry on the story as the last one felt a bit final. Again she smashed it out the park and felt like a movie was being played in my head. Soemthing that I haven’t experience in reading in a long time! I really enjoyed this duology, so different to what is available at the moment and soemthing that I think a wide range of people will enjoy!
This sequel boosted my Scorched Earth rating from four to five solid stars—phenomenal follow on to The Canopy Keepers. I read this story while So Cal forest fires burned hundreds of thousands of acres in January. This fantasy is like a metaphor for competing climate change discourse, the oftentimes divergent response of both nature and humans to the problem, and the resulting war of sorts.
A wonderful, thought provoking sequel to the Canopy Keepers. Full of deception, right versus wrong, and deep political intrigue, A Breathless Sky was exactly what I was looking for in the sequel. The novel tied up a lot of the story that was left in limbo during the first novel in a pretty bow.
I think an expansion of the relationships a bit in this book would have made it a five star read for me.
Thank you NetGalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This duology was a slow burner for me, but very appropriate to our current climate. As I read this, there were devastating fires in California, so it almost didn't feel like fiction. The conflict felt a bit rushed towards the end, and I was hoping for a different ending, but again I think the story blended well with our lived experiences: as much as we hope for a better outcome, the end result is often more of the same.
Although I enjoyed this series, the science made no sense in book 2. Although trees do make oxygen and filter the air, they are only responsible for about 20%. If the giants “decided to stop” there would be no noticeable difference in air quality especially during such a short timeframe. If air quality got bad when trees went dormant then nobody would be able it live in places where the majority of plants go dormant in winter.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Ms henry hits another novel out of the park. It can be a stand alone but it works better if you read "the canopy keepers" first. Excellent story line , great characters. Intense as any thriller and twists and turns. Set in real life and nature with a healthy dose of gritty fantasy and finding faith to keep going. Lots of life lessons. Great finish and you will never get it til the last few pages.
I did not review the first book, so as not to discourage other readers. I've found both books to be slow and not engaging, unlike Veronica's other books which have been excellent with great characters. The pace only picked up in the final chapters as it moved to the obvious conclusion. I'll be looking forward to Veronica's next book, hopefully another Mambo Reina or even better a companion to Bacchanal!
This book was written in a way that translates to reality but also lets the reader imagine a more complex, mythological, magical world. World building is a very important part of a read for me and the author nailed that aspect. The characters are likably unlikeable. Overall, i really enjoyed this read and am going to rate it 4 stars.
This was a very well written book. It flowed from page to page. It kept me thinking about it all day long. This just made me want to read the first book as soon as I can.
The characters are well developed. I fell in love with some of the characters, human and other creatures. And didn't care for others.
I enjoyed it very much. This book deserves a second read.
The world that this author created in this scorched earth series was fascinating. It made me look at nature and trees differently than I have before. I loved the times Syrah spent in Rhiza and learning the ways of the canopy keepers. It did start a little slow after the events that ended the last book but I liked how it spent that time developing Syrah’s character even more while introducing what will be a main conflict for Syrah moving forward. The politics of the Rhiza world and the sides that its people had to choose between added great tension. I loved what the canopy keepers did affect the humans without them realizing what was going on. Syrah had so much passion and fight in her and she used it to her advantage in the best of ways. I liked it just as much as the first book.
I started reading this novel before I realized I didn’t like the first one. I did really like this one. When I was reading, I thought about the hero’s journey and every other trope associated with it. The story about humans versus Mother Nature isn’t new, but this story made it interesting. At times the author’s critique of our society and how we behave was heavy handed.
I loved this two-book series (The Canopy Keepers and A Breathless Sky). It was difficult to put the books down. I will definitely read more of Veronica Henry’s books.