Altered Estates

by Chris Mathison

Welcome to Soon! Behold a preview of your forthcomings.

You’re about to embark on the ultimate immersive experience, the written equivalent of a live-action role-playing game. Sit back, sip some pink tea, and enjoy the ride.

Propelled by the effects of groundbreaking drugs that induce temporary amnesia, scenarist Kris Robinson sets out on an extraordinary journey to claim his newly revealed a magnificent English estate. When Kris starts hearing disembodied voices, he befriends them as unlikely guides to rediscover his forgotten story.

Explore the sprawling manor, where each room holds secrets and surprises, where the staff are more than they seem. There’s the devious butler conspiring to usurp the inheritance, the alluring concierge who ignites an instant infatuation in Kris’s fantasies, and the caretaker’s precocious grandson who listens and talks to plants. As Kris and the boy unravel a series of clues left by his long-lost uncle, Kris must navigate nefarious plots and scintillating encounters that stretch the boundaries of perception.

Like nothing you’ve read before, Altered Estates is a psychedelic trip brimming with mind-bending scenes and cleverly hidden Easter eggs. Prepare to follow Kris down the rabbit hole and see if you can solve the puzzles before he does.

Genres: Mystery, Fiction

591 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 5, 2024

About the author

During early adlthood, Chris relaxed, resided or did business in 40+ countries.
As such, he missed half of the 70s and all of the 80s and 90s in America.

Along with changing locales, Chris frequently changed careers. He worked as a college instructor, reference librarian, concert producer, discotheque designer, circus advanceman,
freelance journalist, real estate developer, computer programmer, and a few other odd jobs he says he can no longer recall.

Reviews

[Catherine Victor Simpson · Rating 1 out of 5]

Could not finish. Read 20% and I couldn't justify how long it was taking me and nothing was happening. The book is too descriptive and the plot is too vague. It's also narrated in 2nd person (you this and you that). I get its a gimmick but it didn't work for me.

[Caitlin Mae · Rating 2 out of 5]

Memorable elements and great energy but good god was that long and distracted. I lost steam several times because of the constant diversion, which took all of the magic out of the mystery. Would be a great hit with a gamer and Knives Out crowd if it was half as long. It also leans in too much to Japanese stereotyping and flat female characters for my comfort. The writing is energetic and has some flair but not enough to sustain the duration. #goodreadsgiveaway

[Timothy Murphy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Okay. Here's the thing. This is an extraordinary piece that promises even more to come from this author, I hope. Very well written-- very tight, very sophisticated. Second person is a POV with unique difficulties, but I suspect it tempts every writer that ever lived. The author pulls it off well mechanically, and manage to create a tension I didn't think would be possible given the POV and the necessary info-dumpage, but still, it just FEELS like a computer game. I found myself wanting to make different choices. I wanted to question the conservators a bit more closely. I wanted to hire private detectives. I wanted to shout "Hello Sailor." (In case you aren't quite as old and moldy as I, that refers to the very first interactive game, Zork). I did not think a traditional novel could sustain 2nd person present tense through action sequences. But this one did. I think "Bright Lights, Big City" worked largely because the POV character had no more will of his own, and very little memory of what was being told him. This novel is similar in that way. Now, as an interactive novel-slash-game, I think this is has awesome possibilities as cinema; it is so incredibly visual. It would certainly be one of the very first literate examples of the interactive neo-psychedelic genre. I hear the sound of groundbreaking. For serious readers!

[Gloria Vicks · Rating 5 out of 5]

Let me start with the basics - I absolutely loved this book! I've read few books with the second person POV and this approach captivated me. I couldn't wait to see what happened to Kris next. I loved the concept of the Storytellers. It was an excellent vehicle to propel the story forward. And it wasn't the only tool the author employed. I also enjoyed the holographic environments, and the AI embedded in 2035 video game. I especially loved the "old English Manor" - it was a perfect setting for a video game style plot to evolve, and just when I thought I had it figured out, there's a plot twist that sent me down a new speculative path. (Honestly, I'd always hoped I had a relative with a castle and a fortune to pass down to me!) Few books keep me turning the pages and this was certainly one of them. Can't wait to see what the author has in store for us in the future!

[Jenny · Rating 2 out of 5]

I was intrigued by the premise of this book so when I won the giveaway I was very excited to read it.

The story started off slowly and I did not find the main character compelling however I know some works take time to pull you in as the world and character building progress.

I did not care for the second person point of view at all and did not find it akin to playing a video game but more a declarative journey without compelling description. I tried to get past this, to imagine it written in first person to see if I could get to the place where I would be « hooked » however I only made it 120 pages in before putting this on my DNF shelf.

[Louise Gray · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a real experience. I play video games and I read books. This book somehow brings the two media together. It feels like the start of something really interesting, It also reminded me a bit of the “Choose your own Adventure” books which were popular when I was a child, but with a degree of sophistication more suited to an immersive experience. I would love to try this as an audio book, if that would be somehow possible.

[Parker Walder · Rating 3 out of 5]

Thank you Goodreads for the opportunity to read this book!

Overall I enjoyed the book but it was hard to follow at times. It was a fun sci-fy step into the future with advanced technology. I also enjoyed the old manor feel. A nice mix of old and new. Check this book out for a fun and whimsical read.

[The Sassy Bookworm · Rating 4 out of 5]

Book Review: "Altered Estates" by Chris Mathison

Rating: ★★★★

Altered Estates by Chris Mathison takes readers on a mind-bending journey through a magnificent English estate, blending elements of futuristic technology with the charm of an old-world manor. The story follows scenarist Kris Robinson as he explores the sprawling estate after the effects of groundbreaking drugs induce temporary amnesia. What ensues is a psychedelic trip filled with hidden Easter eggs and mysterious encounters that challenge the boundaries of perception.

One of the standout features of this book is its unique narrative style, written in the second person point of view. Mathison's writing is superb, capturing the essence of a live-action role-playing game in literary form. The fusion of futuristic elements with the classical setting of the manor creates a truly immersive reading experience.

Throughout the story, readers are treated to a myriad of literary scenes, each more captivating than the last. From cosmic circus parades to animated statues, the author weaves a tapestry of surreal moments that keep readers engaged and intrigued. The inclusion of famous figures like Carl Jung, Sigmund Freud, and Timothy Leary adds an extra layer of depth to the narrative, making it a delight for fans of literary references.

While Altered Estates is a captivating read, it does have its drawbacks. The length of the book may be off-putting to some readers, as it requires a significant time investment to fully immerse oneself in the intricate plot. Additionally, the complexity of the story can be challenging to follow at times, requiring careful attention to detail to unravel its mysteries.

In conclusion, Altered Estates is a compelling and imaginative novel that pushes the boundaries of traditional storytelling. With its blend of psychedelic themes, intricate puzzles, and rich literary references, it offers a reading experience unlike any other. While it may not be suited for those seeking a quick read, for readers willing to invest time and attention, this book promises a truly unique and rewarding journey through the looking glass.

⚠️This review was written based on personal opinions and experiences with the book. Individual preferences may vary⚠️

[Jordan · Rating 3 out of 5]

I won a Kindle copy of this book via a Goodreads giveaway. Thank you for allowing me the chance to read and review this story. I am leaving this review voluntarily with my own thoughts and opinions.

This story, told in a unique second person perspective, follows the main character as he receives a letter from his long lost uncle, claiming that he is the sole inheritor to his title and estate. He then flies to the English manor to solve the mystery of just who his uncle really was, and he makes friends and enemies along the way.

I had a good time reading the parts where Christopher and the main character would try to solve the puzzles. I think it was neat that things they came across earlier may be part of the solution, so they always had to be alert.

I also enjoyed the game that the cast of characters played about halfway in, and the news segments were very amusing.

However, I just feel as though the book was way too wordy, coming in at almost 600 pages; certain scenes may have needed to been condensed.

I also feel as though the main character was incredibly nonchalant about his whole adventure, and even when the truth is revealed. He just seems to accept everything with no real emotion. No nervousness, no incredulity, just an understanding and an acceptance.

I would rate this book three stars overall. It was just wasn't for me, but it may be for you if you are really into sci fi exploring the perception of the human mind.

[Mark W · Rating 5 out of 5]

The POV is certainly unique as is the use of present tense throughout. I admire the author’s writing style and rendering of diverse dialects. I like the mystery of the protagonist’s dear departed uncle, who even though dead is always around. But what really stood out for me were the big scenes laden with special effects: the cosmic circus parade, the Nobel ceremony, the statue of Shakespeare coming to life. the wild dance party. There were also some touching scenes, most notably Christoper Robin falling in puppy love with Alice in Wonderland at her mushroom-infused tea party. Like in the classic computer game Myst, I found myself trying to solve the puzzles ahead of the narration revealing them. The device of the Storytellers was very effective. Since they were manifestations of Jung’s collective unconscious, one might say that all who ever lived and died were character in this novel, although hardly of them had speaking parts! The cameos by Carl Jung, Sigmund Freud, Stephen Hawking, James Joyce, Timothy Leary and others were hilarious. It was amazing to me how the author strung their actual quotes together in a coherent and entertaining dialog with the central character. Lastly, the magic mushroom and peyote button characters were quite believable. The credible representations of plant intelligence really set this novel apart for me.

[Linda Brown · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great read, I highly recommend this novel. Let me hit some high points: There are good descriptions and many clever turns of phrase. The BBC-mockumentary segment is especially well-done. I can clearly visualize McCabe's doorman uniforms arrayed in a "multicolored fan." The setup of Uncle Arthur as a slightly mysterious eccentric worked great in this opening chapter. 'We will bottle no wine before it's time...which is leap-day.' Before you get to that, it's clear he's rich and odd, and this just nails it. The book has a nearly-ideal mix of humor and mystery. Despite the unusual 2nd person voice of the work, this actually succeeds in evoking an empathic reaction. That's hard to do well in regular prose, and probably doubly difficult in this style. Congratulations to the author. The thoughts of the protagonist and his Storytellers are set up in a way that the jumps he takes seem perfectly logical for someone in that situation. The contents of the envelope work for the story, so there's no criticism on this point. Lastly...I'm impressed. Second-person POV seems to be working here. It's clear that changing everything to second person has taken what would otherwise be a well-written but well-worn mystery and turned it into something a lot more compelling.

[Megumi Nakata · Rating 5 out of 5]

I read an ARC copy and was blown away by it. The concept is wonderful and entertaining. I can't imagine how much work was put in to get all those bells and whistles from 2035 the author describes working. It's like a near future tech primer and a novel all in one. The second person present tense did draw me into the story as the author intended. The danger with second person is the reader keeps saying, "Who, me?" In this story it didn't bother me - I was involved and actually thinking in terms of my own family and wondering what secrets they might be keeping. I can appreciate the author’s not wanting to be specific about background, though, allowing the reader to fill in their best guess. I like it that the author is intentionally vague on where Kris is living and as to gender and description, letting the reader slide into the seat provided. Since this is a long book, it might demand more commitment from the average reader than he/she is willing to give. I know people who will play complex, intellectually demanding computer games into the night. Those same people will love this book Congratulations to the author for creating a brilliant piece of work!

[Robin Rae · Rating 5 out of 5]

Beautiful book jacket. Utterly unique story. This is such a fun ride. I took it twice! , easily transferable to a game or movie. The characters, even the villains, are so fascinating and endearing. The future tech described, especially holographic television was credible and easy to envision; now I can’t wait for the 2030s! I was impressed by the Storyteller device that allowed this story to be told in the second person; I had no trouble adjusting to that form of narration. I must say I was stunned by the plot twists and reveals I never saw coming. Yes, it's a very long book and, yes, it develops slowly, but when it finally takes off, it really delivers. The role playing game was electrifying, the disco scene rockin', the circus parade amazing, the teleportation jaw dropping. But most of all for me at least, Alice in Wonderland's appearance late in the story was excessively sweet. But of course, you don't write a magic mushroom tale without paying tribute to the original! I'm going to try to remember to reread this in 2035 to see if the author got all the new gadgetry, AI stuff, and plant smarts right.

[Jim Gwin · Rating 5 out of 5]

I suspect the author: is an incurable trendsetter/rule breaker. This story is a lot like "Goosebumps" for adults and the sheer originality of it made me want to read more stories like this. The author employs 2nd-person POV: I think this aspect is vital to the overall appeal of this novel, since IMO, it would not be nearly as interesting if it were written in either first or third person. Does it work? I found myself frequently asking "would I do that?" as I read, almost daring myself to act/think in contradiction to what the central character had chosen. As for the internal dialogue: Due to the fact that the novel is written in 2nd person, I felt it was definitely appropriate. Anyone receiving news such as this (which one could only dream of-sigh!), would go through some serious mental gymnastics before making a decision. Sharing that thought process is a vital part of making this story believable. As I read, I always knew something big was coming, and that's all I need to keep reading. It's one of the most unique and innovative novels I've ever read.

[Carol Rogers · Rating 5 out of 5]

One thing I’d like to ask the author: did you grow up with me? Because this has been a secret fantasy of mine since I was a little girl--the long lost uncle that only claims I'm related to him after I've grown. This is such a fun tale, easily transferable to a game or movie. The author spelling out everything so precisely that I found myself over and over saying, "Wow!" It’s a very long book but well worth the time and effort required. The characters, even the villains, are so fascinating and endearing. The future tech described, especially holographic television was credible and easy to envision; now I can’t wait for the 2030s! I was impressed by the Storyteller device that allowed this story to be told in the second person; I had no trouble adjusting to that form of narration. I must say I was stunned by the plot twists and reveals I never saw coming. This novel is a definite winner. And I would love to see what the author does next.

[Prima Donna · Rating 5 out of 5]

I thoroughly enjoyed this psychedelic adventure story. It was s bright, witty, innovative and just plain fun. It provides a reader like me with a chance for escape, along with an opportunity to become part of something grand and mysterious. The fact that it's written in second person adds a wonderful dimension to it, even on my second reading. Second person can only work if the reactions of the actor have a genuine feel to them, yet still offer some unpredictability. This is part of the genius of this story - that the main character behaves in a way any reader can identify with, yet also makes us smile--parts pf it were so Monty Python-esque, like Inspector Farnsworth, the sumo pub, the funeral for a parakeet, and yodeling Crunch. The story was so visual. If there could ever be a literary equivalent of a Disney , boy, this would be it. I want to one day see its adaptation serialied on Netflix!

[Melanie Sapper Young · Rating 5 out of 5]

I don’t know if swearing is allowed here, but d**m, I loved this offbeat, captivating book! It is utterly fantastic in the true meaning of that word. The writing is solid with no stumbles. The plot pulled me along happily, partly because of the pacing—details are doled out at a pace I enjoyed, and when I most wanted them. As I neared the end, I asked myself if I could complain about anything. Perhaps a lack of characterization? Then it hits me that the main character has been brainwashed. He doesn’t KNOW who he is. Since the main character doesn’t do anything morally repugnant (at least in my humble opinion), I happily read this brilliant book, enjoying every minute of being immersed in an amazing tale. This is definitely a book I’ll savor reading again. Loved the Storytellers and their story!

[Cheryl Wachtel · Rating 5 out of 5]

There's a simple reason why 2nd person isn't popular as the POV for fiction: it's hard to make it work. The fact that this author made it work is admirable enough in itself. But what I like here is that this narrative probably wouldn't be as good told in first-person or third-person. The author has chosen a situation that lends itself to this unusual form of storytelling. I also like the use of outlandish humor and the present tense. If I came across an unattributed passage from this book, I would probably think, "Hey, this must be from Altered Estates." That's a good thing. Very few novels have an extremely distinctive style that's so easily spotted among the countless stacks of books out there. I strongly recommend this for the unique reading experience it offers. No other book is like it!

[Mindy Noel · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really liked the Storyteller device in this novel. Having the main character's story told back to him (because he has a kind of amnesia) is a really neat way of using second person in the narratuve, and I quickly got used to it. I thought the intelligent talking plants were fantastic. I wished they were in it more. My favorite characterwas Christopher Robin. What a charming smart kid. And always so polite. This was a manor mystery but not dark like you might expect. In fact, it was quite light-hearted throughout and LOL-funny in several parts. I play a lot of computer games so naturally I liked all the puzzles they had to solve. This quirky, psychedelic novel may not be for everyone but it sure was for me.

[Maria · Rating 5 out of 5]

GET READY FOR A WILD RIDE!!!!

I was absolutely captivated by this book! If you are ready to go on an AMAZING adventure with thrills and twists at every turn, than this is the book for you!! Just when I thought I had everything figured out, I found out I was nowhere close to what I thought and was utterly captivated with the journey I went on. Couldn't put it down. I HIGHLY recommend this book for anyone that is ready to go on an adventure of a lifetime!!

[Anita · Rating 2 out of 5]

Many times I almost gave up and stopped reading this since the plot was so outlandish. But I persisted and finally finished it. The last part of the book was even more convoluted than the first part. There were so many new names and characters at the end, some were the original characters but now they had their “real” names which just added to the confusion. At the end of the book I was just glad I finally finished it and really didn’t care if Kris went back to normal state of mind or not.

[Coffee_Booze_and_Books · Rating 3 out of 5]

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Thank you Goodreads for the opportunity to read this book for an honest review. Unfortunately, this book just wasn't for me. The premise was interesting and the underlying story was good, I personally just couldn't get into the style of storytelling. There are plenty of excellent reviews, so I'm sure this is just a "me" thing.

[Tricia Shaffer · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was such an interesting story. I loved how it was written and brought you into the story. I wasn’t sure what was happening at first which kept me drawn to the book. I loved the characters as you had some you liked and others I was wondering what they were up to since it seemed not good. The ending was a surprise that I wasn’t expecting.

[Chris · Rating 5 out of 5]

I won this book from a Goodreads giveaway and I’m very happy I did! I absolutely loved this book its full of twists and turns and I did not expect how it turned out! I’m looking forward to see more from this author.

[Melissa · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great story that keeps you guessing about what is real and what is imaginary. It gives you a whole new sense of how we view time. The characters are relatable and the is a good blend of mystery, science fiction, and humor.

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[Maddy Nickless · Rating 2 out of 5]

DNF - loved the writing style but the plot wasn’t for me. Felt simultaneously slow and rushed.

[Tom Harrison]

Not my cup of tea

[Samantha Campbell · Rating 5 out of 5]

Definitely give this a try! Worth the read!

[Theresa · Rating 2 out of 5]

A little too much of a psychedelic trip for me.