Okay that couldn't be all? Right? How awesome was that set up? There are so many questions left unanswered. I would have given this story all the stars if I knew there was going to be a follow up.
We need to know more about this couple. We don't get to see them together as a couple much beyond a meet- cute that turned into a meet-wolf. We don't get to see how their bond is tested by the bigoted packmates that wanted her dead now being forced to play nice while also hating her guts? We don't get to see more of her omega wolf and her sassiness..We don't get answers about her dad, why she smelled human for so long, her hair etc. etc. I will change my review when/if a second book comes out.
The book overall is great, it is very short and a good read if you don’t have a lot of time to sink in to a longer book at the moment. However I do agree with the other comments that there needs to be another book diving deeper in to these 2 characters. There are to many questions left open that could and should be answered. The ground work was laid for more chapters before ending abruptly. Even with the abrupt ending it gives a conclusion but due to the previously laid ground work leaves you hanging a bit. I look forward to checking out other books by this author.
I liked the story very much but it was so short that I felt disappointed. I wanted to know what happened after and I wanted a longer story . This was a very quick read for me I read the whole book in under an hour I am 51 and grew up reading so I read fast but I need books that have sequels .. Like the cold blooded alpha etc 11 book series with book 12 coming next year ...
I know this i suspect, was supposed to be a novella. It definitely didn't feel finished.
All though the aspect of the plot was there everything moved very quickly, not much of a back story and it did feel like it was missing parts. Many questions unanswered etc. I did read finish reading it though and it did have the chance to be an incredible book. It just wasn't for me.
I enjoyed this book. I think it’s a great start to a series. It was well written. Enjoyed both main characters. I was so happy the FMC wasn’t annoying. I can’t stand a book where the female character is annoying and makes stupid decisions that are unrealistic. The book went at a good pace. Congrats to the author for writing a good book. I highly recommend.
So I'm not really sure about this one, it was a good story, some nice twists to it but I'm sort of sitting here think AND, cos it just stopped. There is no book two that I can find just 90 pages of a good start to a book and nothing. I did like what I had read So far but it fell flat at the end. So I'm happy with what I read but sorry disappointed with the end.
•”The universe has fated that you're mine, just as I’m yours.”•
Loved the pacing of the book, really melds together well. Also, for such a short book it explains things really well. A quick fun well written short PNR story.
Would of gave 5 stars if it didn't end like a middle of the books or said a book 2 was coming out. Don't tell what happens when she meets the pack or what happened to her father . First-time I have been disappointed with the writer
I loved the storyline, but feel like it didn’t go anywhere. The characters are intriguing but we don’t know enough about them. Is there another book coming out? I love that there is no bull, but we are missing context. I hope there is more to this story. Elizabeth
Good story, flows really well but the ending was abrupt. There seems to be a lot left untold. Does the pack accept her? What happens to Olivia the wolf whose mate he killed?
This started out pretty good. Sadly it ended. I had no idea it was the end, I thought the book got cut off. Why would you stop a story like that? Let people know that the conclusion is coming. Very disappointing read for me.
Ive been reading her shifter books and i have enjoyed the storylines etc. I grabbed the book thinking a stand alone no other books to finish. Get to the end and it’s like a sudden stop, like its not really completed.