Ghost College (Ghost Files Book #1)
by Scott Nicholson and J.R. Rain
Okay, this was a very quick read. I'd like to be able to say it was because it was such a great story that I couldn't put it down. And it was a great story. But that's not the reason it was a quick read. It read so quickly because it was so short. It may meet the word requirement to be considered a novel, but I've read books that the authors called novellas that were longer.
There were really only 6 characters with any real purpose in the story, the two main characters, Ellen and Monty Drew, the little girl ghost, Sophie, the Dark Master/piano teacher, Mr. Sigmund, the principal and the night janitor. Those characters are well developed, but then, with only a couple of other characters making even the slightest of appearances, they should be well developed. The only reason I knew Ellen and Monty's last name, Drew, prior to location 540 (Chapter 8) on my Kindle is because I saw it in the description on Amazon. 7 chapters with no mention of the main characters' last name. Yes, I'm shaking my head.
The editing and proofreading was excellent, with only one sentence catching my eye and pulling me out of the story to read and reread in hopes of deciding whether it was a mistake or just confusing. At 765: "Ellen's eyes were intense and earnest, and if i didn't already love her, I would have fallen for them now." Them? He wouldn't have fallen for her, just for her eyes? So, maybe not a grammar error, but an interesting (no, I'm being kind, it wasn't) way to word that sentence.
Ellen and Monty are paranormal investigators. She has psychic abilities, he doesn't think he does. The are called to small Christian College, Faith College, to investigate the reports of voices and sounds heard by students and staff. The locate the ghost of a small girl, and of her piano teacher, who evidently dabbled in the Black Arts. The story is built around not only the story of how the little girl became a ghost and why she is still in residence, so to speak, over 100 years after death The story also serves as a vehicle to introduce the two main characters of The Ghost Files series, and to show Monty's growth in recognizing that the paranormal world is a real thing, and in recognizing his own strengths in the field.
This was a good story. The pacing was good. The characters were in danger. The plot, though predictable, was well developed. Loose ends (most of them) were tied up in the end. It was stand-alone, certainly leaving the door wide open for a sequel, but sufficient for a single read, too. But somehow, it left me feeling "meh." Compared to other of J.R Rain's characters (I'm not familiar with other work of Scott Nicholson, so can't comment on that) such as Samantha Moon and Jim Knighthorse, these characters were not as interesting. So, I probably won't pick up another of the books in the series unless they show up on my free Kindle e-books lists. Your experience may vary.