Practice Makes Perfect

by Becca Vale

I’m no good at following rules and could give a shit about other people’s opinions, so it doesn’t matter that the world says it’s wrong. I’ve always known my twin brother was meant to be mine in the most carnal way possible.

He matters, though. And Milo wouldn’t understand. At least, not at first.

So I need to ease him into the idea.

Make him think it’s his own.

Employ a little strategic manipulation for the greater good.

Because Milo, a theater major, just asked me to come help him run his lines for tomorrow night’s show, but helping him understand that he needs something more from me, that he’s meant to be mine, is the greatest good of them all.

And I’m done biding my time.

Things are gonna change between us, starting tonight.

Genres: M M Romance, Erotica, Novella, College

ebook

Published January 25, 2024

Reviews

[Aricka Decker]

Listen… 🤧 twins

[Peppa · Rating 5 out of 5]

No complaints!! This right here was a banger😮‍💨🔥!!

[Lilly [Hiatus due to School] · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fun, smutty, hot, taboo story!

I loved how Milo was gently manipulated by his twin. Overall, I really enjoyed this one. I think it's my favourite twincest story. I can't keep track anymore since I'm enjoying everything by Becca. These books are like crack, seriously.

[BelleLovesRomance · Rating 5 out of 5]

Finn, being all protective of Milo:

"And yeah, that’s right, I’m older. Twelve minutes, bitches. Probably because, even in the womb, I figured I’d need to scope out the situation first before letting my brother venture out into the world."

Finn, being all cunning and devious cuz he's obsessed with Milo:

"I need to ease him into the idea of the two of us being together as more than just brothers. And what better way to do that than to make him think it’s his idea? That he’s the one corrupting me, leading me down a forbidden path, twisting our love into something deviant and carnal and fucking delicious."

He just doesn't fully know that Milo wants him that way, too. 💀

I love reading what's inside Finn's head so much. He's unapologetically him and doesn't care about anybody else other than Milo. *sigh* The utter focus and devotion he has for Milo is everything! 🖤

This is one of my favorite Becca Vale books, and a definite reread for me.

Hot & Spice: 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶

[Kim B · Rating 4 out of 5]

So sweet....twin brothers - one sweet and one not...

I'm making my way through all of the Vale catalog. I'm not sure when I stumbled upon her books and became one of those readers who looks forward to her Friday emails and purchases every book. But regardless, here we are....and there are some books from her "earlier" writing days that I haven't purchased so I decided to "catch up." This one was shorter than her books are now, but still a great read.

[RestlessPages · Rating 5 out of 5]

And yeah, that’s right, I’m older. Twelve minutes, bitches. Probably because, even in the womb, I figured I’d need to scope out the situation first before letting my brother venture out into the world.
I look out for him. Not because he's not capable of looking out for himself, even though he's definitely not as assertive as he should be sometimes, but because he's mine. And no one fucks with what's mine.

Damn, I really liked this.

Milo, who is innocent and insecure, asks Finn, who is unapologetically possessive and protective (and a little manipulative!), to help him prepare for a lead role that he was unexpectedly assigned to.

Deep down, a part of him must realize he's already mine.
He must know, in the very core of him, just like I do, that I've got a right to his body. That I'm the only one who does. And that I'll move heaven and fucking earth to make him feel good, fucking always.

Fuck, the sweet boy. He really is too damn good for me.
Which doesn't mean I'm giving him up.
I don't give a shit if I don't deserve him. The only thing I give a shit about is claiming and keepig him.

Highly recommended!

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*General Notes*
-taboo (twins)
-Finn is 12 min older than Milo

*Intimacy Notes*
-Top/bottom/verse: strict; Milo bottoms, Finn tops.
-Kinks/sex notes: handjobs, blowjobs, grinding, hotdogging (but one of them wears boxers), some good dirty talking, fingering, penetration...
-Other:
・nicknames: sweetheart, baby.
・possessiveness, protectiveness...
・praise

[M's ☆~HEA~☆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Twincest. Big bro helps little bro practice for his role in a play, sexually. (I read the first part of this like a week ago so I don't remember why sex was involved)

“Good boy,” I tell him, urging him to lift up and then helping him get his jeans the rest of the way off. “Shirt, too,” I say when he hesitates, unzipping myself and shoving my own jeans down to my thighs.
I leave my boxers on for now, because I really will break too soon if I don’t, but when his eyes go wide I yank him down on my lap again, not giving him a chance to overthink this shit.
“That’s it,” I whisper, positioning him the way I want him, with my cock firmly wedged between his ass cheeks and only a thin layer of cotton between us. “Rub yourself back and forth, just like this, while we go through this next one.”

This wasn't bad but the anticipatory build-up & teasing was hotter than the actual sex.

[Loves · Rating 2 out of 5]

The entire story is basically one drawn out scene of seduction. The pace is excruciatingly slow even for a short story and there's very little content besides banter, sex or dirty talk and it's very repetitive. Almost no characterization or character development (the little characterization that exists is of the telling instead of showing kind). For instance, we have no idea whatsoever what do the twins look like. I wasn't expecting a novel, but even a short dirty story requires some characterization or plot development in order to be effective. I lost my patience and skimmed over the last pages.

[Giulia’s bookshelf · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's just so incredible how hot twins can be. Sometimes it truly fascinates me how twisted we are for loving this kind of things, but alas! Every Friday I love it a bit more😇

Also it's true! Practice does make perfect, and you know what else is perfect? Twins who have been pining for each other since forever, a dom and a sub one, a strong one and a more sweet one😈

We will just have Finn take care of us, please and thank you!

[Leigh Gaskill · Rating 4 out of 5]

I definitely like the stories where one MC has questionable morals (psychopathy, sociopathy, just doesn’t give a fuck) but is absolutely feral for the other MC. This absolutely falls in that category. I should have read it sooner!

[Becca Vale]

Looking for taboo gay smut? Find this yummy twincest short (with a side helping of moral ambiguity!) on Smashwords!

[Sara Barney · Rating 5 out of 5]

Finn "helping" Milo prepare for tomorrow's lead role is steamy and sweet. Loved these two!

[Kassandra Knight · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another great book, perfectly spicy and just right. Loved all the yummy details.

Highly recommend.

[Leo · Rating 3 out of 5]

3☆

ᔑᑭᏆᑕᗴ: 🔥🔥
しᗩᑌᏀᕼᔑ: 😐
Ꭲᗴᗩᖇᔑ:😭
ᗰᑕᔑ: Milo,Finn
ᑭᝪᐯ: 1st dual
Ꭲᖇᝪᑭᗴᔑ: Incest


Lo mismo de siempre con Becca

[Jenna · Rating 3 out of 5]

I make no apologies for the shit I read anymore...
So dirty! Love these quick reads.

[malia ༊·° · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 stars 𐙚


hott

[laura cabezas · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 stars💙

[ʟᴀᴜʀᴀ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.25 🌟

My first Becca read and likely not my last.

[Dani · Rating 3 out of 5]

HRCYED2: 24 Hour Readathon

[Staring At A Star · Rating 5 out of 5]

Cute twincest novel. Not actually much manipulation on the ml's part since the Mc was already interested

[Monique · Rating 5 out of 5]

I don’t think Ms Vale could write a bad book if she tried. Another delicious smutty treat here.

[Brianna · Rating 5 out of 5]

This one made me sweat. Good lord. I can’t stop thinking about it. Pure sin and deliciousness and praise and pleasure dommy and just all of the perfectness that I enjoy immensely.