(Advance Review Copy from NetGalley)
I’ve actually been trying to avoid negative reviews the past few years, either DNF a book or being more selective in what I read – I realize now this is a potential drawback of getting addicted to NetGalley!
Darkness There, But Something More – absolutely intrigued me with the title and drew me either further into it with the promise of Poe and an absolutely badass Book Cover!
But I was ultimately disappointed by this book. I reread the blurb and discovered that really the blurb almost tells you everything that happens in the book, I honestly believe that this piece could have been a short story or novelette length and probably retained all the dramatic points and skipped a lot of info-dumping.
The main problem with the work is an abundance of ‘tell’. Almost everything that occurs is relayed in relatively dry and factual prose, when I started into the book I thought that perhaps I was just getting the backstory setup as the MC described the events that led her to the current situation, but no, almost the whole book is presented this way. Aside from the beyond awkward sex scene there is little sensory information, everyone’s dialogue sounds the same, dry as a bone. Much of the book is padded with info dumping about the MC’s experiences as a lecturer, but not the interesting ones, just random ruminations about mundane student complaints and so forth.
As mentioned the plot is largely explained in the blurb but had a lot of tonal whiplash, its hard to explain without spoilers, an example: the MC after being well established as a relatively upstanding, even naïve and innocent, character (other than the ‘dark secret’ which even isn’t the worse fictional dark secret) – almost inexplicably takes a SWITCHBLADE to a meetup with another character. There’s no indication of how a university lecturer procured such a blade or a smoothing of the jarring character decision (not to mention the blade never gets a mention again so it wasn’t some sort of Chekov thing).
Lastly, there really wasn’t much Edgar Ellen Poe to this story. There were some clever references and I guess the story could be mirrored in Poe’s tales. But, overall at times I wondered if he’d just been forgotten, the style of the book certainly doesn’t fit and for a character who lectures in the subject (and tells us their thoughts every page) there is a remarkable lack of Poe.
I hate to leave a poor review, but also need to be honest. Darkness There reads more like a cozy mystery novella, rather than “Dark Suspense.” Overall it feels like it needed a major developmental edit to remove some basic writing faux pas. The author seems like a talented and experienced writer so I’m not sure if this work was a side project or foray into a different genre, but this book isn’t a hit.