Oh boy, where do I even start?
Well, I was a big fan of FLB when I was in High School but I guess I grew out of her, as I hadn't picked anything of hers up in a long while and struggled to re-read any of her earlier work. I decided to give it another go. After all, FLB used to bring me such joy!
Unfortunately, Beyond the Pale Motel did not make me want to read anything more of hers. In fact, it made me want to never, ever read FLB again.
FLB's writing is the same as it's ever been (that is to say: she hasn't grown as a writer at all). It's lavish and stylish and full of glitter. We get a lot of info on what everyone's wearing, what their house looks like, how beautifully themed this party is. A lovely little shell over the dysfunction within. Actually, I think FLB would make a better stylist than a writer, tbh.
Main character Catt is set up to be an unhappy woman trying to stay positive. At least for the first chapter. After that, the narration quickly spirals into self-hatred, toxic personality traits, and an obsession with men and sex.
In fact, despite the semi-interesting plot FLB hinted at, it remains just that throughout most of the story: a hint.
What really bothers me about the plot is the poor way in which it is handled. If well cared for, it could have been intriguing. Instead, FLB doesn't seem to understand how to properly convey foreshadowing, or how to talk about anything besides how horny and miserable the main character is.
Miserable main characters aren't even that big of a deal if they're handled correctly and if they actually GO somewhere. Catt does not. She spends most of the book mourning being left by her husband and trying to appease her grief using sex with random, toxic strangers.
This narrative would've made a lot more sense if Catt had actually learned anything in the end and had changed her behavior. OR if all of this toxic self destruction had lead to some culmination of some sort, something interesting.
It didn't.
Bree is set up as Catt's super close friend, yet we scarcely ever see her. When we do see Bree, she leaves a sour taste in your mouth for all her vanity and selfishness.
The way FLB writes Catt/Bree's friendship comes across as if they aren't close at all (despite the author insisting the opposite) or that they're in love and are ultimately going to end up together, raising Bree's pre-teen son Skylar.
This doesn't happen, and because FLB is so terrible at portraying honest emotion, I'm still not sure if Bree/Catt are meant to appear as if they have feelings for one another or if I'm totally off base here. Nonetheless, the fact that they don't ever discuss their relationship or really support one another at all makes Catt's obsession with Skylar more creepy/strange than sweet.
Getting back to the "plot" of the book - FLB does very little to interest the reader and absolutely nothing to give us any conclusions to draw from. My suspicions were all over the place, bouncing from Scott (who came across as creepy in one scene, not sweet and dependable as FLB intended him to be), to Big Bob, to Catt herself!
One main plot point of the story (the victims resemblance to Bree) is not touched on until the very, very end of the story.
Once again, FLB's inability to write believable emotions and relationships rears it's ugly head! Catt and Bree have a falling out, yet the details are so brushed over and ignored that once again I'm left to wonder about the intention behind FLB's portrayal of their relationship vs what we, as readers, are meant to infer. They're SO close, yet Bree won't even hear Catt out and just cuts her out of her life like it's nothing? Then she proceeds to flirt with not one but TWO of Catt's ex-interests? Truly????
When we finally get to the end and find out the big plot twist, it, like everything else about this novel, falls flat. It truly comes across as something done for pure shock value as opposed to something thought out and constructive to the plot.
On a side note, the sex in the story came off as cheap to me. While it was decently written, it felt as if FLB really just wanted an excuse to write sex scenes, and even that desire falls off into the void after about half the book.
From beginning to end, my overall suspicion is that FLB once again self-inserted herself into a novel. Authors dealing with their grief / anger through their work is not uncommon, but when it's as transparent as Beyond the Pale Motel, well, let's just say it makes a dull and frustrating read.
Catt does not come across as an original character, but as a version of FLB and her own darkness. This may be less irritating if the story, it's characters, and the relationships were better fleshed out and given more care and attention.
Instead, Catt learns absolutely nothing until she dies, and even then the overall "message/moral" of the story is blurry, simple, and overly cheesy at best, and downright boring and stupid at worst.
I guess FLB finally got to write the erotica novel she's clearly always wanted to write. It belongs on the shelf alongside the ten cent erotica of the same caliber.