I’m going to consider this my fourth book I finished for Pride Month!! (I’m not counting “How We End”— I finished that with little fanfare and with the sole intent to judge it. Not sure if I’ll even review that one, but that’s beside the point.) As with the previous book, and in what I presume will be a pattern to continue until the last book, I won’t be leaving a star rating due to my own very mixed opinions. However, I did enjoy this more than book 2, even with the padding! IT WAS MORE ENJOYABLE, THANK GOD… particularly some of the action and magic was utilized in a way that was actually fun to read about! Every storyline was interesting, and easy to distinguish. I do wish, though, that there weren’t so many atrocities that every time something hopeful would happen, it would instantly go bad in the next chapter or so. (It made me a nervous wreck by the end😵💫)
As always, the audiobook was fantastic, it made me feel everything from triumph to anxiety tenfold, and finally getting a Sir Callie book in multi-POV was such a delight! I won’t lie, the main kids’ voices were a little hard to distinguish sometimes, but Elowyn’s was easily the most recognizable (and my favorite! I’ve always liked hearing it. But I made a reel/meme insinuating that already), and I still commemorate Martineck sticking to their dialogue voices for entire chapters.
It definitely feels like Symes-Smith’s writing is improving? I noticed a little less repetition and/or therapy-speak this time around, which was lovely! I feel like this is the first time since (a couple scenes of) book 1 where I’ve felt that the characters felt like kids, too?? It was interesting seeing each POV finally start to grasp the weight of their responsibilities, and I especially liked to see Callie and Willow’s interactions in Callie’s POV, which, when they led to arguments, they were intense in a way I thought was understandable for young people in as much stress as they were. (However, I’m not sure if I agreed with the final takeaway for… the major argument… even if up until that point both of them had valid points?! That’s a rant for another day. I think I just don’t agree with the author’s takes???)
Elowen and Edwyn’s POV chapters, though…
Edwyn’s earned character growth was relieving to read about, if anything. (And I loved the audiobook touches for the conversation he had with Peter behind his magic shield! They actually slightly muffled Peter’s talking!!) (And! Regarding Peter, the shift in their dynamic was interesting! I really liked it.) Admittedly, that came after a LOT of circling around, but I thought his internal dilemma made sense for his circumstances. God! I was kind of dreading reading his chapters, they got very graphic and very sad, very quickly. I was just as surprised (and probably numb) as he was, when things actually started looking up.
Elowen’s POV, on the other hand, is even more isolated than Edwyn’s. Despite the stakes being equally high, I found her chapters to be a little repetitive, due to other characters besides Alis not being allowed as much on-page time with her. (Also, there was a cycle of each chapter forcing her to reconsider the truth, and being actively manipulated.) I’m getting used to Alis being a villain, though. She’s evil, in a way that’s very much abusive, but kind of fun to dissect: It’s interesting reading this series with the perspective of a young adult, and being able to catch the subtle ways she disrespects and belittles Elowen and the Roost. (Basically, all the red flags Elowen either doesn’t catch, or doesn’t think she should pay much attention to.) Unfortunately—this is why I wanted to talk about both POVs in the same point earlier, I also noticed a trend of the writing trying to draw as many parallels between Elowen and Edwyn’s storylines as possible, and it oftentimes hindered the prose, or the depth of their thoughts. A lot of emotional beats would be repeated, and while I suppose it can be argued that it made the differing outcomes of their conflicts be more impactful, it felt very repetitive. It got to the point where I’d start to get genuinely mad hearing any iteration of “It’s my choice”, a motif that, to my disdain, is crucial to this book. (Along with the different ways it can be used: actual empowerment, or an affirmation.) (Basically, “It’s my choice” is in book 3 like how “But they’re the enemy!” was in book 2.)
Callie’s POV objectively had the most going on, but I can’t say it’s my favorite, because outside of their friendship/dynamic with Willow, I’m not really liking them as a protagonist as much??? Yes, they’re lovably snarky, I admire how insistent they are about fighting to live as themself, and they have a big heart when it comes to their family. But their impulsivity is absolutely excruciating, especially in the context of the incredibly dangerous mission them and Willow are sent out on! They made some OUTSTANDINGLY terrible decisions!! And, yes, some of them are addressed, but not with the full gravity in which they should be😭 Dear. Lord
(But also, I feel terrible criticizing them! Their stress and their grief is understandable, and if I were a middle schooler tasked with the same thing, I would be equally stupid, if not moreso. Ugh.)
I feel like of the four POVs, Willow’s was my favorite?? I liked finally being in his head. The messages around monarchy are a little Funky but I do really enjoy being involved in the drama and complicated feelings surrounding the Helston royal bloodline. Sylvie was an interesting character too, I hope to know her more outside of plot convenience one day. (And, preferably, without the repetitive messaging around Willow growing into himself! The gender allegory got a little muddied with the monarchy and legalities sometimes, in my opinion???)
Anyhow! Maybe I’ll add more thoughts in the morning, maybe I won’t. But you have no idea how stoked I am that there’s FINALLY a reason to kill Peran, I’VE BEEN WAITING THE WHOLE SERIES FOR THIS #sicSatinontoLordPeran2025