Pros: 1st person, dual POV - Dante & Bella, that then adds in a third as well, Harley
Cons: A lot of repetitive thoughts. Too much inner dialogue and not enough action. And I just couldn't bring myself to really care about the characters. Plus, they go on and on about how Bella is so pure and good, yet her personality doesnt match that at all.
Also, they have cameras everywhere to watch her, yet never see what Gus is doing? And even after she's in love with them both and trusts Harley especially as a friend, she doesnt tell him about what he's doing? Or, ya know, scream for them when it happens since they're right in the same house. Then at one point he says if she tells he'll kill Dante and Harley but yet.. Dante is the king of the city and they've been running things for years and the 2 of them would easily take on 1 of him. So it makes no sense. And then the "twist" that Gus has a fraternal twin brother. Yet she couldnt tell they looked alike? Way too ridiculous.This didn't work for me.